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As usual the weekend is too long and I am getting restless like most of us for monday, in the meantime I thought that 19th June was a very serious episode..now I am big fan of comedies and I thought what I would have like if this show was not a serious one..So i have written an alternate version, in this the events will be the same but the dialouges will be totally different from the show...just for a light laughter from the usual sad stuff this is my take and here it goes:
Scene starts with lallu thinking to himself,"hmmm, now this prem is way to old to live at home, i was hoping that after marrying ashlesha he will move out but here he is refusing to marry her and wants to be with that heer who i definately know wont leave this house, so what can i do??also i havent had a shower since 4days due to the whole drama thing, so why dont i do both..."...then he goes gets a mug and starts having a shower...
Gaya3 goes," great so this one has lost it, AGAIN!!!!!!! now what can i do if he loves public shower, i have so many kids and no one will help so i have to do it as usual"..then she snatches the mug and scolds lallu that use the washroom and please spare us public humiliation, its bad enough to have so many adult kids who all live with us and now you!!!!!! cant i get some peace in this house???my mom was right i should have never married you!!!!
Then Prem goes fine dad i will leave, but you could have said this nicely as well...and btw now stop embarassing me....and he goes to his mom that sorry mom now you are on your own and gaya3 retorts,"whatever!!!!! when did you helped me before ??? and please leave before your dad changes his mind" and then thinks to herself one down many more to go...
Here Prem goes to heer now what are you waiting for???an invitation??get moving...didnt you just see what all happened???and heer is like oh hello??? i am the one who was stuck in the attic for 2days and i am the one who needs shower badly but did your daddy dearest asked me if i needed the mug of water???noooooooo!!!!! what a selfish dad you have..
Prem: Fine we will discuss this later, get moving now
Heer: Wait!!!!! I need to shed some more tears after all the hair pulling hurt and you didnt catch me properly either so i am upset with you too...And how come you are the one that gets the best dialouges???I am complaining this to Ekta that i need some lines too after all i am the lead actress
Prem: Ya you do that but in the meantime get your luggage and mine too...and for a change do some work instead of crying and yapping about woe is me....
Heer: Nice one prem...wait till we are alone then i will show you who is what and who is not...comeon meher get going and stop your wallowing as well, preet is not coming with us.
Then they leave.
Preet: Nice dad, nice...you think you got rid of him and now you will do the same with us, well keep thinking padre coz thats how close to reality you will get as i aint leaving this home...infact i am thinking of bringing prem back and then we will harrass you like we did before
Gaya3: Oh god!!!!!! thankyou for prem moving out now help me with the other ones please???next in line should be harman..that boy is trouble from the day he was born ....no expressions or feelings and he is such a bad actor...i am ashamed....help me get rid of harman please...
Then prem and heer come to this house.
Prem: Well here it is, now take the stuff and start working and make it a nice place
Heer: And you???what are you planning to do?? Dont you know i need to cry some more after all need to use the whole glycerine bottle and i am only halfway through..
Prem: Quit it and get going, hang the picture first and then start cleaning and meher what the heck are you staring at...now do some work for a change..
Meher: Ya ya whatever....btw when is your bro coming to visit us????after all i told him about heerdidi finding out about madmeet
Prem: So it was you???couldnt you wait till the wedding was over???but nooooo you have to open your big mouth before that and now we have to live in this place.I am a NRI and I am reduced to this....
Then Gaya3 and all doing puja
Lallu: Gaya3 I want to do the puja
Gaya3: Do it then and please no public shower now, last night do you know how embarrassed i was yesterday???? and you are no help...help me get the other one move out...
Then Kulraaaj comes.
Gaya3: Oh no!!!!!!! one goes and other came!!!!!! Why do i have to face this things....i take one step forward and two step back...i am trying to be a nice mother who wants her kids to be independent and i get this
Kulraaj: mom how are you and where is prem?
Lallu: prem moved out finally and why are you here??? listen a girl has to live with her husband at their place not their parents so eat somethign and i ll see you off at the airport...
Then the rain scene.
Prem: There she is, well atleast she is doing some work, and ah there is the towel so i will go get it and wipe my face
Heer: oh here he is, good thing coz i am dying to cry and be more simpering and its the perfect oppurtunity, i will stand right in front of the towel and pretend to swoon...
Prem: Ha! Ha1(ala nelson muntz style) got ya!!!!! no touching you miss heer i am still upset that i have to leave home coz you couldnt take few slaps...
Then QB and Prashant
Prashant: Nice one medusa, nice one...not only you ruined your plan took me with you too...
QB: Oh please like you were not to be blamed, who told you to stop defending heer when i brought her down??that prem came first why couldnt you show your macho side then?
Prashant: Like prem would have let me!!!! he has one crazzy dad, two crazy brothers and one crazy sister and i only have a mad brother so i need more practise..but get this get me heer or else i will tell your true identity to all..
