Aware Mastane Dewaane Remix- New Fan Fic

Guys I'm writing a fan-fic for Remix for the 1st time hope you all like it and pls comment on it if whether I sould continue or not

Ashi is walking and bumps into UV

Ashi- Tum dekhe nahi chal sakte

UV- Agar main yeh tumko kaho toh

Ashi- Duh-uh main bolongi ke tum ande ho and she pretends to act blind

Uv- Ashi

Ashi- Chila hoon mat

UV- U kno Ashi tum kaun hoti mujhe kehna wali

Ashi- Dekho tumhare paas koi brain nahi toh main basically tumheri doctor hoon, actually main tumhari pychatrist so tell me Uvraj Dev tum aaj kese feel kar rahe ho bina brain ke saath feeling his head and knocks on it, lagta hai kuch bhi nahi

UV- Ashi !!!!!!

Ashi- Man bheri nahin mujhe mera naam pata hai so stop shouting

Raveer comes in

Ashi- Hey Thakur

UV- Hey Ranveer Doud

Ranveer- Hi banna hi Ashi, apne Tia koi kahin dekha

Ashi- Nahi, Timbo koi mainie poora din nahi dekha, Thank God

Ranveer- Thanx and he goes to Tia's room and knocks on the door

Ranveer- Tia, Pri , Meher

Tia- Ranveer Tia aur angels makeup lagarahi hai tum bat main aah sakte ho

Ranveer- Nahi Tia aap please baar pe agi

Tia- Ranveer, Tia ko dus minute main canteen main milna ok

Ranveer- Teekh hai Tia, aap jaldi ajana hum apka wait karege ok

Ashi overhears this

and she is close to the door

Tia- Tia apne angels ko facial karke jaagi aur phir wapaas ake tumhare face ka nikalegi aur makeup aur moistureizer laga gi ok

Meher- Ok Tia bt jaldi aana

Tia- Tia apne angels ko kabhi itna dher se nahi rene degi aur Tia yun ayi aur yun wapaas ayi ok

Pri- Ok Tia

And they to the lip thing and Tia puts some beauty thing on their faces as soon as Tia gets out Ashi walks in the room

Ashi gets some itching powder and some lotion tht makes u get rashes

She comes in

Meher- Tia tum jaldi agayi

Ashi soesn't k no wht to do she tries to copy Tia's voice and says - MmHmm

Ashi applies some itching powder and then some rash lotion and then she takes out a fake stick on p***le and puts it on their forhead and paints their nails black and goes away

*Guys this is my 1st fan-fic 4 Remix pls tell me how it was and whether I shuld continue or not😊

very nice one yaar.....plz continue 👏 👏 👏

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continue fast!! 😃

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Ashi smiles and tiptoes and goes off

Pri- Meher mujhe bukh lagi hai

Meher- Pri.... Waise Pri yeh cream or powder kitna acha feel karta hai

Pri- Haan

Tia comes in

Tia- Angels.. Tia is bak, pata hai Tia and Ranveer had a nice lunch

Pri- Lunch

Tia- Yes babe lunch, but onli healthy u kno Tia can't have alot of calories phir Tia ke health bhi karab hojayega

Tia goes to bihut of them

Tia- Babes yeh smell kaha see araha hai

Meher- Tume jo lotion aur powder lagaya uska

Tia- Nahin Angel, yeh Tia ka lotion ya pwder nahi hai, Tia ka saab powder aur lotion scented hota hai

Meher- Nahi Tia yeh tumhara hai jo tumne lagaya tha

Tia- Nahi, Tia neh koilotion aur powder nahin lagaya, Tia Ranveer ke saath thi

Pri- Kya, iska matlab kisi aur neh hum pe lagaya

Pri starts itching

Tia- Pri itch mat karo isme skin karab hojata hai

Pri- Nahi Tia bohut itch horaha hai

Meher and Pri start itching alot and start getting red marks

Just then Tia finds itching lotion and powder she holds it and looks at it

Tia- Yeh Tia ka nahi hai, ur yeh angels ka nahin iska matlab...

Jisne bhi yeh Tia ke angels ke saath kiya uska bohut boora hone wala hai

Tia- Chalo Angels apne canteen main jhake kisi ko poochte hai

Ashi is in the canteen talking to MP and both are laughing abt it

Tia overhears this conversation and she and the angels are shocked

Tia- Anvesha Bannerjee

Ashi- Timbo, dekha MP, Timbo ka naam liya aur musibat hazir

Tia gives a glare at Ashi

Ashi- Ahhhh muhe bachoo, dekho Timbo guse main hai aur uske darane wale aankein muhe kill kardegi bachoo

Tia- Anvesha! Yeh tumne jo Tia ke angels ke saath kiya woh acha nahi tha, Tia iske liye tumhe punish karegi

Ashi- Timbo mainie kya kiya

Meher and Pri start itching

Tia- Yeh Yeh tumne kiya tumne itching powder aur lotion Tia ke angels pe lagaye, aur phir tum bolti ho mainie kya kiya, Tia, Tia tumhe nahi choregi

And both start shouting at each other and mesing up each others hair

Uv and Ranveer come there and Uv starts laughing

Ranveer- Bana aap has rahe ho

Uv- Ranveer doud, yeh Kodak moment hai kodak moment, kya scene.. momentless

Ranveer- Chalo inhe rokna hoga

Ranveer tiees to get Tia and instead Tia starts shting in his face and when Uv tries to stop Ashi Sh pushes him and he falls down

Then Sonia and Sunit come in

Sumit takes Ashi and Sonia gets Tia

Sunit- Yeh kya horaha hai

Ashi- Yeh tum TImbo se poochoo

Sonia- Tia, kya hua

Tia- Inan innocent voice, Sonia Aunty Anvesha ne Tia ke agels ke face pe itching cream aur powder lagaya aur phir Tia ke bhaal bhi karab kardi

Sumit and Sonia look at Ashi

Ashi- Hey Bhaggu! Joke!

Sonia- Mum-mum Tia ko sorry bholo

Ashi- Lekin Mama..

Sonia- Aga tumne sorry nahin bola toh iss Saturday no choothi

Ashi- ekin Mama main aur iss Timbo se sorry, kahi nahin isse saada yeh acha hoga ke no Saturday

Sonia- Ok, toh iss Saturday no choothi

Ashi- Fine, Bye UNcle, Bye Timbo, bye Timbo ke TImbo angels

Tia makes a face and hugs her angels and says thank you to Sumit and Sonia

* Pls comment on this 😊

i loooove it plzz continue