Wild kids,wilder love life Erul Ahana TS

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Posted: 1 months ago
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Wild kids,wilder love life Part 1

I dedicate this story to my dearest friend Salley who wanted me to write an Erul Ahana story.

Thank you Salley for the beautiful cover page.


A veterinary doctor was taken to a house by some people.There came a man requesting the doctor:Please doctor...save my bacha.

He was Erul.

Dr:Don't worry.I will treat him.Where is your dog?

Erul:My bacha is not a dog.

Dr:But your assistants told me that it's a dog.Is it a cat?

Erul:No.Come with me to the pool doctor.He is there.

Dr:Your pet animal is having fever.Right?You should not have allowed it to play in the pool.Too much of wetness is not good for a feverish animal.

Erul:But my bacha needs water.

Dr:Why?Anyways let me check him.

The doctor went to the pool area with Erul.There he saw a huge crocodile in the pool.

Seeing it openly it's mouth itself the doctor got scared.

Dr:Why didn't your assistants say that your bacha is a crocodile?

Erul's assistant:Because no doctor comes here whenever we revealed that our pet is a crocodile.

The crocodile opened it's mouth as if it will eat up the doctor soon.The doctor fainted seeing that.

Erul:Oh..no....my bacha's doctor has to be treated to get get rid of fear.I think I need to contact a psychiatrist to treat this doctor who is scared of my cute bacha.



Erul contacted the psychiatrist Ahana to treat the veterinary doctor.

Erul:Please treat him doctor.He is so scared that he refuses to treat my son.

Ahana:Anyone will be scared of a crocodile. I think you need treatment.Who will keep a scary crocodile as a pet at home?

Erul:What is the problem in keeping a crocodile as a pet?My bacha is so cute.Why are you calling it scary?Your eyes need treatment for not able to see how cute my bacha is.

Ahana felt like laughing.But she controlled it.

Ahana:Don't worry about your bacha's health.I know a doctor who is an Ichhadari naagin.She is very courageous unlike human beings.Only a naagin can deal with a crocodile without any fear.

Erul:Thank you so much doctor.

Ahana smiled.



Ahana took her best friend Dr.Bharni to Erul's house.

Bharni took her naagin form

and gave a medicine to the crocodile.Immediately the crocodile became alright.

Erul:Your hands are magical.My bacha became alright.

Bharni:We naagins have the power to cure animals fast.

Erul:Wah!

Bharni:You are right Erul.Your bacha is cute.

The crocodile showed a special expression.

Erul:My bacha became shy when a beautiful doctor gave him a compliment.

Bharni and Ahana giggled.

Bharni:What is your cute bacha's name?

Erul:His name is Vikram.But I call him Viku.

Bharni:So cute.

Ahana:By the way Erul...whenever Bharni takes her naagin form,people get scared.But you don't seem to get scared.

Erul:I have lots of children who are scary to the world.If I can live with them happily Why should I be scared of a naagin?I love animals.

Ahana and Bharni smiled.

Ahana:You have more children?

Erul:Of course yes.

Ahana:Can we see your other children?

Erul:Sure.


Erul took them somewhere.

Erul:Mere bache...

All his pet animals surrounded him with love.

Thank you so much Salley for the beautiful edit.

He caressed them.

Ahana and Bharni were surprised as there were tiger,deer,owl,monkey,rabbit etc.

Ahana:How come the wild animals are so friendly with you?

Erul:My parents abandoned me in the forest.I am brought up by animals.I lived my whole life with animals like Mowgli.

They were surprised.



2 old men Parmeet and Baljeet came to Erul's house.

Parmeet:Where is Erul?

His assistant:He is playing with his bacha in the pool.

Parmeet:Erul is such a family man to play with his small child.We will go there and see him.

They both went near the pool.

There they were shocked and scared to see Erul enjoying in the pool with the crocodile.

Erul:Parmeet and Baljeet?

Parmeet:Yes.We had taken appointment to meet you.

Erul:Yes.

Baljeet:We both are going to produce a movie on animals.We are the directors too.The movie's main lead is a tiger and his best friend is a crocodile.Please permit us to cast your animals as the main actors of our film.

