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Posted: 16 years ago
Ellloooo...Nisha dii..m here....i had sed i will post my Looonnnng comment be4 i go to skl buh i was tied up really badly in my shcedule....that i couldnt😭pls forgive me for that.

ok here it goes....lol

Firstly i realli like the name of ure fan fic ..really nice....

Part 1- the decription is so nice and clear....👏brilliant
Part 2- Veer soo naughty, he made faces at ananya..and made the poor bby cry aww blesh her...aww DV are onli four shoo cute.......i no Veer will fall in love with anaya soon........Dv convo was shoo cute😳aww blesh dem cute ones...lol
Part3- lol veer naughty never listening to anyone...just wanting to do what he wants..lol even dharam sat on the horse..and it started to ride😆😆and then veer balming the sainiks..badmaash khabhi nai sudhrengea..and veer starting to tease dharam. Nisha di..kya meh ek papi deh sakthi hu baby veer ko😆 please😳
part 4- aww..i liked the convo between...DV shoo sweet n cute...Dv grown up n now more msti will be cumin up from Veer😆looking forward to taht😳
part 5 - lol veer with his attidude''vikram tum bhool gayeh kya keh tum veer seh baathe kar rahe ho''😆 vikram bach keh rehna veer seh...
i loved the dialogue''jub taak dv saath hai jeet unki hi hongi👏..so now DV are onli 10 or 11..right😳??veer pulling dharams leg😆..n yup finalli home😛
part 6- Agni soo sweet and caring..abay ananya..is too....cute..i can just about imagine her...and veer only caring for food...Bby veer reminds me of..krishna..😛😳...veer n annaya small nok jokss..veer babu..ananya ki adat dar lo...kahin esa na ho..keh shaadhi usi keh saath kar ni parege..yha phir pyaar use ho jayeh😉..lool veer eating all the kheer...i love kheer...aww veer ananya h8 each other now..dw they will soon start to love each other..Dharam ananya..bro sis love soo cute..😛
Part7- veer calling anaya musibaat....hai bhagwan yeh larka khabhi nai sudhrenga😆😆..veer yeh musibaat hi tumhari jeevan saathi ban neh wali he...ananya bhi kam nai hai. Ananya is sho sharp she heard everything veer sed...veer age age dehko hota hai kya....i no pyaar ho jayeh ga😉veer and ananya are jus soo funnii..and the cutest cuple eva

Part 8 was just to good.

Part 9- Veer and anaya scnence soo cute....veer is just to much sumtymes...buh ananya is just to cute...bless her...haha.....annaya trapped veer.....😆😆😆naughty girl.....shes dam cute..can i adopt her..lol😆😃...veer bhi kam nai hai..he thre mud in her mouth....😆

Part 10- Aww Dharam and ananya scene so cute...raksha bandhan....i shud hve know veer would hve such a long list.....woow..all that food....😲😆😆..and kheer from onli his mami..

oooo yeh maine kya para..veer and ananya sweet moment....im w8ting for that..u better update soon di😉😆

btw dnt mind me asking how old are DV and Ananya ryt now...???

also jaldi Dharam ki dulhan ko intro karna😳..i meen oppsite him lol..
w8tin for ure update..


ok i think i better go..i rote enuf n alot..lol😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
woooooow tht was a greatt parrtt
updatee soon plzz
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: heaven princess

Ellloooo...Nisha dii..m here....i had sed i will post my Looonnnng comment be4 i go to skl buh i was tied up really badly in my shcedule....that i couldnt😭pls forgive me for that. oh dear u dont need to apologise .....

ok here it goes....lol hmm

Firstly i realli like the name of ure fan fic ..really nice....thanku

Part 1- the decription is so nice and clear....👏brilliant thnx
Part 2- Veer soo naughty, yup he made faces at ananya..[😆]and made the poor bby cry aww blesh her...aww DV are onli four shoo cute.......i no Veer will fall in love with anaya soon atlast to yahi hoga akhir made for eachother hain😆........Dv convo was shoo cute😳aww blesh dem cute ones...lol

