Magic Moments (Revised)update pg 64

I'm well aware that many of us in this forum have very fertile imaginations (just read some of the past posts and FF's).

With that in mind I want to start a new thread here, where basically you write a scene that you would like to see between our favourite couple. It can a complete scene, or just a moment.

It should be about them only, no CR and her henchmen need to be spying from any corner.

So, what romantic moments would you like to see them enacting?

This suddenly came into my head last night (don't ask why - I'm RKAB obsessed I think!😃) I had a vision of Rani at the mandir standing before the altar and doing pooja, singing a bhajan. Yudi is driving past and hears her voice. He stops gets out of the car and follows the voice up to the mandir. Rani finishes her bhajan and turns around to see him standing behind her.

She is shocked. She quietly goes up to him and offers him the tray and prasad. He takes it and looks at her with pure love.😳

Over to you

its wonderful.... 😳 .I need to get mine thinking...will post once my brain is up with a scene! 😆

no probs aranya - take your time.

In the meantime here's another one from me.

Yudi manages to scratch his face somehow (Well I can't think of everything ! The creatives can handle the 'how') 😉

Rani sees it and offers to clean it up. yudi assures her it's only a small scratch and will be fine. Rani ignores him and shyly but authoritatively cleans and dresses it saying 'anyway someone once told me, a wound no matter how big or small, one should not be careless about it'. 😳

Yudi looks at her in wonderment, as he remembers saying that to her in the car on the night he took her to the doctors. The look is also affectionate as he is pleased that she even remembered something so insignificant that he'd said.
😊
how do you like that?

Hey good thought men. Rakhie both of yours are good. Here goes mine.
Intro to scene: Yudi's marriage with Rani is over but is not accepted by the family- So he takes a vow that the circumstances are not good for them to be together- Dad not talking, mom not well etc. He also tells her that he married her without her consent and her parents presence and hence he will wait for her to own the relationship and will give time. So he gives her responsibility to Nikki.
But our Yudi doesnt know anything about Rani except that her name is Rani. He is always dreaming about Rani and wants to be in her presence. So guys so many roamntic scenes could come up.
1.One day he passes by Nikki's room. The door is opened and is tempted to peep inside and finds rani on the bed lying on her stomach with a book on her hand. He cannot see her book as her hair is flowing high. She is in a lovely peach colour Saree with a low neck and hair left. He sees her from toes to slowly all the curves and his hand eyes go to the hair. He cannot stop himself from taking her hair in his hands. She suddenly turns shockingly and his hand is in her hair at back side. He falls on her losing the balance and there is a eyelock sesssion. A book is in beteen them and slowly with great difficulty he gets up and says "iam sorry" Rani(our usual Bholi Bhali) puts her hand on his lips saying "yeh aap kya kehre Kunvarji."
He doesnt lisen to her . He takes her hand on his lips and kisses them . He says " U R looking beautiful."
She shys way and then he looks at the book and says " What are you doing" Even before she answers Nikki comes and says " Bhiyya aap aise disturb karne se Rani ki padaai me rukhavat Aayega" Yudi looks like what. Nikki tells him " Bhiyya aapki Rani dasvi tak Pad chuki hai and she was brought to the Mahal for studies. and she tells everything.
yudi is like totally surpised and gives a loving glance to Rani.

Howzatt...

nice, very nice 😃
Love the descriptions of her clothes.


Okay, I'll go with your idea and do one after they are married under the circumstances you've written about.

Rani enters the bedroom one day to find Yudi. Upon entering she see's he has fallen asleep on the sofa. She takes a blanket from the bed and covers him with it.

As she is about to leave she stops by his feet and gently touches his feet and swipes her hand over her head 😳 . She quietly leaves the room.

Yudi opens his eyes and smiles softly. He had felt her presence but didn't open his eyes as he wanted to just feel her there next to him. 😊

What do you think?

excellent rakhi i loved it and sarala too good as usual

ok this is my take from rakhi's scene

rani was going out covering yudi......but suddenly her pallu got stuck in sofa..rani got scared she thought yudi has hold her pallu .......scared rani slowly turned and relaxed to see yudi sleeping peacefully and her pallu is stucked in sofa .....she took out it slowly and while goign out suddenly strong breeze blow and her pallu cover sleeping yudi's face..yudi now hold rani's pallu and stand up from sofa...holding pallu he stop rani.now rani's heart was beating very fast...........she lowered her eyes.....she was downcasted.....rani could not face yudi....who was staring her with lots of affection..
yudi slowly start moving towards rani and cover her pallu proparly .........while doing this......he keep his hand on her shoulder ........yudi's touch was making rani restless.....she was feelign lumps in her throats......slowly she said "kunvarji hum chalte hain"

yudi...without saying anything hold her hand and....start playing with her fingers........than afgter looking in her eyes.he said"jaaiye....humne kahaa roka hain.........."
rani" lekin ......humaara haath"

yudi pull her towards him and lifting her face and looking straight into her eyes.........."aaj kitna hansi mausam hain..thandi hava...chal rahi hai......phoolo ki khushboo shamaa mahekaa rahi hain.....sitaare.jagmagaa rahe hain........aur chand bhi aaj masti main.apni chandni ke saath baadalo se khel rahaa hain...........aur aap hume yaha tanhaa chhod kar jaanaa chaahti hai..........ruk jaayiye naa....hummare paas.......kuchchh pal ke liye........."



PS: hope you all will like it 😳

Beena - beautiful, love it mwah!! 👏

I thought of another one how about if she's singing Bhajan in palace and Yudi come to stand behind her. When she finished she sees him there. She offers the tray and points to the kumkum (isharay off course).

He puts it on her maang and she touches his feet, though Yudi stops her from completely touching it. She then offers him the prasad. I think just this once I would like Raja Saheb to come along at that point and see this and be pleased. She offers the prasad to him and she touches his feet. Raja Saheb is touched by her gesture.

I know I said only YuRa scenes, but I think Raja needs to see this.

How do you like it?

wow that's good one..yes raja should knwo how good rani is and she has more values and culture than bhoomi.........i liked it........


...........how about..when they were having breakfast......yudi from side was holding rani's hand nobody could see it but rani could not eat her food because of that.....CR ask her to start eating she said ya she will and mischiviously.yudi is looking at her and smiling .....suddenly BR feel sick and start to feel breathless....rani snatch her hand from yudi and rush towards BR and give BR , her medicine.....and massage her palms and chest........and give her water..after some time.BR feel ok but sweating very badly than rani with her pallu swipe BR's sweat and give air.....seeing rani all highper....and caring while other are just standing and watching ..rajajai feel very touched.......and have smile of satisfaction......

hows that

Wow these are amazing.. 👏 👏 Puts me into dreamland right away..I will try to contribute 😕 but am better as a ardent reader u know..
All the scenes are great..Imagining UD Rani post marriage is such a great pleasure..specially when we know UD will be all happy..So guys keep them coming..will keep an eye..
And yea would try to add something 😳

Nice one 😃

Here's another.

Yudi wakes up very early one morning and is restless. He decides to go for a walk in the palace gardens. As he is crossing a little courtyard area, a window opens and he turns to see Rani. She has her hair out and it is gently blowing in the early morning breeze.

They share a tender glance at each other and he gestures that her hair looks nice out.

Later on we see that, even though she can't keep all her loose, she ties some of it at the back and leaves the rest open. Yudi see's her and smiles as he understands she did it for him.

He passes her and very gently and secretly touches her hair and whispers (making sure no one can hear him) 'bahut achhe lagti hai' (hope my hindi grammar is okay?)