Alright guys, so I'm kind of posting a part here as a start off... If it does not work, then we'll do something else, but please do leave comments and suggestions and criticisms of any sort. I have tried to keep this as open as possible... Keep title suggestions in mind~
Part 1 (Potentially)
Kahin koi dua adhoori reh jaati hai...
Kahin koi baat unsunee.
Dohrahey par ho chahe zindagi,
Manzil... apni taraf kheench hi leti hai.
A train of curses escaped through noticeably pouted lips as the owner's eyes trailed towards the greyed skies'
Indeed, today could not get any better she thought with bitterness as drops of rain came rushing to welcome her as she stepped out of the vehicle. With one hand clutching the base of the magnetic purple and black entwined around her body, and the other secure over her stomach, she ran towards the direction of her determined gaze. A sliver of irritancy ran passed her mind as she noticed the doorman's eyes shamelessly ponder over her figure' but she had more important things to do than waste time on such creatures. Looking around, she noticed the typical fast-paced environment of a buzzing hotel business. Her wandering eyes efficiently paused upon a French mirror classily placed amongst the cr'me-beige and rouge interior d'cor. Fidgeting with the smooth material, she pulled out the securely packaged envelope from beneath the veil covering her abdomen' Jet-black and eggplant purple were quite a combination she had quickly decided this morning as she pulled herself into the puzzling sari... now she cursed herself for wearing one at all!
In the midst of her disordered mind, the flat-piece of the object encasing her wrist fleetingly caught her attention' Panic came over her in a thundering wave. Here she was, muttering over her stupid sari when there was an impending interview awaiting her presence within less than ten minutes and she had to reach the seventh floor! Flying amidst the clouds of chaos, her gaze tripped over her two immediate choices ' the stairs or the elevator. A fleeting nausea threatened her already cluttered state at the thought of the elevator ride' but right now, it seemed the only answer. Crumpling the ends of her crimped hair nervously, she inhaled deeply before making her way towards the closing door' Her heart seemed to sink deeper as the steps towards her destination appeared to slacken, while the distance elongated. It was as though she were caught in a slow motion picture' barely making it through the steel doors.
This had to be the strangest day of her life she thought with a note of contempt. She was never this disorderly' or was she. Her mind suddenly retraced towards the initial cause of this distasteful feeling having shadowed her since this morning. A mixture of fire and fear swayed her stance as she thought of it' him. Stabling herself, she held onto the first thing within her blind reach. After a few significant seconds, she realized it was no thing, but an arm. Suddenly very self-conscious, she swiftly removed her uncertain hold' while retaining her aloofness to the only other presence.
Beads of perspiration threatened at the edges of her forehead as the nausea came swarming back' Why is this taking so long, she wondered desperately. She dreaded elevators. They evoked a fear, which she had silently nurtured from days forgotten to her in this moment. Her heart seemed to be running ahead of her and as if to confirm her feelings, a sudden blackness filled the tiny compartment. Her limbs froze. The envelope in hand had fallen with a deaf thud as her fingers blindly curled around the railing bordering along the middle of the elevator space. Her untamed heart suddenly seemed to have come to a standstill while her chest lightly heaved in quick' gasping breaths.
She could hear a noise coming from above and a thin film of dim light threaded into the claustrophobic environment. 'Are you alright?' She barely heard the voice' but involuntarily her wild eyes danced towards the direction it had come from. The sweat on her forehead gleamed as witness to her distress while her vision struggled with clarity. A hand assumingly held onto hers while she drew nearer towards the shadowy figure.
Fogged in her despair, she could not fathom another reaction' Dropping the hand, she threw her arms around the lean figure towering afore her. After an endless moment, she felt hesitant arms enclose her frame' It had not occurred to her even then, that she had disposed herself' to someone whose face she had not seen. Despite her cluttered state however, she had meekly noticed a hesitancy in the air as it hovered around her and her shield' but even this melted against her doubts. Mildly aware of her surroundings, she slowly began to remove herself' uncertain of complete disconnect from the strange sense of comfort having unknowingly found her.
Still hanging on to her unseen guard, she lifted her eyes for a look' The pale streak of light fell judgingly upon a distinct pair of eyes. As she stared into them, she felt as though having walked into another room' an unknown space' alien to exploration. Her mind froze realizing the dynamics of it all. With unknown determination she struggled with the unheard pull' ripping away from his hold, she felt her back hit a wall' and there she was' back in the elevator.
Almost immediately, the wind felt knocked out of her' Running anxious hands through her hair, she lifted her eyes again' meeting with the concerned gaze of another. 'It's ok'' came the voice again. It sounded so near, yet so distant'She felt a hand take hers, helping her stand. Her trembling fingers clung to the ones keeping her stable' her forehead tilted slightly' as it met with his' As she struggled to hold herself, her closed eyes relived foggy moments' deceivingly forgotten moments' At some point, she felt herself lose balance' but the fall was as uncertain as her situation' An unexpected urgency swept into her senses' as her quivering lips brushed passed the stranger's while she relocated herself on the unseen ground' It was as though she had been thrown mentally off balance' Standing on the edge of something unfathomably deep, she soulfully held out a hand' She followed his breezing lips as they retraced their course' falling lightly upon hers' For a few unimaginable moments, she lived in another world' a world that slipped away just as the hidden memories in the treasure chest of a heart' only to be lived in rarity.
As she felt herself being removed from this binding contact' the fear she knew minutes ago, now seemed but a forgotten story. Before her mind could find the beats of her humble heart, the doors of the elevator opened' and she watched the still unseen closeness walk away'
Remember, comments/criticisms/suggestions!
~What was in his mind...~
~Do they really know each other, or was she just feeling a strange connection...~
~What happens next...~
Only the next writer can tell you!
*Btw, who wants to go next?
Cheers,
dc
Edited by desi chic - 17 years ago