~*~LOVE IN PRISON~*~[AR]{Part-1-Page1}

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Hey Guys,
Here is my new FF on AR(KaSh) and RM but mostly about AR.
CHARACTERS:
ARMAAN MALIK: he is a 23 year old handsom and dashing looking young man, he is very smart and intaligent he is a software engeneer and has a very well paid job(in short he is rich) he has a older brother named Rahul Malik who is a convict now and in NY state Prison.
RIDHIMA GUPTA:she is 23 year old Docter but she does not work in the hospital. she is a docter in NY State prison. her fater is Shashnk Gupta a very well respected sanater of the state.
Rahul Malik: he is a 25 year old divored father. his son'd name is Harsh. He was married to Mushkan Chada but the marrige did not seem to work out for her so they got divosed and rahul got the custody for his son but when he was arested for murdering the brother of the NY state mayore muskan took care of hears.
PROMO:
we see a handsome looking young man walking in to the bank. He is wering a very well fited suit, which was making him look more eligant. The young boy walkes up to the chasher of the bank and pull out a gun. then he fire's two shots in the air.
Then we see few police cares rushing thru the trafic n comming to the bank. 2 of police officer break in to the bank from back. they very care full reach to the area were the gunman was n then they catch Him and put a hancaugh on him the other police officer's comes in and chekes arounf if any one was injured or not then they took the gunman to the police car.
We see that the gun man was smilling very widly that we can see a dimple on his chick. he was smilling like he had achive somthing..............................................
Note:
Guys i will only contineu this FF if i got fair amount of coments or critisisames if i dont have any reder i will not continew this FF.
Thnxs a lot 4 reading this n plz plz cretisize or coment.

PART-1

We see a huge ground which is closed by the fance all arounf it and there are two light post and two gurd are also standing there with their gun. Yes it is a prison NY State Prison.

Then we see lots of inmated r coming out of the huge building. Then we see the same gunman but now he was wering inmatese clothes with was an oeange short slive shirt and pant. we can see that the gun man has a tatoo covering his both hand.

Then we see a slim indian guy. his has a grey eyes are staring at the gun man and his lages r maing their way toward the gun man

"ARMAAN"[the gunman turns to the slim indian guy]

"Rahul Bhai"says the gun man n they both hug ther eyes r cloed n there r some teares making their way to the chikes

this lil scean was not escap by the warden of this prison named William Buchanan, who is a very kind man n thinks that there is always a reason for ppl to become a criminal, he also thinks that punishing is not the only way to chang the ppl.

back to armaan n rahul

R: armaan what r u doing here? how did u got here?

A: bhai i m here to get u out of here!!!!!!

then we see that group of inmates r making their way to Armaan n rahul

back ot A&Ra

Ra: r u crazy armaan have u lost ur maind ther is now way out for me n y r u runing ur own life n carier 4 me u know that anji is trying to re open the case n in this while if some thing went wrong then they deffenatly will think that i m the murderar here

A: no bhai i cant wait til tthat re open this case n u dont know that they r trying their level best to make sure tha this case does not open n..............

befor armaan cus fenish his sentanse some1 from behind hit him on his head n ther is a lot of blood coming out of his head rahul try t osame him but those inmates bit him too n just then some gurd comes out n take them away n two other gurds comes in and take armaan n rahul some wher but where??????????????????????

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Posted: 17 years ago
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ooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!1....this is gonna b sumthing different n unusual!...OMG Nruti u should continue asap....ven is the next upd8 cuming!...would luv 2 read the first part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...thanks 4 the PM and continue PMing me!...

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Nimisha
Edited by dmglovernimisha - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey hun i love ur concept really good cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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This is kinda like Prison Break where the guys goes into jail and his brother deliberately does sumfiin to get into prison to help his brother get out but maybe in dis story they dont break out of prison.
I really like the concept PM me when part 1 is up

x...Aneesa...x
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wow! Got Me Hooked! The Title Caught my Attention First. 😆😆😉
Unique And Killer Promo Darling. Continue Soon.
& if you can , can u please pm me 😳😳
Love Asthu🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwsome one too gud plz continue it soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey sweet pea (hpe can call u that)...
Awesum start..sumfin new....rilli catchy title read the title n got interested..U've got me hooked....em totally in for u'r FF...plzzzzz cont asap...plzzzzzz rilli wanna read more of it....
Do PM me wheneva u update (if possible)....
Do cont asap...wanna see love bloomin n ofcourse wanna know the exact story anddd.....well in short em hooked up to tis FF...Mah best wishes for the success of tis FF....
Love ya.....t.cccccc
-Ur's Ever Madhu😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great intro
Cheers for the pm ...im in👍🏼
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey great intro... reminds me of prison break... please pm me when part 1 is up... thanks
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i loved d intro! awsum start! i wnder wat is gona happen nxt! so armaan got in jail or sumfnk! kash love stry is gona start in prison! awsum! really intrestin and unusal! plz do cntd asap dear and plz do pm me whenevere u hve updated! i ill b w8in 4 ure pm as i cnt w8 2 read d 1st prt! cntd sn! asap!

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