One shot by Salma
before I say anything Salma that was amazing!!! 1st of all I have to give it to you for picking the song. It's perfect for Sara. Now that I think about it and I listened to the song again and I think it was meant for Sara then the original couple! You totally set the right atmosphere by starting with the song. It's also seems like it's a song Hero might sing for the girl of his dream if he knew hindi! (lol) Kudos. It's such a great song!! So mwah jaan! good job with the one shot. I scrolled down and read yours before anyones as you had my fav song!! Good job!! I felt every second of it.
By Naina
Devil what else can I expect from you?? you even know yourself you were meant to be the devil. Mwah but amazing job though. I love how you always make it so fun!! I really loved it! Your writing is just so...YOU!! It's funny and a little naughty. It's awesome. I loved Sallu and Max in it!!!
By Baji
did I miss something? was there a memo between us sister I ended up missing? because everyone used a song but me. Now what to say about yours...haila twins? I always wanted one kid. But how tochy and lovely story. Loved Naina and Xiah. (xiah more the devil less! joking loved them both!) I loved how nicely you used all the characters baji! High five!
By Sara
awww thank you!!I loved it loved it!! I loved it that you kept it short! And thanks for the carnival. I always wished a guy would take me to a carnival! Chalo real life nahi sahi story mein mil gayi! Thank you love!