QB: Whatever!!!!! Go ahead and make my day..tell them i have enough issues already..now my talk in third person daughter is going to do everythign to get preet and my simple minded husband will bore me to death
Well guys this was my funny take, no offense to anything...as i love premeer more than anything but this is just a funny version of 19th june...let me know if you like it enough to laugh out loud...
Scene starts with lallu thinking to himself,"hmmm, now this prem is way to old to live at home, i was hoping that after marrying ashlesha he will move out but here he is refusing to marry her and wants to be with that heer who i definately know wont leave this house, so what can i do??also i havent had a shower since 4days due to the whole drama thing, so why dont i do both..."...then he goes gets a mug and starts having a shower...
Gaya3 goes," great so this one has lost it, AGAIN!!!!!!! now what can i do if he loves public shower, i have so many kids and no one will help so i have to do it as usual"..then she snatches the mug and scolds lallu that use the washroom and please spare us public humiliation, its bad enough to have so many adult kids who all live with us and now you!!!!!! cant i get some peace in this house???my mom was right i should have never married you!!!!
Then Prem goes fine dad i will leave, but you could have said this nicely as well...and btw now stop embarassing me....and he goes to his mom that sorry mom now you are on your own and gaya3 retorts,"whatever!!!!! when did you helped me before ??? and please leave before your dad changes his mind" and then thinks to herself one down many more to go...
Here Prem goes to heer now what are you waiting for???an invitation??get moving...didnt you just see what all happened???and heer is like oh hello??? i am the one who was stuck in the attic for 2days and i am the one who needs shower badly but did your daddy dearest asked me if i needed the mug of water???noooooooo!!!!! what a selfish dad you have..
Prem: Fine we will discuss this later, get moving now
Heer: Wait!!!!! I need to shed some more tears after all the hair pulling hurt and you didnt catch me properly either so i am upset with you too...And how come you are the one that gets the best dialouges???I am complaining this to Ekta that i need some lines too after all i am the lead actress
Prem: Ya you do that but in the meantime get your luggage and mine too...and for a change do some work instead of crying and yapping about woe is me....
Heer: Nice one prem...wait till we are alone then i will show you who is what and who is not...comeon meher get going and stop your wallowing as well, preet is not coming with us.
Then they leave.
Preet: Nice dad, nice...you think you got rid of him and now you will do the same with us, well keep thinking padre coz thats how close to reality you will get as i aint leaving this home...infact i am thinking of bringing prem back and then we will harrass you like we did before
Gaya3: Oh god!!!!!! thankyou for prem moving out now help me with the other ones please???next in line should be harman..that boy is trouble from the day he was born ....no expressions or feelings and he is such a bad actor...i am ashamed....help me get rid of harman please...
Then prem and heer come to this house.
Prem: Well here it is, now take the stuff and start working and make it a nice place
Heer: And you???what are you planning to do?? Dont you know i need to cry some more after all need to use the whole glycerine bottle and i am only halfway through..
Prem: Quit it and get going, hang the picture first and then start cleaning and meher what the heck are you staring at...now do some work for a change..
Meher: Ya ya whatever....btw when is your bro coming to visit us????after all i told him about heerdidi finding out about madmeet
Prem: So it was you???couldnt you wait till the wedding was over???but nooooo you have to open your big mouth before that and now we have to live in this place.I am a NRI and I am reduced to this....
Then Gaya3 and all doing puja
Lallu: Gaya3 I want to do the puja
Gaya3: Do it then and please no public shower now, last night do you know how embarrassed i was yesterday???? and you are no help...help me get the other one move out...
Then Kulraaaj comes.
Gaya3: Oh no!!!!!!! one goes and other came!!!!!! Why do i have to face this things....i take one step forward and two step back...i am trying to be a nice mother who wants her kids to be independent and i get this
Kulraaj: mom how are you and where is prem?
Lallu: prem moved out finally and why are you here??? listen a girl has to live with her husband at their place not their parents so eat somethign and i ll see you off at the airport...
Then the rain scene.
Prem: There she is, well atleast she is doing some work, and ah there is the towel so i will go get it and wipe my face
Heer: oh here he is, good thing coz i am dying to cry and be more simpering and its the perfect oppurtunity, i will stand right in front of the towel and pretend to swoon...
Prem: Ha! Ha1(ala nelson muntz style) got ya!!!!! no touching you miss heer i am still upset that i have to leave home coz you couldnt take few slaps...
Then QB and Prashant
Prashant: Nice one medusa, nice one...not only you ruined your plan took me with you too...
QB: Oh please like you were not to be blamed, who told you to stop defending heer when i brought her down??that prem came first why couldnt you show your macho side then?
Prashant: Like prem would have let me!!!! he has one crazzy dad, two crazy brothers and one crazy sister and i only have a mad brother so i need more practise..but get this get me heer or else i will tell your true identity to all..
QB: Whatever!!!!! Go ahead and make my day..tell them i have enough issues already..now my talk in third person daughter is going to do everythign to get preet and my simple minded husband will bore me to death
Well guys this was my funny take, no offense to anything...as i love premeer more than anything but this is just a funny version of 19th june...let me know if you like it enough to laugh out loud...
Cricket
