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Posted: 17 years ago
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One shot by Salma

before I say anything Salma that was amazing!!! 1st of all I have to give it to you for picking the song. It's perfect for Sara. Now that I think about it and I listened to the song again and I think it was meant for Sara then the original couple! You totally set the right atmosphere by starting with the song. It's also seems like it's a song Hero might sing for the girl of his dream if he knew hindi! (lol) Kudos. It's such a great song!! So mwah jaan! good job with the one shot. I scrolled down and read yours before anyones as you had my fav song!! Good job!! I felt every second of it.

By Naina

Devil what else can I expect from you?? you even know yourself you were meant to be the devil. Mwah but amazing job though. I love how you always make it so fun!! I really loved it! Your writing is just so...YOU!! It's funny and a little naughty. It's awesome. I loved Sallu and Max in it!!!

By Baji

did I miss something? was there a memo between us sister I ended up missing? because everyone used a song but me. Now what to say about yours...haila twins? I always wanted one kid. But how tochy and lovely story. Loved Naina and Xiah. (xiah more the devil less! joking loved them both!) I loved how nicely you used all the characters baji! High five!

By Sara

awww thank you!!I loved it loved it!! I loved it that you kept it short! And thanks for the carnival. I always wished a guy would take me to a carnival! Chalo real life nahi sahi story mein mil gayi! Thank you love!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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No one commented on mine and naina's suprise😭
KC294 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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My first teenage love affair- Naina you did an excellent job... although as always you make yourself the villian in the story... the use of emotion in the story was brill. hats off to you.

Yunho's (UN)Arranged Marriage- Jouty and sara you guys did a great job.... never once in the story did i feel that the authors had changed.... you guys really complimented each other... i loved your idea jouty although it would never happen in real life... it still made me realise that this happens to some girls out there....
Sara you did a brill job with the cliff hanger... i would love to know how they got together but thats another story altogether. jouty your next couple is.... check ur PM's


Carnival Love- Sara that was the sweetest story i have read... the shortest but the sweetest..... amazing it was staright forward. i loved the ending.... wouldn't have expected them to be acting. brilliant work

Khwabon ki- now what a story that was amazing... i loved it.... brilliant Salma... i never usually know what to write coz everybody else writes loads.... so i'll just say this.... (no offence to my other sisters) Salma i loved your story the best.... the one you wrote....😳.... ok i am ready for the belans to start flying my way....


I have Pmed you guys.... we are starting fresh again okies....



Edited by KC294 - 17 years ago
suganain thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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No one commented on Baji and my surprise😭

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Posted: 17 years ago
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eek My teeth the pain!!
well reading the oneshots just made me relief more ..my pain reduced !!
brilliant!!
naina dee i loved the oneshot..
sho sweet!...i mean it ..making you're self the villian hehe!
i loved the way you wrote it especially simple:D
and the song was really nice wid great lyrics thanx!

baji i totally love your story..i wondered how u are going to end it..
beautiful.. 3 rascals huh lol can just imagine it..
i love the way you described everything and wrote it from nani bens point of view! brilliant! you managed to describe more than eight people with making too many twists or messing it up! hatts off to ya!!

jouty dee n sara dee arranged marriage..
hmm the one shot definitly placed a smile on my face..
cute! funny all in one ..i loved it... on a bike wah! and mix up lol!
brilliant i enjoyed it very much!


now sara dee the bike oneshot is funny ,must say it was definitly surprising!
how u worte it is brill..and the concept :D
i loved the way non of it was real but then again it was,,


brilliant work all:D


Edited by princez-preciou - 17 years ago

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