16th September Written Update

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Recap: Shubh and Aastha unearth a skeleton as they push the plough


Today :
  • Everyone turns to stare at Dadaji who is looking away.

  • Rana arrives at the spot just then and Sumer rushes to him instantly.

  • Sumer : Rana ji , something very shocking has occured..just now chhoti bahurani has unearthed a skeleton as she was pushing the plough to take the soil for the idol....I tell you , stop this puja now

  • Rana rushes to the spot where the skeleton is lying and asks Sumer : But how did this come here?The haveli's fields and buildings are your responsibility , how did this get here under your care?

  • Sumer starts grovelling and says : Rana ji , I know nothing....

  • Rana tells him : I have believed in you and left all the responsibility to you..and this is your payment for my belief?

  • Sumer : I swear to you Rana ji , I do not know who has buried this skeleton here...and when I come to know , if I dont behead him and lay his head at Bade-Hukum-saa's feet (Dadaji's feet) , my name wont be Sumer Singh!

  • Rana goes to Dadaji and says : Bade Hukum saa , such a shocking event is not shubh ....(of course not , Shubh is Aastha's husband you fool) please stop this puja

  • Dadaji : This puja has been organised after so many years ....difficulties are bound to arise...but when the hurdle is related to a crime , let the law and the police take care of it...the police will inspect this skeleton ...the kuldevi's puja will be performed....definitely it shall be performed

  • Dadaji tells Aastha : We have to go to the haveli....Aastha beta , pick up the soil

  • Shubh is irritated and Aastha responds yes

  • Aastha picks up the soil and places it on the thali brought to her by a server

  • Rana: Bade Hukum -saa , you leave for the haveli to start the puja...I'll go with Sumer to the police

  • They leave and Rana comes and stares at the skeleton while Sumer says "Sau Mata Ki..."

  • At the haveli , the family arrives and Dadaji tells Aastha to go and make a circle , carrying the soil , aroung the tank

  • Aastha completes the circle and returns and then she places the soil outside the kuldevi's puja room , where the puja is to be performed.

  • As everybody does a namaskar , Shubh is remembering how Rana warned him about the threat to Aastha's life cause of the puja

  • Dadaji unlocks the room in which the idol has been placed and he enters inside

  • All are shocked to see that the idol is missing from the pedestal.

  • Dadaji (shocked) : Aascharya....amazing...the kuldevi's idol is missing!

  • Sulochana : O god , what 's happening...first the skeleton and now this...

  • Female Servant : This is a very big abshagun...I think the kuldevi is not pleased with the puja and that's why she has hidden herself from view

  • Saksham : But Dadaji , how can this happen? Nobody comes to this haveli so how it have been stolen?

  • Shubh (angry) : Enough...since this puja started , problems have been following one after the other...when we know very well that the haveli and the puja are cursed, why are we intent upon doing it? I think its better we stop it right now

  • All the family members (except our dutiful Aastha ) agree with him , while she looks sadly at Sonu

  • Dadaji : Once this puja has started , we cannot stop it...but without the idol , performing it is impossible! So we cannot do this puja

  • All the family members heave sighs of relief but Sulochana and Aastha look sadly at Sonu

  • Later,Aastha is looking at Sonu who is playing with a toy car , with tears in her eyes

  • Shubh comes and sits next to her and holds her by the arm and says : Aastha , I know what you're going through...I know you want to perform this puja for Sonu's sake with a true heart..but when the idol has disappeared , what can we do about it ?

  • Aastha wipes her tears , : No Shubh , the idol hasnt disappeared of its own , its been made to disappear---

  • She breaks off as she notices the curtain moving as if someone is hiding behind it

  • Aastha suddenly changes the topic , keeping her voice casual she says " Yes Shubh , this haveli is so beautiful , no ? The paintings , the decorations...

  • Aastha moves to the curtain and draws out the eavesdropper - its that servant girl with whom Saksham was so impressed.

  • Aastha : What were you listening to ?

  • Girl : I...brought water for both of you

  • Shubh : We dont need water now...jab hume zaroorat hogi , hum aapse keh denge....ab aap please jaiye

  • Girl : Ji Kunwar-saa

  • Shubh continues : Aastha why would anyone move the idol?

  • Aastha: I dont know but its clearly someone who doesnt want this puja to be performed...

  • S: But who would want to stop you?

  • Aastha insists that someone has stolen the idol and she asks Shubh to remember what he saw in the room

  • Aastha says that soil was scattered all over the room but not on the pedestal..which means that the idol was removed recently...she remembers the shadow she saw that night

  • Aastha tells Shubh that he should remain with Sonu for a while , when she went to find the answers to some questions

  • Aastha leaves and as she's walking through the corridors, someone is removing some cards , pictures of Aastha and some other papers from a writing table and hiding two diaries behind a statue

  • Aastha pushes open the doors of a finely decorated room (probably Rana's)

  • She enters and is shocked to see at least 3-4 photos of her , from her college days , hung on the wall

  • She picks up some papers lying on the table and reads : Meri pyaari Aastha , I know that I didnt come to meet you in the college canteen today..when I came to know from your friend that you've started liking someone else (kyaaaaaaaaaa? Shubh ke pehle bhi koi tha!!! gandi ladki!!!) , I had no option but to stop myself....I know you waited for me that day and since that day , I didnt come in front of you.....I still----love you as much as I did in the college days...(Aastha is surprised)...and I want you to become my----(Aastha is shocked)

  • She hears a noise and quickly replaces the papers and moves to stand behind a screen.

  • As she is looking through it , someone appears from behind and is about to place a hand on her shoulder (its probably Rana , as far as I could see from the dress)
End---

No precap today...I forgot to watch it.....sorry!!!
There is something wrong with the servants...they know something , about what I dunno , but they definitely do know!!!






Edited by Shubh_Aastha - 16 years ago


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Posted: 16 years ago
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what????????????????????

astha liked someone before shubh????????????????........ NOOOOOOOOOOOOO

and yes i think these servants knoiw something, and thanx for the update!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Yeah.....I think so.........cause this letter seems to be old....

Rana may have come to know that Aastha 's in love with Shubh from one of her friends , supposing he kept in contact with that friend

But then , how would he not go to meet her in the college canteen???
After all , Aastha was working in the Ranawat Group then so it somehow doesnt seem that the guy Rana is talking abt is Shubh....

but then again , he says ...I love you today as much as I did before...which makes it seem he was writing this letter recently.....

urrghh....they should fire the dialogue writer!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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why why why why??????????????

i wonder if aastha's going to feel something, i mean its a college friend, plus this stupid rana guy likes her too, OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
i wonder how shubh will feel if he comes to know his own cuzin likes his bhbhi, yukkkk🤢
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i wonder why someone wouldnt want astha to do the pooja

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