ok here it goes....lol
Firstly i realli like the name of ure fan fic ..really nice....
Part 1- the decription is so nice and clear....👏brilliant
Part 2- Veer soo naughty, he made faces at ananya..and made the poor bby cry aww blesh her...aww DV are onli four shoo cute.......i no Veer will fall in love with anaya soon........Dv convo was shoo cute😳aww blesh dem cute ones...lol
Part3- lol veer naughty never listening to anyone...just wanting to do what he wants..lol even dharam sat on the horse..and it started to ride😆😆and then veer balming the sainiks..badmaash khabhi nai sudhrengea..and veer starting to tease dharam. Nisha di..kya meh ek papi deh sakthi hu baby veer ko😆 please😳
part 4- aww..i liked the convo between...DV shoo sweet n cute...Dv grown up n now more msti will be cumin up from Veer😆looking forward to taht😳
part 5 - lol veer with his attidude''vikram tum bhool gayeh kya keh tum veer seh baathe kar rahe ho''😆 vikram bach keh rehna veer seh...
i loved the dialogue''jub taak dv saath hai jeet unki hi hongi👏..so now DV are onli 10 or 11..right😳??veer pulling dharams leg😆..n yup finalli home😛
part 6- Agni soo sweet and caring..abay ananya..is too....cute..i can just about imagine her...and veer only caring for food...Bby veer reminds me of..krishna..😛😳...veer n annaya small nok jokss..veer babu..ananya ki adat dar lo...kahin esa na ho..keh shaadhi usi keh saath kar ni parege..yha phir pyaar use ho jayeh😉..lool veer eating all the kheer...i love kheer...aww veer ananya h8 each other now..dw they will soon start to love each other..Dharam ananya..bro sis love soo cute..😛
Part7- veer calling anaya musibaat....hai bhagwan yeh larka khabhi nai sudhrenga😆😆..veer yeh musibaat hi tumhari jeevan saathi ban neh wali he...ananya bhi kam nai hai. Ananya is sho sharp she heard everything veer sed...veer age age dehko hota hai kya....i no pyaar ho jayeh ga😉veer and ananya are jus soo funnii..and the cutest cuple eva
Part 8 was just to good.
Part 9- Veer and anaya scnence soo cute....veer is just to much sumtymes...buh ananya is just to cute...bless her...haha.....annaya trapped veer.....😆😆😆naughty girl.....shes dam cute..can i adopt her..lol😆😃...veer bhi kam nai hai..he thre mud in her mouth....😆
Part 10- Aww Dharam and ananya scene so cute...raksha bandhan....i shud hve know veer would hve such a long list.....woow..all that food....😲😆😆..and kheer from onli his mami..
oooo yeh maine kya para..veer and ananya sweet moment....im w8ting for that..u better update soon di😉😆
btw dnt mind me asking how old are DV and Ananya ryt now...???
also jaldi Dharam ki dulhan ko intro karna😳..i meen oppsite him lol..
w8tin for ure update..
ok i think i better go..i rote enuf n alot..lol😳
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