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I dislike the storylines in this show very much! Very very much! It's not because they don't have anything original or new, it's because they are boring. When I see Vivaah I rarely see sparks of creativity. I love dramas. I love typical triangle drama. I love marriages based on compromise better than marriages based on 1st love. Drama is drama and it sets my pulse racing. That can explain why I want to write and have my own soap someday.
I write now. I like writing. I write the same love stories. I have written my own version of cindrella with new twist. To be more honest I did it when I read another version of cindrella that was different than the original. The story is mine. I wrote it my own way. I wrote what I felt and what I saw. My characters were my own and they were different. There is no such thing as being original. Nothing in this world is original. What matters is you tell the story in your own beautiful way. You make the audiences get lost in your world. Make them forget their own world. And Vivaah is failing miserably! I swear today felt like a torture. Vivaah has potential. They have a decent cast. From villains to heroine, no one sucks at acting. They seem like they have decent funding. With so many parties and trishna's outfits. They can do so much better!!
lets see what we have::
We had 2 lovers separated:: A painful process. I have seen it before this . I don't mind seeing it again. But I was yawning through out Raj and trish's process. I really was! If it's a heartbreak then let our heart break for a while. Let us see how much trishna was suffering and How Raj tried to hold it together but ocassionally broke down. Let me see the love. Let me cry! What's the point of breaking hearts if it doesn't break our heart. I love writing heartbreaking stories. When your audience cries even a single tear you know you got something. I have cried over my tv couple's pain before. trish and Raj didn;t manage to toucha single cord in my heart.
We had a marriage based on one sided love:: This is repetitive but we could've seen such a beautiful story. We could've seen Trishna slowly falling for Rajdeep. But what did we get sex on the 1st night! (yay!) Everytime Rajdeep did something we should've seen trishna be awed or falling for him a little by little but most of the time we got trishna's strict face! Then he saves her and get hurt in the process. That's what made her fall in love with him. Did the story have to be sooo boring? Couldn't they show atleast 3 episodes on Trishna helping Rajdeep get better and sharing cute moments. Eyelocks?? And then trishna can realize she loves him?? They waste so much time one Trivedi's lame crap they could'nt give trishna and Raj few more scenes?
We had a marriage that is based on compromise:: Let us feel it. Let us see Raj really didn't forget about helping Tanya. If you are making him a prince who saved a victim then let us see Tanya have few more nightmares where Raj helps her. Let Tanya get stronger. Let her bloom! Let us feel ok Tanya really needed this and Raj really did rescue her. Don't let us see ok they are married now he is letting her live her own life except for the absolute time of need.
Raghav Sujata:: From any angle Raghav does not look like a hero I would fall in love with. He is young and Rich! Where is the hot part?? Where is the charm?? look at Shakti! The guy is an uncle for god sake and I get all happy when he comes on screen. Rajdeep might be ugly but I can still tell he is a rich guy. Raghav comes and I am like yawn. Where did this office accountant come from. Their conflict was so boring. They could've made it look so much nicer. tell the same exact story in a different way. Let Sujata reject Raghav, let Raghav try and win her back. The true rich, dashing ,every girl's dream man way. If I wanted to see average boring guys I will not turn to tv. Even my real life has more exciting male presence than this!
Every day this show goes on 30 mins and end of the it I wonder what did I just see? NOTHING!
Cricket
