FF- Dehko Magar Pyaar Se..Part8 pg12(12/30)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Dehko Magar Pyaar se...
Dehko Magar Pyaar se...
Hey...For all of those who know me I'm back!! and if you
dont know me I'm Nikita...and this is my 6th FF on Kasamh
Se forum...and Even though School is killing me...I had an
idea for a FF, and just had to write it down...and I couldnt
wait to share it with you..Please tell me how it was...
Updates will follow shortly!!>..
AND PLEASE SUUGEST TITLES...this is all I could come up
with..

?What! An a..arranged marriage?? Pia shrieked

?Sh?? Bani hushed her

?Whats his name?? Pia continued

??Jai, Jai Walia? Bani said, as she uncrumpled a piece of paper from under her fist.

?Bani! Can you believe yourself you don?t even know this guys name!? Pia shouted

?Pia?Don?t make a scene? Bani got up, and Pia followed

?Me making a scene!? Pia said shutting the car door behind her

?Take it home driver? Bani said, not paying attention to Pia

?Bani! You?re not listening? Pia shouted

?I don?t want to hear what you want to say!!? Bani retorted

The car came to a halt, and the driver left the car

?Bani wait? Pia held Bani by her wrist

?What? Bani asked

?What are you doing this? Getting married to someone you don?t know!? And haven?t met??

?Pia, Mom ne?

?What mom ne? Aunty ne kehdiya aur tumne manliya??

Bani stormed out of the car, and Pia followed her into the house

?Where are you going Bani!!? Pia screamed

?Arre ithna shor kyun?? Kiran asked

?Namaste Aunty? Pia said calming down

?Namaste beta? Kiran responded ? Toh Bani ne tujhe shaddi ke bare mein bathadiya hoga na??

?Haan!! And I?m really upset aunty?

?Par kyun beta?? kiran asked

Bani cut in between ? That?s what I don?t understand

Pia and Bani sat down while Kiran when to fetch some snacks.

Pia started ?We used to talk about love Bani, true love! But your doing something that no one does! An arranged marriage, WHY!!?

?Because I love ma!, and you know shes done so much for me!? Bani said, almost tearing

Pia got up, and circled the coffee table ?Oh Come on Bani! So what, voh tumhare real mom nahi hai?but would your real mom would have done that?? ?Answer me!!?

Kiran heard this and said ? Haan Pia, main Bani ki asli ma nahi hoon?

Bani interrupted ? Hum iss bare main koi baath nahi karengeh! Please!?

?Nahi beta, agar tujhe assa Lagtha hai ki main tujhpar koi zabardasti kar rahein hoon, toh main riste ke liye mana kardoongi?Mujhe toh bus asa laga ki agar Yashoda aaj hote tho use bhi yeh rista pasand atha? Kiran said, heading for the telephone

?Nahi mom! Mujhe iss riste se koi problem nahi hai? Bani said Firmly

?I?m sorry Badi ma, I was just?I mean?araanged marriage?I?m sorry I just don?t beilve in this?and Bani mere behean jasi hai, toh? Pia said apologetically

?Nahi koi baath nahi Pia beta, maine bus voi kiya jo mujhe sahi laga, Jai bouth acha ladka hai, Aur Bani use aur usske parivaar se milne unke farmhouse jarahe hai? Kiran said hugging Pia

?really Badi ma! Main bhi chaloongi!? Pia said excited

?Haan , haan tere bina toh koi plan bantha bhi nahi hai!? Kiran said ? Tum dono aaj sham ko hi nakaljana! Teek hai??

?Ji aunty, liken agar Bani ko voh ladka pasand nahi ayya toh?? Pia asked

?Toh shaddi cancel? Kiran said, looking at Bani

?Ab teek hai na!? Kiran asked Pia

?A Okay!?

XX

Precap

Pia-I hate this family photo! Issme 5 hot guys hain! Ab inmein se ! Jai Walia kyon hai??

Bani-(laughing)-Mujhe kya pata??

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aNsHu_tEjPaL thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and welcome back!!!

love the concept so far so can't wait to see where it goes

really excited abt the precap...........lolll is JW even in the pic?? tht would be mad funny to see them trying to figure out from the pic and JW is not even there..lollll


rocking beginning!! pls cont soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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rocking start!!
missed ur ff's!!
nice concept..
5 hot guys??
wonder who all they are..
waiting to read more
do continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey....welcome back!!!
great start....
cant wait to read more....
plzz cont.soon...
princess14 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey nice start...looking forward to this...
plz continue soon..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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gr88 start
plz cont soon
wow bani goin for arranged marriage and pia is against it
this seems interesting
plzzzzz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lol.... great concept niks... continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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first welcum bac...
i liked the first part a lot...
par chota tha...😭
story looks very interestin...
do continue soon...😊

kitkat

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey welcome back
first part was very good
but y short update???????
5 hot guys seems interesting
wonder who ll they are
bani ready for arranged marriage
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesum part but very shortšŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘

nice concept.......sounds very interesting
eagerly waiting for next part😊

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