Plea to an Unborn Child - Poem

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Plea to an Unborn Child

Cocooned in your mother's womb

Baby, you are safe for now

We do not know the future though

So you need to be strong some how

For danger may await you baby

Since you're blest with lovely parents

Who'll sacrifice themselves for each other

With no thought to the consequence

Right now your beautiful mother

Is going through tremendous stress

Worrying over her hubby's well being

She's set to free him from distress

In the process she may face

The harshness of prison life

You need to be her support, Babe

Don't cave in to all this strife

Hold on, dear Baby, no matter what

Keep growing in body and mind

Till the time is right for your entry

Into this big world unkind

Once out, you can teach a thing or two

To your duffer father and mother.

Show them you're as vital to them

As they are to each other.

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Juneli thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Opti thx for the lovely poem...it is so touching😭
i just hope and pray that michi baby remains safe....i loved this last stanza:
Once out, you can teach a thing or two

To your duffer father and mother.

Show them you're as vital to them

As they are to each other.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Really touching poem... Opti had sad tears ..... i really hope and pray nothing will happen to michi child

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Opti...wonderful poem, esp love these two stanza..very touching.

In the process she may face

The harshness of prison life

You need to be her support, Babe

Don't cave in to all this strife

Hold on, dear Baby, no matter what

Keep growing in body and mind

Till the time is right for your entry

Into this big world unkind

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Opti very beautiful and touching poem......................do not kill me guys cannot but fear for the baby keeping in mind BT track record with unborns (i am still reeling under the after effects of the torture called kasam se)...........................i know this is different and hope and pray that child comes into this world as the unbreakable bond and symbol of michi love...............................Amen.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG if I have known that this post was going to make me cry then I won't to have come in 😭 😭I guess what I'm trying to say is thank u very much this post really touch my heart.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Lovely poem opti 👏👏👏

Once out, you can teach a thing or two

To your duffer father and mother.😆😆



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Posted: 17 years ago
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very nice poem opti, just loved it👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Its beautiful ,i really loved each and every word of the poem.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lovely poem yaar ilike taht your duffer parents its so true😆

Edited by suzf - 17 years ago

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