Pri-Sanyo Reunion Script (Part 8) - Page 2

whoa!!!!just tooooooo goooooooooooooooooooooood 👏 ...pls pls pls pls post soooooooooon 😊

Hi Pipyu

The script is really good. I am liking how sanyo is getting so jealous at payal and prithvi talking. 😆

Am looking forward to the next part. 😊

Originally posted by: saswatisett

hey PPiyu good work.........

I liked the way u describe the situation.....ur descriptions are really nice 😃 .......

the script is nice & naughty at the same place which I enjoy the most 😊 ........

Just one thing the story is still in the same place i mean to say just move a little bit & add some adventure also…………like who are those unknown people .............who destroys the bridge …………some more actions so that on sequence Sanyo comes to know the truth………not like an explanation from prithvi 😉 ……..

But ur script is awesome 😛 ……….thanks for this 👏

Thanks a lot........saswatisett😃

I know that gadi abhi wahi aatki hai, but i guess this feeling is due to gaps of 1+days, in posting parts.

Anyways....... ........ Thanks again for suggestions, ll definitely think on it.

AWESOME,FANTASTIC,MINDBLOWING.......i cudn't find words for this part
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I was rolling on flour when i start reading tht all funny parts of payal who tried to get anger to sanyo & most when Arjun said ki 'Prithvi aur Payal me kuch.......' it remind me my school day's when me and my all freinds tried to tease some body frm some one else tht time was so funn😍
i wonder how cud be sanyo's expressions if this happen in the serial 😍 😍
I think RT & other cast shud this reunion script's all parts and sagar's also so de will get some good idea's of dragging story nicely
pls post nxt pat soon we all waiting 😛 😛

wowww another brilliant part!!!!! ur too damn good!! loved the water fight scene..hahahah prithvi throwing water on sanyo by mistake..payal and pundir both throwing water at arjun..sanyo not letting payal throw water on prithvi and doing it herself!!

and looooool the scene where the ladies think prithvi and sanyo are husband and wife..that was an awesome part!!!!

and the ending is fantastic!! cant w8 till the next part!!!

the best thing i lyk abt ur fanfics is that its really easy to imagine the current cast while reading it..because all the situations and dialogues suit the current characters of PRC perfectly!!

Originally posted by: ppiyu

Thanks a lot........saswatisett😃

I know that gadi abhi wahi aatki hai, but i guess this feeling is due to gaps of 1+days, in posting parts.

Anyways....... ........ Thanks again for suggestions, ll definitely think on it.

Thanks dear for considering my suggestion…….😊

I just forgot to mention in the previous post that the dialogues of those three women was really brilliant😆……."Pati-Patni😳"……."cute jodi😛"……..I was just dreaming RT & MC playing with this script…….😉

& prithvi was blushing so nicely😳………..😳

Keep it up👏………u always reminds me of JKR………😊

wow fantastic 👏
simply superb 👏

loved every part of it😳

keep it up
waiting for next part 😃

tooooo good loved it reaallyy cool do connttt soon 👏

Ppiyu..gr8 work again! 👏

The best part is that everything is cuming ot naturally..be it Sanyo's reactions or Prithvi's confusion, excitement!

Really love the character Payal...now the reunion has actually begun..thanks to Payal, Arjun n Pundir!

Depiction of scenes is good. Also, the situations in which u put Prithvi n Sanyo have been described well! Kep it up! I especially liked the scene when Sanyo falls in Prithvi's arms...n the use of words in that scene.

Plz tell us soon abt those spies...n include some adventure too in the nxt part.

awwwwwwww wat an update dear gud keep it up