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Hey guys i was just doing some thinking and thought that i should make a fanfic for prem and heer and yeah so here goes doooo please comment on it soo i can do more and tell me if u like it or not it'll be encouraging for me to write more as i have been on this forum for so long and i also have been away from the forum for like 7 months sooo please let me know
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Here goes it starts where Heer leaves the house and is at the train station and Heer is crying and thinking to herself" Mujhe Prem sai door he rehna chayia varna babuji ussa ghar sai neekal dangaay aur un dono ke beech doori aayegi, waisa main Prem ka saath nahi magaar vho mera dil mein tu hain" The song jag sona sona lagay is playiing and Heer is in tears, she then sees babuji coming and gets up and runs thinking that she cannot be seen or else prem will be away from his dad. back at the house daljit is dancing around and gayatri sees Prem and tells him to check on Heer, while Prem is walking toward Heer's room he has tears coming out of his eyes and thinks to himself ' Yeh kya ho raha hai mera aankhon sai aansoo? kuch theek nahi lag raha hain" The song is playing Main thaa jeeyaa na maara haai mainu dus main ke kara dil juraah bhi na he toote gaya haath milaay hi na he chootay kismaat ....... baar baar roon yeh aakhen yah jho na vek a sakiyaan. Prem enters Heer's room to find it empty Prem is gettin anexiouse and is getting worried that where Heer is he calls her name but no answer he then sees a note with his mom's bangles and starts screaming Heer's name and is crying uncontrollably... Heer kaha chali gayi??? tum na mujhe dokha diya tumhari yaadash nahi gayi kyun kiya tum na aisa kyun mujhse door ja rahi ho KYUN KYUN!!! Main tumhai aisa jaanaay nahi doonga main tumhai appna paas dekh na chahatha hoon Heer!!!!!...Prem gets up and then leaves the house to find Heer he has her pictures and goes to the railway station to find her, Prem is despperatly searching for Heer he thinks to himself ' Hum phir sai mila becharna kaliya nahi Heer hum mila ek nahi kahani shoroo karna ka liya itni asaani sai yeh kahani koi katham nahi hoona doonga yeh Prem aur Heer ke kahani hai, vho vadaay vho kismaaay sub kuch baki hai Heer' Heer see's Prem and is shocked and is scared she runs but her dupatta gets stuck and she tries to take it out but fails she tries again and it comes out and her dupatta is then on Prem's face and Prem remembers the mandir scene where he met heer the first time and he screams' Heer Heer!!! he grabs her tightly and tears are in both of their eyes and Heer tries to look away but Prem is still holding on to her and is very emotional at this point.... the kisna song is playing in the background.... epi ends on their teary eyes...
tell me how i did guys ur comments mean a lot thanks
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