Kkusum's ending by ME

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Posted: 20 years ago
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If I was to end Kkusum, I would end it like this This is like how last epic would be:

Mahi is the one who failed Abhay car's breaks, Kumud finds this out when Mahi was talking to someone on phone and kumud listened and then she goes to family members and tell them all about mahi's planning....When Kali hears it she goes to Mahi and give her a TIGHT SLAP...šŸ˜†Family ofcourse kicks mahi out....(I'm not going to hand mahi topolice coz she deserves more than dat). Kali goes to Mahi's room and throws her all stuff out from window and then she finds a gun, she takes the gun and walks out (no 1 looking) and follows Mahi. Everyone finds that Kkusum is innocent, so they decieded togo and ask for forgiveness...But Kumud don't go with them, coz She don't have courage to show her face to Kkusum she just go somewhere else.

Here Abhinav decides to get his share from mahi as soon as possible and flies away from INDIA. Mahi comes to Abhinav's house, Mahi tells him what happened in Kapor house.Abhinav just ignores and asks mahi to gives him his share, but Mahi refuses she says that she don't have money now. But Abhinav points gun at her and treatens her to give his share or he'll kill her. Mahi tries to stop him but he pushes her and she falls near his drawer (which was open), she finds another gun (wow abhinav is more protective two gunsšŸ˜‰) and she points at him suddenly from the window (which one was behind abhinav) somone shoots at mahi's left arm. Mahi thinks abhinav shot so she shoots him, abhinav shots at her and mahi again and both fals on ground and die at spot. The person who shoot from window turns around and it's none other than KALI....(my BravošŸ˜‰). Then she dig and hole and bury her pistol in back of abhinav's graden (she was wearing a gloves so there's no chance for fingerprints). Thenn she calls the police and tells something which we can't hear (background music).

At Kkusum's place everyone asks for forgivness and Kkusum Devi frogives them and asks fro Kumud and they tell that she don't have courage so she doidn't come and gone somewhere. Sunddenly KARAN says he knows where Kumud is and goes to get her.

Meanwhile police comes to abhinav's place and find both of them dead and says that while fighting both shoot each other and deid. so Case close Chapter KhallasšŸ˜†šŸ˜‰

Kumud is sitting in mandir front of Bhagwan and crying realy hard. Karan comes there and sees kumud crying goes to her and teies to pacify and take her to Kkusum but she's so shamed at herself that she can't go near there, she says that she want to die.. But Karan stops her He goes near bhagwan and there's a sinddor in thali and he fills her manng, now crying even harder then Karan tells how much he loves her and he promised Kkusum to keep her always happy. Shes crying karan wipes her tears and says that from now on there's no place for them in her eyes and she hugs him (it's raining). He takes her to Kkusum.

Kumud comes home and asks forgivness from all and neels down on her knees.. She forgives her. Sunddenly Sarla realise that her maang is filled and everyone is shocked. She asks kumudabout it, before kumudcould answer, karan tells them all and how much he loves her. then Kkusum tells them that she knows and karan is agood guy he'll keep kumud always happy. Everyone is happy. Sudenly Kali comes in and aks forgivess from kkusum, obviuosly she forgive her also and then kali tells hem abuot abhinav and mahi ancident. Everyone is shocked but happy also, but then Kumud asks her how she knows then she don't tell that she shoot mahi forst just says that she folowed mahi coz she need some answers of her questions and when she reached there she fonud them both fighting and then death. Finally Evreyone is happy Kkusum is back in Kappor house and kumud and karan are married...And of course Aryaman & saakshi do their KANYADAN. Kkusum is happy coz all set..

FINALLY FINISHED...IT's took me an hour to write this whole up..

PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ do send ur comments in....Tell me how much u like it..

TAKE CARE...

Maire toh fingers mein dard hone lag gaya hai

Abb pata chala keh Story pe comment karna aur story likhna kitni alag batein hain.šŸ˜†

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Woww..it's really good. I find your ending 1000 times better than Ekta's ...Well, hope that happens. If that could happen, it would be so nice. Anywayz...keep it up itz realyy gudd..give somes ideas of urs to Ekta.. šŸ˜† Once again..it was really nice. Bravo!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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its really good, u shud email this ekta and tell her to have this ending instead of her stupid one!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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i really like it..it is soooo much better than ektaji "real" ending..this story rocks and i think that ektaji should adapt this ending and go with this...good job šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Yes a great ending and you do write really well you should have sent your writing about the ending to ekta.
Thanks for a great ending I hope this is the real ending.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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U r a gud writer.so start writing long fanfictions.i'm waiting 4 that.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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wow that could've been a fan-ficšŸ‘ anyways...we all wish this could come true
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Posted: 20 years ago
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wow nice ending that would be gd n it wouldnt have kksusm dieing @ da end
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Posted: 20 years ago
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that would be sooooooooooooooooooo awesome if it ends like that then it be sooooooooooooo cool
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Posted: 20 years ago
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man ur ending is a gazillion times better dan kekta's!!!!!!wow jus too gud!!!!!i think dats how it shud end and it wud even make sense!i wud neva want kumud amrrying karan but otha dan dat the story wudnt make sens eif she didnt neways dis was gr8!!!!!!hope kekta reads dis and show sit in her idiotic serial!

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