FF:Beautiful love p-18/pg33(Last-Epilouge)-13/11

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hey guys i dont know how well i m with it but i m also plannin on writin a small fanfic and if u guys truely feel i should write then plz comment on it
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p18-pg33(Last+Epilouge)

INDER SHAH(father of armaan ,alaap and prachi shah)
Armaan Shah(the eldest shah son who loved his family alot)
Alaap Shah(the carefree one)
Prachi Shah(the youngest and only daughter of INDER SHAH)
Milind Mishra(the boy who makes every girls heart melt ,rich spoil brat)
Neev Shergill(goodlookin boy who truely loves ayesha)
Ayesha Oberoi(the girl who is every boys dream date)

IN my ff no one is related to each other but yes neev and prachi are good friends all of them come from good rich family they all are in college (i shall give all of their description wen i will continue with my ff )

The beautiful sea were their to witness the best moment of her life here she was in a complete white dress which made her look the most beautiful being in the universe she had a big bunch of red flowers in her one hand and she was being carried by the man she had loved the most it wasnt far when this man of her dream was going to get hold of her and make her his it was then and their he was going to kiss her and make her his and only his ,when she realized that she couldnt kiss him because she saw her best friend neev in front of her she felt he was trying to tell her something but she couldnt hear him she got all shock when she realized that he was coming closer and closer to her .She was just going to scream when she felt the sea was washing her face hard with its wave then and their she realized it was not the sea wave but it was the water Neev had poured on her just to wake her up from her beautiful dream........Neev always did this to her whenever she was about to kiss her dream man,neev would just wake her up and now it had been a routine and she was not suprised at all to see him she grumbled for a while lookin at neev who was laughing out loud seeing his best friend all wet in her bed.Neev came closer to her he put his arm around her and told her softly,If u stay here like this you will miss him and i will miss my fairy so please get up and get ready before we are all late,GOT IT .She slowly got up and went and saw herself in the mirror she wasnt at all beautiful well thats what she thought about herself because she was like nothing compared to those girl in the college she was simple , shy and above all she always hid her beautiful eyes with big spectacles she was different she was good with her studies and that was the one thing she was proud of and so was her whole family she was very good at watever she did which made her the favourite of her father.She was a complete daddys girl.
Her father Mr Inder Shah was her idol she was always looking forward to talk to him know interesting fact from him he always had something wise to say and talk about.She loved him alot and equally adored her mother too.She was a simple housewife whose life was only around her family.She had two big brother Armaan Shah and Alaap Shah.They both were different from each other Alaap who was always known for his casonova image.Alaap was nothing like his father his father believed in hardwork and Alaap believed in wasting money and time.But prachi was proud of her another brother Armaan Shah who was just like a father figure to her he understood prachi more than anyone in this world.And he loved her more then anyone prachi was always his small shy innocent sister whom he felt needed to be protected by the evil world and he protect her from everything that would hurt her or cause her trouble.
At a young age Armaan had been able to be a buisness icon.And established himself and that was the reason why prachi respected him even more.

