my creation- a poem for rt [ do read]

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Posted: 17 years ago
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salam namste 🤗

here's a poem i'd lyk to dedicate to RT.. nd tynk it is true for ol[xpet sum lucky ones] .. my creation 😊

_________________________________________

I luv a guy whu duznt even noe I xist!

Tiz heart beats for a you,

On every beat its ur name

U're the one whu makes every particle in

U're in mah breadth

U're the onli reason I'm alive

U mean the whole world to me…

The one I've known for years

Wid u It feels like heaven

Itx u in ol my tokz

Ur dreamz drown me at night

Itx ur face whck I see in the moon

U make me a daydreamer

Thinking of u makes my day

Ur just one smile , is enough for me to live the whole life

And that tear of urs fills my life full of sorrows

I ask for ol those tears . sowrrows nd pain of urs to be mine

And they remain miles away from u..

And may happiness olways hug u tight!

Listning ur name makes my heart beat faster

And my cheeks blush

My life starts with u and ends wid u nd onli..

Buh ..

U duno noe that there duz xist a gurl colled vamakshi😭

Buh olways remember..

That there's some one .. somewhere whu luvs u more then her life!

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do tell hwuz it.!! 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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😎

😲
oye tum toh poem shoyem likhne lagi.... 😲
kya baat hai 👏

BTW kya mast dedication hai RT k liye....
but last part..u don't know my existence 😭 😭 😭 is touching dear 😭
aw
🤗

Loved ur creation vamu 😳
BTW me mooh band karing varna machar chala jayega 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#3

Originally posted by: Rash2cool

😎

😲
oye tum toh poem shoyem likhne lagi.... 😲
kya baat hai 👏

BTW kya mast dedication hai RT k liye....
but last part..u don't know my existence 😭 😭 😭 is touching dear 😭
aw
🤗

Loved ur creation vamu 😳
BTW me mooh band karing varna machar chala jayega 😆



😆Sia ki asar hey!!!Bahuth miss karthi ho na usse?😉

@topic..Yaarr..itz Marvelous & amazing😳Liked a lot!😳
Edited by mirchy - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 👏 👏
wow dear it to good
and the pome suites me also
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow vamakshi...bahot khub 👏
like the poem so much 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: vamakshi

salam namste 🤗

here's a poem i'd lyk to dedicate to RT.. nd tynk it is true for ol[xpet sum lucky ones] .. my creation 😊

_________________________________________

I luv a guy whu duznt even noe I xist!

Tiz heart beats for a you,

On every beat its ur name

U're the one whu makes every particle in

U're in mah breadth

U're the onli reason I'm alive

U mean the whole world to me…

The one I've known for years

Wid u It feels like heaven

Itx u in ol my tokz

Ur dreamz drown me at night

Itx ur face whck I see in the moon

U make me a daydreamer

Thinking of u makes my day

Ur just one smile , is enough for me to live the whole life

And that tear of urs fills my life full of sorrows

I ask for ol those tears . sowrrows nd pain of urs to be mine

And they remain miles away from u..

And may happiness olways hug u tight!

Listning ur name makes my heart beat faster

And my cheeks blush

My life starts with u and ends wid u nd onli..

Buh ..

U duno noe that there duz xist a gurl colled vamakshi😭

Buh olways remember..

That there's some one .. somewhere whu luvs u more then her life!

__________________________________________________

do tell hwuz it.!! 😊

Awww!! Vama 👏 Really a very sincere & beautiful Creation Darlin 🤗
Edited by chocort - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 fantabulous and touching.
but i think every girl would like to say that to rajat,, dont you think so??? 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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woooowww 👏 👏
ure poem is soooo touching yh i agree with silver screen every gir would sai that to rajat 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sweer! Great poem yaar.
Are u planning to add it as RT's gift, I encourage u to.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#10
aaw gurlxx... thnku sooooo mucc...thnxxie...thnxxie🤗😳😳
i nvr thought u ol will lyk it soooo mucc.!!

well.. yea i olso feel.. tiz poem perfectli suits for ol rt deewaani'z [xpect the few lucky ones whu noe rt ]

nd silvermughda... hw can i add tiz on tu rt'z bday gift... the thyng is olready ready ryte!! 😭

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