~*moonlight*~AR. part 3 pg 4 4/8 - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: kvn1983

please continue it soon

Pyar karna aasan hai mere dost ,
Par mushkil hai nibhana ,
Pyar toa har koi kar leta hai is duniya main ,
Par mushkil hai sacha pyar pana..

thnx😳 true said
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: mossfur

nice part and PM me when you continue

thnx . will pm u😊
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Originally posted by: missypatel

cute!!

its pretty gud!! u shd cont!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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~x part 3 x~

here r de otha characters
atul joshi: kind and caring. very loveable every1 adores him.ammy's great frnd. called champ by ammy.
amit garewal: great frnd of ammy,atul nd rahul.
rahul kapoor:always flirting around. likes to hav fun. bt is also caring nd knows his limits. ammy's frnd.
anjali malhotra:aka angie.. lots of attitude. luvs to gossip. loves er frnds to bits nd wud never let dem be hurt.
muskaan chaddah: aka muski... chirpy nd bubbly. always talkin nd never stops. loves her frnds. likes to hav fun.
They both fell down on the floor. ''HEY CNT U WATCH WERE UR GOIN'' ridz shouted while gettin up. ''EXCUSE ME UR THE 1 HU CRASHED IN TO ME''ammy said. he furious.''welll atleast say sorry'' ''y shud i say sorry it was ur fault''. both hav been fighting for 10 mins nw. the bell rang which made them luk at the big clock . ''OMG im so dead ..... thnx alot u made me late nw'' and ridz quickly ran of to the head's office without lukin bak. ammy was left there standing on his own tryin to take in wat jus happnd. '' how dare she talk to me lik dat it was her fault. bt dats ok ammy cool dwn jus sum girl... bt there is sumthin diff bout her. havent seen her before hmm might b new if she is den it wud b fun 😈''. he dint want 2 waste more time thinkin bout her nd started walkin to his class.
::the head's office::
ridz knocked on the door. ''cum in'' . ridz came in '' sowi im late mrs jhonson i'' '' MISS RIDHIMA GUPTA DNT START OF WITH UR EXCUSES NW I HAV HAD ENOUGH'' this bit of shoutin made lil ridz scared nd angry. she hated gettin shout at especially 4rm the head. '' take a seat'' ridz sat opposite ''nw dat ur bak i dnt wnt 2 exclude u again dis is ur final chance, i want u 2 improve..'' '' yes mrs jhonson'' ridz said while gettin up to leave. '' riddhima take dis note to show to ur teacher so that u dnt get in trouble 4 bein late 2 ur class'' ''oh thnx'' ridz took the note nd headed straight to her class.
::in ammy's class::
''ok nw students i wnt u 2 take out ur history books nd turn to chapter 4 nd start readin'' mr brian said while facin the board. ammy was outside the class lukin 4 a chance 2 get in without bein noticed by the teacher. he saw mr brian facin the board nd quickly got in. mr brian faced the 4rnt to the class. nd by this ammy bobbed dwn so he cud nt b seen. the class tried 2 control their laughter. '' after readin i wnt u 2 do these tasks written on da board'' after sayin dat mr brian sat dwn nd strd checkin sum reports. ammy quickly gt to his seat. ''phew dat was close'' ''dat sure was where u been tina was waitin 4 u '' '' man rahul i was cumin but crashed into sum girl nd coz of her gt late''''oh kk''
::in ridz's class::
wow the class is very quite well i havent been here inii dats y ridz though while smirkin 2 her self. she came in nd gave her note 2 mr shrine (english teacher). '' sit down quickly RiDDhimA'' uggh dat voice i h8 it y is he lik dat always shoutin nd talks so sharply especially wid her she thought. she sat dwn next to anjali. ''hey ridz welcum bak huni'' dey both huged. '' thnx angie...so wats up nythin i missed?'' '' nuthin much its been borin since u went'' '' well im bak nd we will hav a blast as dis is our last yr in collage'' ridz said first smilin den gettin sad thinkin bout leavin collage.
:: break time::
anjali nd ridz got out of class nd went at the corner of the field where the benches were. that was their normal hang out nd were the girls wud meet up. they sat dwn. after 5 mins muski nd saps cme. ''hey ridz'' muski nd saps said. they all hugged eachother. ''we missed u bearzz'' muski said while unhuggin. ''me 2'' . '' ok guys lets go to canteen very hungry'' angie said while draggin them towards the canteen.
::meanwhile::
''ammy i was waitin 4 u. u know y dint u cum'' tina hugged him as soon as they got out. ''im sowi lina i was'' ''its tina'' ''yeh wateva '' ''WAT'' ''i mean i urmm im sowi sweetheart i gt caught up aniwaiz i hav 2 go kk i will c u l8a bye'' he gave her a kiss nd went off wid his gang. ''chalo lets go canteen i need 2 top up my lunch key'' atul said ''kk den lets go'' rahul replied . they all went to the canteen nd went the the counter to get sumtin 4 themselves while atul went to topup his key.
ridz nd the girls sat dwn on the table. '' k im goin to get my self a sandwich duz ny1 wnt nythin?'' angie asked quickly. ''no thnx'' they all said together. ''ok'' angie smiled nd went off. ''im hungry 2 im gna go catch up wid angie ok u 2 chat'' with dat ridz went off. ''can i hav 1 cheese nd salad sanwich nd also 1 hot choc plz'' armaan asked with his dimple smile.. ''sure '' . ridz cme nd stood next 2 him bt dint know dat he was there. '' hey can i hav 1 fruit salad plz'' ridz asked. armaan gt his food nd turned around.
**splash**
''MY DRESS.... U RUINED MY DRESS'' ridz said in full anger while lukin dwn at her dress. ''im soo'' they both luked at eachtoha '' YOU'' they both aid at the same time. '' u idiot . luk wat u done .. hav u gne completly BLIND'' ridz began again. '' oi hu u callin idiot. how dare u . nd as 4 u dress hu gives a damn . u shudnt b standin behind ppl shud u. or else they wud bump into u.'' armaan answered bak. nw ridz was shocked..no1 has ever talked 2 her lik dat. nw he is gne . watch wat i will do 2 u ridz thought to her self. she got her food. they both luked at eachother last time wid hatred nd turned to go diff ways.
::meanwhile::
angie went to topup her key. there were 2 machines nxt 2 eachtoha. 1 was bein used by atul. she went to the otha machine. '' omdzz y isnt this key goin in'' she said. atul gt distracted by her voice nd luked at her . wow she is so beautiful thought atul . he kept on staring at her bt managed to get himself out of his dreamland. ''urmm do u need ny help?'' atul asked politely. angie luked up '' its ok i can do it by my self thnx nyways'' she replied . '' dats ok'' atul smiled. after many tries she asked him for help. ''thnx umm'' ''atul'' '' thnx atul'' angie smiled nd walked off.
very sowi 4 updatin afta a long time had exams but nw im on hols so i wud b able 2 update my ff often. sowi 4 ny mistakes.i hope i dint bore u guys alot wid this part. plzz do comment it meas a lot to me😳
maha xxx
Edited by *|maha|* - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35
an amzngggg n mindblowing prt... luvd d intro n d crash..
thnxx, 4 d pm.... update supersoon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
great part AR scenes were really good
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
tht was gr8. continue sooN!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38

great dat was a great updte

veyr nce do updte sooon

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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
tht was cute!!!

sure has been lon i forgot d story...bt m hopin for sooner updates nw!!

liked d AR fightz much!! ;)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40
not boring part at all it was interesting..........loved it.........keep it up........thankc 4 the pm......do pm next time......
❤️MONA

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