Tuj Se Naraaz - Fan-Fic - 10-10-08 - P5-Pg 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Any of you guys missing Manthan aka Amit Tandon? But I am! So I thought of writing a mini fan-fic about Manthan and Kt - that I wanted to share with you guys. And I hope you guys will like it. Also this fan-fic is kinda based on the current track with few little things changed. For example, Manthan, is forced to marry Kt after Eklavya's death. Also Lakshya's wife Vaidehi is trying to make Kt's life a living hell by getting her married to Manthan because Manthan hates her so he will make her (meaning Kt) life a living-hell.

Friends... that was few things about the concept. And I would - also like to share few things about Manthan and Kt... ... ...

Main Leads: Manthan Virani (who is forced to marry Kt after Eklavya's death) and Krishnatulsi (who is also forced to marry Manthan after Eklavya's death and also Baa wants to see Kt's forehead again filled with red color. So both Manthan and Kt agree to marry each other only for Baa.

Also, here are few pictures of them together... ... ...

And! Now here is the promo video I have made in short time for you guys and I hope you guys will enjoy this video and this fan-fic.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OBgWGOFSgxo[/YOUTUBE]

Apnki Pyari

Kinjal

PS: Please forgive me - if I hurted anyone or made few mistakes. And please do let me know if I made mistake anywhere and I need at least two or more relies to continue on further. šŸ˜›



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Posted: 16 years ago
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CoooolšŸ‘

I always thot KT to be with Manthan if not Eku...and Manthan is my fav. from the 3rd generation😭 I want him back😭 But atlewast reading ur fanfic can make be feel better.
And please add some scenes of Manthan with Karan, Nandini, Tanya, Bhoomi as well, not only with KT but with his family as well....esp i want to see a totally devastated Manthan, he will be shattered as Tanya, his mom has left, and KT will help him...😃
BTW i cant watch videos....so describe the promo in "words"šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†šŸ˜³
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow what a great idea yaar!
I can't wait for more, this sounds very interesting
I miss Manthan😭
Do update soon!😃
Yuks
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aww yesh finally a manthan fic...been missing him shooo much!! hehe it'll be cute to read vaidehi's plan fail and manthan falling for kt and vise virsa!!
continue soon please!
:]
rinki
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: tvfan1401

It sounds good.......well done...



Thanks šŸ˜›

Apnki Pyari
Kinjal
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: stranger@mirror

CoooolšŸ‘

I always thot KT to be with Manthan if not Eku...and Manthan is my fav. from the 3rd generation😭 I want him back😭 But atlewast reading ur fanfic can make be feel better. Awe... ... ... thank you so much! And I hope I won't disappoint you... ... ...

And please add some scenes of Manthan with Karan, Nandini, Tanya, Bhoomi as well, not only with KT but with his family as well....esp i want to see a totally devastated Manthan, he will be shattered as Tanya, his mom has left, and KT will help him...😃 Oh! Don't worry about that! There are pently of scenes with Manthan - Bhoomi or Karan or Nandani even with Tanya šŸ˜‰
BTW i cant watch videos....so describe the promo in "words"šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†šŸ˜³



Apnki Pyari
Kinjal
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Should I take your complete as a yes or no?

Apnki Pyari
Kinjal

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: queenyuks

Wow what a great idea yaar! Thanks

I can't wait for more, this sounds very interesting Thanks and I hope you will like it as much as you are excited... ... ... šŸ˜›
I miss Manthan😭 Me too!
Do update soon!😃
Yuks



Thanks a-lot

Apnki Pyari
Kinjal
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~Rinki~

aww yesh finally a manthan fic...been missing him shooo much!! hehe it'll be cute to read vaidehi's plan fail and manthan falling for kt and vise virsa!!

continue soon please!
:]
rinki



Thanks

And I promise I want disappoint you or anyone else... šŸ˜›

Apnki Pyari
Kinjal
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part One

Hardly three months have been past since Eklavya's death, but nobody knows if it was murder or a-accident according to officer Dharam, who is Vaidehi's friend and more like her brother.

Even Baa's condition is getting worst day by day after Eklavya's death and also she wants to see Kt in red color not in white color.

One day, Karan was yelling at Manthan for his behavior toward Krishnatulsi.

Manthan: Dad instead of yelling at me for no reason why don't you yell at Kt who is responsible for Bhai's death…

Karan gets more frustrated and tells Manthan to listen to him clearly "It's not Kt's fault that Eklavya isn't no-more in-fact its nobody's fault" also adds on "understood, Manthan"

Manthan leaves from there with anger and heads toward his friend's house while Kt sat in her room – looking at Eklavya's picture and starts talking to it… … "Even though I never loved you but you had full right on me because you were my husband and today when I started loving you. You left me behind in this world alone" Kt cries out her pain and Lakshya could take it anymore so he left from there with tears.

Another day past by and Lakshya couldn't bare Kt's empty forehead and leaves again from there with tears and this time he when to Lord Krishna's temple and cried his pain out.

At the same time, Vaidehi remembers how Karan Chachu was yelling at Manthan for his bad behavior toward Krishnatulsi.

Lakshya loose control on himself and starts yelling at lord Krishna for making Kt's life so empty and painful… … …

On the, another hand Vaidehi goes into Karan and Nandani's room.

Lakshya continues to yell at Thakuji while Vaidehi is trying to convince Karan and Nandani – about getting Manthan and Kt married so Baa's condition will get better and also Lakshya can move on in life.

Nandani: Vaidehi, we understand your concern, but nothing is in our hand.

Vaidehi: But Nandani Chachi

Lakshya continues yelling at Thakuji while Karan explains why they can't get Manthan and Kt married.

Vaidehi: But Chachu

Karan: Sorry beta (and leaves from his room with Nandani placing her hand on top of Vaidehi's head afterwards Vaidehi also leaves from there).

Two weeks later…

Vaidehi hasn't given up yet! She tried to convince everyone in shantiniketen to get Manthan and Kt married so Baa's condition will get better. Since she wants to see Kt's forehead again filled with red color.

For the first time Mihir agreed with Vaidehi but Tulsi, Karan, Nandani, Ganga, and Sahil disagreed.

After a-long… … … discuss Mihir made up his mind and announced that "both Kt and Manthan have to get married within few days even if they like it or not"

(During the announcement Kt came down the stair to check on what's going on and why people are shouting at the same time Manthan and Lakshya entered shantiniketen).

And all three of them looked shock after hearing Mihir dadu's announcement.

If there is any mistake than forgive me... ... ... šŸ˜›

Apnki Pyari

Kinjal


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