Part3- lol veer naughty never listening to anyone yes...just wanting to do what he wants..lol even dharam sat on the horse[😆 kya karen sagat ka asar😆]..and it started to ride😆😆and then veer balming the sainiks..badmaash khabhi nai sudhrengea kabhi nahi..and veer starting to tease dharam. Nisha di..kya meh ek papi deh sakthi hu baby veer ko😆 please😳 go ahead dear iske liye meri permision ki koi zarurat nahi hai!!😳😆
😆part 4- aww..i liked the convo between...DV shoo sweet n cute...Dv grown up n now more msti will be cumin up from Veer😆looking forward to taht😳 yes am working on that hope u will like it
part 5 - lol veer with his attidude''vikram tum bhool gayeh kya keh tum veer seh baathe kar rahe ho''😆 vikram bach keh rehna veer seh...
i loved the dialogue''jub taak dv saath hai jeet unki hi hongi👏..so now DV are onli
10 or 11..right😳?? no they r 9yrs old veer pulling dharams leg😆..n yup finalli home😛 haan
part 6- Agni soo sweet and caring..abay ananya..is too....cute..i can just about imagine her wow!! ...and veer only caring for food[😆]...Bby veer reminds me of..krishna..😛😳 oh wow!!...veer n annaya small nok jokss..veer babu..ananya ki adat dar lo...kahin esa na ho..keh shaadhi usi keh saath kar ni parege..yha phir pyaar use ho jayeh😉 haan yahi hoga..lool veer eating all the kheer ya😆...i love kheer oye u to!!!...aww veer ananya h8 each other now..dw they will soon start to love each other..Dharam ananya..bro sis love soo cute..😛 yes
Part7- veer calling anaya musibaat....hai bhagwan yeh larka khabhi nai sudhrenga😆😆kabhi nahi..veer yeh musibaat hi tumhari jeevan saathi ban neh wali he[haan😆]...ananya bhi kam nai hai. Ananya is sho sharp she heard everything veer sed😉...veer age age dehko hota hai kya....i no pyaar ho jayeh ga😉veer and ananya are jus soo funnii..and the cutest cuple eva yup

Part 8 was just to good. thanku

Part 9- Veer and anaya scnence soo cute....veer is just to much sumtymes ya😆...buh ananya is just to cute...bless her...haha.....annaya trapped veer.....😆😆😆naughty girl [😆😆].....shes dam cute..can i adopt her..lol😆😃omg!!! pehle veer ko kiss aur ab ananya ko adopt ye tumhe ho kya gaya hai...kiss to teek tha par adopt?? tum khud choti ho to tum adopt kaise karogi??? any way agar karna chalo to karlo i dont object par dharam se ijazat mangna mujhse nahi😆 ...veer bhi kam nai hai..he thre mud in her mouth....😆[shararti kahinka😆]

Part 10- Aww Dharam and ananya scene so cute...raksha bandhan [yaa]....i shud hve know veer would hve such a long list[😆].....woow..all that food....😲😆😆..and kheer from onli his mami..yup

oooo yeh maine kya para..veer and ananya sweet moment....im w8ting for that..u better update soon di😉😆 yes am trying to complete it...and will update it as soon as posible..😳

btw dnt mind me asking how old are DV and Ananya ryt now...???
dv are 9yr old ananya is 5yr old and agni is 15yrs old now😳
also jaldi Dharam ki dulhan ko intro karna😳..i meen oppsite him lol..ok but i can intro her only after more 2 parts😕
w8tin for ure update.. will do it sure asap😳


ok i think i better go..i rote enuf n alot..lol😳 am soo glad that u read all the parts ,liked them and also comented on them very patiently.....thanku soo much🤗


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well dear thanx once again 4 being so sweet 🤗🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago

thank u🤗🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetest girl

woooooow tht was a greatt parrtt

updatee soon plzz


thanku🤗
will update it asap🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sugarpie_26

vry gud nisha,jus luvd it!!


thank u dear
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: starpisces123


well dear thanx once again 4 being so sweet 🤗🤗..np di
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Posted: 16 years ago
superrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr tusi tu great ho jii🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
reserved.....
well i'll comment later dear....
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: abira

superrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr tusi tu great ho jii🤗


thanks dear😛
im glad that u liked it🤗

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