Neev Shergill was the third most important person in prachi's life after her father and brother.Neev and his family had shifted next to their house when she was 6 years old she doesnt even remember when the big fat bully who use to tease her every now and then had become a part of her life she doesnt remember when she had become so fond of him and when she had started callin him her best friend .The only think she knows is that, whenever she would turn back to look at anyone when she was in deep trouble she could close her eyes and one person that could come to her rescue would be neev her best friend she still could describe her relation with neev she knew some felt that they were more than friends but only they knew that they loved someone else.Someone who had they heart and mind occupied.Neev Shergill was nothing like he was when he first came to live next to prachis house he was very fat then but as time pass by he had become good looking he was not someone who was good with girls though he had a charming smile and good look the only girl he interacted was prachi and the only girl he loved was always in his dream he dare not talk to her for he was scared that she might just turn him down he was satisfied at just looking at from far as it was not only him whose heart was stolen by her it was the whole college who was after her .After all she was one and only AYESHA OBEROI.....
Ayesha was the daughter of a very big buisness man she was very pretty, smart,outgoing,she was a complete diva .She was the eyecandy for every boy and for all other girl she was the reason of jealousy .She didnt care about anyone she was pretty and the reason what made her feel so proud of herself was she had been winning the MISS COLLEGE QUEEN all this year and no one was able to beat her till date.But the only thing that bothered her was MILIND MISHRA he was the only guy who had never given her any attention.And she did not like it she wanted his attention and she did all she could to get success over him.
MILIND MISHRA was a heart throb of the college he was the reason many girls came to college he was kool , hot and over all he had something no one else had his attitude a complete carefree attitude he was simply great when it came in getting a beautiful girl out on a date he was very good at what he did especially when it came to girls he was just too good .He was rich and goodlooking and he was just too hot that girls couldnt resist him afterall he had been MR COLLEGE KING for a long time too.Milind Mishra was the most friendly guy ever known to anyone. He might be a spoil rich brat but he did have a friendly nature that made him even more famous all over the college.

So what do u guys think this is my first attempt so please forgive my mistake please give ur honest comment so that it would help me with my further writing
Edited by bidnai - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey great start, love the character intro..please continue soon.

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thank u and please continue soon.
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Oh this is really interesting please continue soon I like this Armaan guy hope you have a nice girl for him in store.
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hey guys thanks a ton i shall continue as soon as possible i m quite glad u guys like it .
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PART 2-COLLEGE TIME

