Ankahee.......FF...Pt 16, pg 30, 18 July - Page 31

Sorry for the long absence and thanks for the explanation on guys (re: my comment on the very expressive Robbie). I know this response is coming really late but I haven't had a chance to respond yet and I do think I owe you an explanation…

So here it goes (Disclaimer – I am not very good at explanation, so this might come a bit choppy)- I am glad that you have guy friends who can actually verbalize their thoughts… Lucky you!!! All the men in my life are really hopeless when it comes to stringing together statements with heartfelt emotion – their way of dealing with emotion is hitting the gym. I guess I am so used to the broody silent types that talkative guys just don't seem real anymore. Actually it's not just guys, it's pretty much everyone around me. For example, I cannot envision my mom and I having a conversation like Devika/Robbie.

Back to Ankahee, it's finally light at the end of the tunnel... While I was reading I almost imagined that Robbie would run into a bridegroom's party who's come to see Kasturi and it would rain on his parade. I am so glad you stayed awake from that clich.

A hug and a slipped statement on how important Kasturi is to Robbie – you surely are very miserly with romance. Just kidding.

So when are you going to post the next part?

Originally posted by: storyteller

Dearestttttttt JWWWWW ....

🤗

Do you know ......just do you know how much I have waited to see this name after I updated....Jaao mein tumse katti hun.😭..............😆..........Love you dearestttttttttt for taking the time off given your personal commitments........🤗

wow what an emotionally charged part dear.... tusi great ho...👏....

first of all sindhs and JWWW .. tum nay pukara aur hum chalay aaye 🤗

Aapke bina hum kaise khush ho sakte hain Fariji😳....kyun mera Sindhoooo babuuuu 🤗thik kaha naa😳😳😳

coming to the part.... absolutely loved it ....

Sachhi..😃........this feels great....coz this was one part that had the facet of mothers in mind..........

loved the mother and son interaction,..... they share such a strong relationship.... loved how beautifully u have written a woman's emotion... it just flows through.... I especially loved the part where she says that she has everything.. all happiness yet something is lacking and then robbie comes into her life... 👏..... and the first time he smiles and he recognizes her... fantastic my dear... how u have captured a mother's feeling

Spot on Fariiiiiii😳............those were the lines which even I felt emotional about when I wrote them.......Parents are our first contact with the world....And jo bhi ho...at least based on my life's experiences.....what they do for us ....I dont think anyone can do 😳😳.

I think that for a parent the first sight ...first touch.....first time a child recognises them ....for a mother the first ehaas inside her.......must be so emphatic and touching😳.....Am glad that came through😳

and robbie's heart break.. loved it dear... I could feel his pain.... u made me cry .....

Awwwwwwww ...sowwwieeeeeeee 😳😳😳....will make up to both Robbiekins and you for it........😃😃😃.....uska becharey ka yeh haal hain...ki samjhaye kisey aur samjhe kaun

and the part where robbie and kasturi hug each other and the way she apologizes.... that whole scene is simply marvelous.... loved it dear.....

Am really glad you liked it.......😳😳😳.....haan kabhi kabhi ankahee hi sab keh deti hain😳😳.......Fariiiii this was at a time when both are battling their personal battles..........can't find the right words so this.....arz kiya hai......

"Jisko aan aur imaan bana kar rakha

Jisko ek umr seene mein sambhale rakha

Teri har aanh .....har saans ....ko naa samajhta kaise😳"

tell me what you think of it Fariiii😳

kash is robbie's strength.... she believes in his success and it will be heart wrenching when she goes into a coma ... JWWWWWWWWWWWW... kuch kar....

😆....dont worry sab thik ho jayega........promise😳😳

but am soo soo glad that robbie has got a positive response from rushan kapoor... FANTASTIC...

Yesss....der aaye par durust aaye😳😳😳

thuderous applause from Fari.... muah muah ....

Muahhhhhhhhhh...I am a bit senti now😭....so just this... 🤗

and these pics.... the way u have used them in ur story.. lugta hay terray FF kay dialogues hee bol rahay hay... its an art my dear to be able to use pics from another story and make them seem as if they were made for ur story... a talent my dear... ur a wiz...👍🏼

Seriouly tumhe aisa laga....thats great😃😃....waise apne Karnoo ka dose to hona hi chahiye😆😆😆...and even Shubbu was looking really really pretty in those pics😳😳😳

FAri

Fariiiiiiiiii........love you love you love you🤗....for taking the precious time off to read......thanks is a very minor word for having you around and your love, guidance and encouragement......🤗......

Love

JW

Originally posted by: anjudiva

Sorry for the long absence

Heyy Anjuuu😃

no worries ......once again welcome back🤗 🤗🤗

and thanks for the explanation on guys (re: my comment on the very expressive Robbie). I know this response is coming really late but I haven?t had a chance to respond yet and I do think I owe you an explanation?

So here it goes (Disclaimer ? I am not very good at explanation, so this might come a bit choppy)-

Thats very nice of you😳...But seriously yaar....no need for it ...I explained the scene coz it was in relation to the FF so I need to explain the rationale going through in my mind as to why I wrote the story this way😳😳

I am glad that you have guy friends who can actually verbalize their thoughts? Lucky you!!! All the men in my life are really hopeless when it comes to stringing together statements with heartfelt emotion ? their way of dealing with emotion is hitting the gym. I guess I am so used to the broody silent types that talkative guys just don?t seem real anymore. Actually it?s not just guys, it?s pretty much everyone around me. For example, I cannot envision my mom and I having a conversation like Devika/Robbie.

Hmmmn....what can I say ......Reading about these experiences makes me feel grateful and thankful to God for the people around me....

That said we are all different personalities....and each of us manifests our personality, including our care and affection in different ways.....so I guess each of us ultimately finds our own emotional support😳😳😳

Back to Ankahee, it?s finally light at the end of the tunnel...

Well one of the tunnel😆😆😆

While I was reading I almost imagined that Robbie would run into a bridegroom?s party who?s come to see Kasturi and it would rain on his parade. I am so glad you stayed awake from that clich?/FONT>

Thats ok......people often anticipate run of the mill things😆😆😆

A hug and a slipped statement on how important Kasturi is to Robbie ? you surely are very miserly with romance. Just kidding.

😆...Well one cannot expect Sex and the City theme from a Bidaaii creative team🤣

But seriously...jokes apart ......I think Ankahee is quite romantic😳...at least thats how i feel when I write it😳😳.....and this is still early days 😳😳.....

Perhaps my definition of romance is different.....but one does not always need to kiss, get physical or whatever ...at opportunities ...to convey romance...😳....Even if we take pure film fiction ...then I think that the films My Fair Lady, Casablanca, Jerry Maguire or even Hindi films such as ...Chotii si Baat, Baaton Baaton Mein, Tere Ghar ke Saame (Dev Anand version)...or even the recent Jab We Met ...were very romantic films😳😳 despite not showing much obvious physical or verbal proclamations of love😳.

Aur waise bhi Anjuu, ....I can speak confidently only about myself......In the given moment in the FF, ...if I were Robbie or Kasturi in Ankahee....and after some depressing days, today I was super upset about a career defeat or a personal trauma, with my mind going through tremendous stress.....and was seeking comfort from a friend whom I love but whom I have not yet professed anything to😳😳.....then, thinking physical would not be the thing on my mind.😳😳

So when are you going to post the next part?

At the earliest😃

Thanks so much Anjuu for taking the time to read🤗🤗🤗.....much appreciated.😃

JW