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-aweshome_moi-

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Posted: 18 years ago

Hellooooo guys!

How are ya all doin'?????😃

Let's talk some business,now!😆😉...(BT-Soaps ke bura asar😳😒🤣)...

I'm here,with my first ever PremHeer FF:::it's called "Stolen"!.......I know,the title is reallly weird😆,but I think it goes well with the Concept of the FF!😃...The concept of the FF,is weird,itself😆....I dunno whether you ppl will like it,or not;but,I've used all my brains thinkin' abt it!😭😆

Before starting-up,I would like to mention,sumthing!😳:::

I'm not a very expressive person;except for my eyes(And I doubt,you could see those😆)....So,I knw,tht I would not be able to express the character's emotions,and feelings,here;as beautifully,as many writers here,do!😳...But,I hope to give my best!😳..and I hope for your ppl's encouragement,aswell!!😳

The "Concept & Story",and the "Character-Sketch" of the FF,are mentioned,below!!!

I hope to see your ppl's comments,and criticisms,welcomed,aswell!!😳

Luv,

Amina!😳

Edited by ~*~A~*~ - 17 years ago

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-aweshome_moi-

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Posted: 18 years ago

A fire that is carefully stoked and tended will not burn out...
It will blaze so brightly that its warmth lingers in your heart...
It will beckon your tired soul and embrace you in its radiance...
The familiar smell of its smoke can bring a wistful smile,
and the occasional blast of fireworks can take your breath away...
Its sizzle can enthrall you; its flickering flames entrance you...
The glowing embers provide comforting heat,
and the knowledge that a subtle movement or gentle breeze...
can rekindle a bonfire...

My love, the spark that ignited the day we met,
remains an eternal flame....

Prem Juneja:

Pem's a sophisticated gentleman.One of the very few bright students at his college-times.He talks less,and is very clear about what he wants from life.He doesn't tolerate any injustice,and lives life according to his rules.

Heer Mann:

Heer's a sweet and naughty girl;she's one of the stupid kinds.She's chilled-out,and let's things go,very easily.

*Other characters,would be introduced as the story progresses*

As they say,"Opposites Attract";and that's really true.

Two people who're exactly opposite of eachother,give you a perfect love-story!...But,what happens when these two "exactly opposite" people,have a sudden change;and turn,into two equally selfish people!!...The love-story surely faces,a demise,then!

This is the story,of two people,who fall in love;but,later,reallize that they were not really meant for eachother!!!

The story is about a girl,who falls in love with her captor;the captor,falls for her,too:::But,then,when they meet after 2 long years:there's a change.....

Now,what does destiny has in store, for the two????.......

*This bit,would be Updated,whenever I update the chapters*

Edited by ~*~A~*~ - 18 years ago

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guju_angel

@guju_angel

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Posted: 18 years ago

would like to know more abt this 'wierd' concepted FF of urs lol.. do continue..

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-Faith-

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Posted: 18 years ago

Yayyyyyyy Manoo u r finally here with ur first Premeer FF😃😃😃
*woohoo*
*Jumps up and down*
WOWW!! Love the title.. its intriguing..😃
Love the title siggy! Ish beautiful👏
Lovedddddddd the intro part👏... want more!!!

And abhi u said u arent that expressive😲😆 hawww wish we cud see ur expressive eyes bhi.. But for now we will have to see the character and the world u create in ur ff.. through ur eyes...

Cant wait😳 It sounds soo interesting
*excited muh*😆

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Priya

@::Prem$_Priya::

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Posted: 18 years ago

Awww.....that's awesomee...exciteedd to read ur FF...and lovee the title!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😎

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Salma

@salma_786786

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Posted: 18 years ago

Amina your first ever FF... awwww soooo sweet....
will love to read it... your first and its about Premeer soo it makes it special...
i luvvvvv the title... its different.... and you made a siggy for it tooo....
looksss very coool....
eagerly waiting to read the FF....

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-aweshome_moi-

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: guju_angel
would like to know more abt this 'wierd' concepted FF of urs lol.. do continue..

It's update,dear!You check it,out!I hope you like it!😳

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-aweshome_moi-

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: -Faith-

Yayyyyyyy Manoo u r finally here with ur first Premeer FF😃😃😃
*woohoo*
*Jumps up and down*
WOWW!! Love the title.. its intriguing..😃
Love the title siggy! Ish beautiful👏
Lovedddddddd the intro part👏... want more!!!
And abhi u said u arent that expressive😲😆 hawww wish we cud see ur expressive eyes bhi...Hmmm,will do sumthin' for tht,aswell!😆😉 But for now we will have to see the character and the world u create in ur ff.. through ur eyes.....Zaroor dekhen jee,and gib me nysh comments!!😆😳.

Cant wait😳 It sounds soo interesting
*excited muh*😆

Aww,Zainu!Where are you,jee??😲....I'm missh you,whenever I create a new VM!!!😳...I'm glad to shee your reply to any of my topics,after a loooong tym!!!!!!🤗....Glad,you liked the it;I hope you like the Concept,and my writing-ishtyle,aswell!!😳😳....Thanks alot,for the coomments,and your encouragement,Zainu!!!😳

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-aweshome_moi-

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ::Prem$_Priya::
Awww.....that's awesomee...exciteedd to read ur FF...and lovee the title!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😎

Thanks alot,Priya;I'm seein' you after a loooong tym,now!!!😳...Glad you liked it;and I hope you like my writing,aswell!!!😳😳

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-aweshome_moi-

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Originally posted by: salma_786786
Amina your first ever FF... awwww soooo sweet....
will love to read it... your first and its about Premeer soo it makes it special......I'm all-excited abt it;feels like wht I felt when I wrote my first F😃F;but this one is just abt Premeer,so it's special!!!😳
i luvvvvv the title... its different.... and you made a siggy for it tooo....
looksss very coool....
eagerly waiting to read the FF....

Thanks alot for your encouraging comments,Salma!!!🤗

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