Prachi was all ready to leave for college when she heard her mom calling her for breakfast.She knew her daughter well and was also well aware of her habit that is why she had her daughters breakfast all set but prachi was in no mood for breakfast all she cared was going to college because she knew if she does leave she wont be able to see her dream man as soon as she tried to leave she saw a tall figure in front of her,she was a bit taken aback she knew exactly who it was,Armaan bhaiya she exclaimed she was just looking at him she knew she did not need to be scared of him cause the last thing Armaan would do was scold her he loved her like anything and he had no heart to scold her at all but when it came about her health and her eating habit he required no excuse so he looked at prachi and prachi knew exactly what those eyes wanted her to do so before even uttering a word she went to the table their was a bit of silence in the table suddenly their was aloud noise from behind and all knew who it was Alaap Shah he came from behind and started teasing prachi she was vey angry and it was clearly visible in her face but she said nothing.
After teasing prachi for a while alaap kept quite as he saw his father lookind at him and somewhere he knew he was scared of his father he was about to leave when his mother told him to sit for breakfast.He replied he was not hungry(mujha bukh nahi hai ma) inder looked at with a stern look and said ya how will he be hungry must have eaten in the party from where he is coming back (isa bukh kyu lagega kha k aaya hoga usi party sa ja woh raat bar tha)Alaap was going to tell him something when he saw his elder brother give him a glance .Armaan knew that his father was not happy with alaap's behaviour but he also knew that his father was a heart patient so he didnt want his father screaming or shouting he was scared he didnt want his father to have any health problem.So he looked at alaap and told him to go to his room and rest.It had always been like this whenever their was any problem in the house Armaan had always taken care of it.
Prachi was late for college she knew neev was extremely angry with her so she ran as fast as she could and their he was angry like she had imagined him to be he was looking at her like given a chance he would just eat her up she looked at him with a puppy face and when she gave those look to him he couldnt help but forgive her he told her to stop making those face and asked her to sit and told her that they were already very late.As soon as they arrived in college neev looked at prachi asked her to go to class and he will come back in a minute to join her ,she knew exactly where neev was going because every boy in the college would be their waiting for the one and only beauty Ayesha. Ayesha was their at last .Neev took a look at her and without saying anything he left ,it had been his routine he use to take a glance of her and just go away because deep down he felt that ayesha was a dream for him which he couldnt turn into reality
He went back to his class where in the corner of the room sat a silent girl who was only noticed by him she was quitely sitting their when neev saw her he knew she was unhappy about something he looked at her and said hasnt he come(abhi tak nahi aaya)she was about to say something when she felt her heart was racing faster faster than the racing car she saw him ,their he was the heart throb of every girll he came with his style making everyone know about his arrival their was alot of screaming and shouting when he arrived.He came inside he was waving and talking to all .But the only person he didnt seem to notice was her.Was it his fault she had always been the quite one and not only him infact no one seem to notice her.
The professor had entered the class, he was giving lecture on society awarness no one seemed interested all were on their own dream world the only person who was listening to the professor was prachi she was a good student and always very attentive in class.But for the first time she seemed lost because for the first time he had actually given her the look she was shock,suprise she just couldnt believe that he had looked at her she felt a cold vibration within herself was she dreaming she even pinched her self and forgetting that she was in her class she loudly exclaimed OOUCHHHH........... everyone turn to look at her now she was nervous she had never seen so many eyes gazing at her she was numb for a moment but when the professor called her in concern she replied that she was fine.Soon the lecture was over she was happy that it was over because she had been quite embarassed about her action.She was about to leave when she heard someone calling her it was not neev she was sure of that and this was the voice she couldnt forget it was him ,he was calling her she couldnt believe it she felt the world had turn upside down but she calmed herself and started to walk as if she hadnt heard anyone or anything.
He called her again listen you listen miss listen prachiiiiii, she came to halt did she just heard him calling her name was this for real all sort of emotion started coming into her she couldnt believe herself .Was this for real she kept asking herself but it was when she turned and saw him waving at her she came closer to her and every step he took to come near to her she felt her heart beat go even more faster she was dumbstruck he was finally in front of her, i was calling you didnt you hear me he looked at prachi for a moment and he knew very well that she was nervous it wasnt that milind hadnt notice this girl infact he had noticed her from day one but never approached her because he knew she was not her type and never would be.Hey he said to her again just to wake her up from her daydream suddenly prachi was out of her day dream and she asked in gentle innocent voice what did he want(kya chaiya aapko)milind was a bit shock when he heard the gentleness in her voice he had come across many girls in his life but not someone like her,her voice was extremly sweet.Then looking at her he asked her if she could be kind enough to help him with his studies he told her that he knew she was very good in her studies and if she helped then even he could improve in his studies.Prachi now had goosebumps all over her body not only he knew her name he also knew she was good in studies she had never expected to hear this from his mouth but he had ,he just had told her about it .She was no way going to say no to his proposal so she readily agreed without even thinking what was she getting herself into.He thanked her, shook her hand and left now this was the limit she couldnt take it anymore she looked at those hand which he shook.She was so eager to share it to someone,someone with whom she shared everything of her life she took out her cell and called her immediately and told her the whole story of what had just happen to her from another side a voice replied that she was very happy for her and told her to take care .She kept the phone in her bag when she saw neev and she hugged him tight and also told him everything that had happen with her just a moment ago he was happy seeing her so happy he hadnt seen her so happy.......... he was happy knowing that she was happy and with this thought he got his hand around her went with her, teasing her bit and laughing with her.
I HOPE U GUYS WILL ENJOY THIS ONE AS WELL
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Posted: 16 years ago
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just read ur ff and i really like it! continue soon please
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oh gr8 parts
plz cont soon
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HEY GUYS I HOPE U WILL LIKE MY FF SORRY THEY HAB BEEN PLENTY MISTAKES BUT DO FORGIVE ME FOR THOSE MISTAKE
Edited by bidnai - 16 years ago
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😊HOPE U ENJOY THIS.THOUGH ITS KINDA SHORT I WILL TRY UPDATING AS SOON AS POSSIBLE PLZ DO GIVE UR FEEDBACK.

Edited by bidnai - 16 years ago

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