Cliffhanger. Now that’s just cruel 😃
Mihir’s reaction really stood out. The overwhelming breakdown at the thought of losing her again… sob sob 🥺 It hit hard. His instinct to take the easy exit, and then consciously choosing to stay and face it instead, felt powerful and completely true to his arc you are trying to show in this story.
This chapter feels like a careful build-up for what’s coming next. I’ll share a more detailed review once I’ve read both this and the next chapter together.
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