other side of dmg....pg1 updated..do read...

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Posted: 16 years ago
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ok tis is ma first fanfic characters r same only ridz changes
r;ridz
a;ammy
this the other side of dmg ma fanfic.....
all the characters r same only ridz changes
ridz is 19 years n is from a very middle class family n shashank is her dad's best friend n ammy's dad family doc so r n a are best friends
1 day r's dad expires n every1 cums home n gives sympathy n all r crying n crying n later a cums
r;a aisa kyun hota hain ki jab koi kho jaata hain toh waapas nahin aata....
a;kyunki yeh nature ka rule hain.....
r;aisa rle
a;hmmmm
a; acha ab tum rona band karo pls mein tumhe aise nahin dekh sakta....
r;a hum kaise best friends hain kabhi bohot jhagarte hain aur kabhi friends
a;yahi toh humare friendship ki speciality hain idiot
r;oh acha
a;ab tum pls khaana kha lo
r;tume bhi subah se kuch nahin khaaya na?
a;kaise khata tumne khaaya
r;acha pehle tum khaayo
a;tum
r;tum
a;tum
r;tum
n they start fighting
a;hum jhagar kyun rahe hain saath mein khaate hain ok/
r;k
n then he makes her go to sleep
nexxt morn r gets up n sees tht a is talking to the police 4 the body n the r's mom cums
armaan beta
a;arey aunt aap peri pona
jeete raho
beta tum toh jaante ho r ki college ki chutiyaan chal rahi hain aur humare ghar mein itni financial crisis hain aur ab iska dad bhi chal gaye toh aur probs hogayi tum khaali usse ek job dila do.....
a;anty main koshish karronga
n then the were drinking coffee n suddenly a remembers
a;aunty
haan beta
a;aunty ek job hain
konsi
a;humare sanjeevani mein docs ki assisstant aap r se baat kare toh main...ill recommend
guys pls reply n then ill continue
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dhruviarmaanfan thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey really nice do continue
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy nice ff
doo contt
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Posted: 16 years ago
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n then her mom asks her...n she says but after cremation n a says ok no prob n cremation was next day....n every1 was crying including r....
a;come on r rona band karo isse tumhare dad ki adma ko shanti nahin milegi
r;rona toh aayega na a hum jisse pyar karte hain agar woh humse door chala jaaye toh?
a;rona aata hai r lekin humhe apne aap ko sambhana parta...haina???
r;sach keh rahe ho a...acha tum kehte toh mein nahin roti.....
a;thts like my girl
n she wiped her tears n then the pandit started ram naam stya hain...
n she felt like crying again but she controlled herself n then later when they were having lunch
a;r tumhe yaad hain na abhi tumhe mere saath chalna hai hospital doc keerti se milne
r;haan mujhe yaad hai hum abhi chalenge
a;tumhara khana hogaya toh jaakar taeeyaar hojaayo
r;ok
a;aunty dont worry ill make sure ki r ko yeh job mile....
thanx beta
n then r comes out all ready to go
r;chale a??
a;ok chalo...chalte hain aunty
best of luck beta
r;thanx mom!
n then they go down oh haan i forgot to tell u guys two things tht r has 2 elder sisters n r is a bit healthy n has spots on her face so shes not really beautiful....
a;unka har question answer kar paogi na..?
r;haan yaar dont worry main tumhe niraash nahin karoongi
a;thanx...
r;dosti ka usool hain my dear no sry no thanku...
a;ok baba i get ur point...
n they reach sanjeevani
a.tum yahaan betho main dr.keerti ko bata kar aata hoon...
r;ok
a to dr.keerti...
a; good evening dr.keerti
dr;good evening dr.armaan....aap apni uss frend ko lekar aaye...?
a;yes ma'am....
dr;acha bulaayee unhe.....
n he goes out n calls her...
a;r tumhe doc keerti ne bolaaya hai....
r;a mujhe bohot dar lag raha...
a;dont worry sab kuch theek hojaayega...n best of luck....
r;thanku....
n she goes in.....
now guys pls temee how ull liked it....
dhruviarmaanfan thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice part update next part soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey sweety nice FF
but u might wanna put this FF in the fan fictions section

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