Erul:Sure.But my bacha deserves good remuneration. Minimum 1 crore.

Baljeet and Parmeet were shocked.

Parmeet:Such a big amount!

Erul:If the film actors can charge 60-70 crores can't my bache too charge atleast one crore for their hardwork?

Parmeet and Baljeet gave a fake smile:Right. Right.

They whispered:We have no other option.Because if we don't pay money my movie won't work out.

Erul:We will talk about it later.I have to take my bacha for a walk.After swimming my Viku wants to walk outside.

The crocodile came out of the pool and walked.Parmeet and Baljeet ran away screaming.

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Posted: 1 months ago
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First of all hats off to your imagination and creativity Jasminesmiley32smiley27smiley27smiley31Loved reading it.Mera bachchasmiley37

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Congrats on the new story


Part 1

Captivating update... well written

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Thnx for the dedication. Funny that the doctor came to treat Erul’s bacha thinking it's a dog but then he went unconscious seeing a crocodile, now the doctor himself needing another doctor is too hilarious 😂. Ahana is right, no one would keep a crocodile but Erul is different haha. Of course Erul u would find him cute because he is ur “bacha” haha. Good that Ahana knows an ichhadari naagin who can treat the crocodile. This is the first time you're writing pure comedy. Erul saying that his bacha became shy when a beautiful doctor gave him a compliment was laughable. Vikram means the serial Vikram? If yes, how did you think to make him a crocodile? I am surprised that Erul’s parents left him in the jungle. Was his mother Tulsi? I heard that Tulsi only loves her son Karan and other sons were zero for her, and to her grandson Eklavya she was also cruel. She kicked him out of the house when there was a misunderstanding. Erul playing in the pool with a crocodile is so courageous. In one interview's thumbnail it's written Akashdeep Saigal as ichhadari crocodile. So the clowns Parmeet and Baljeet are here too hahaha. Last scene of them running away was such a comedy. Perfect pics.

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Posted: 1 months ago
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It's not a pure comedy.In between a little bit of comedy will be there.I didn't imagine any actors as Erul's parents.Thanks a lot.


Originally posted by: salley145

Thnx for the dedication. Funny that the doctor came to treat Erul’s bacha thinking it's a dog but then he went unconscious seeing a crocodile, now the doctor himself needing another doctor is too hilarious 😂. Ahana is right, no one would keep a crocodile but Erul is different haha. Of course Erul u would find him cute because he is ur “bacha” haha. Good that Ahana knows an ichhadari naagin who can treat the crocodile. This is the first time you're writing pure comedy. Erul saying that his bacha became shy when a beautiful doctor gave him a compliment was laughable. Vikram means the serial Vikram? If yes, how did you think to make him a crocodile? I am surprised that Erul’s parents left him in the jungle. Was his mother Tulsi? I heard that Tulsi only loves her son Karan and other sons were zero for her, and to her grandson Eklavya she was also cruel. She kicked him out of the house when there was a misunderstanding. Erul playing in the pool with a crocodile is so courageous. In one interview's thumbnail it's written Akashdeep Saigal as ichhadari crocodile. So the clowns Parmeet and Baljeet are here too hahaha. Last scene of them running away was such a comedy. Perfect pics.

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This Emul guy is really crazysmiley36

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Happy to see a new TS from you on Erul and Ahana. I myself never imagined this pair. Haha. The doctor getting scared of Erul's children and Erul calling a psychiatrist for treating the doctor is hilarious. Ahana taunting Erul is funny. Surprised to see an Ichhadari Naagin like Bharni is also a doctor. Haha. Good that Bharni had treated Erul's crocodoil and Vikram's special expression when Bharni complimented him was cute. Haha. Surprising that Erul was raised in the forest like Mowgli so he has become animal-friendly. Baljeet and Parmeet's entry as movie producers was nice. It's hilarious that Erul is demanding at least one crore for letting his animals shoot for a film. Haha.
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Great Story Its A Fun Read I Quit Watching Naagin 7 Its So Boring

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Wild kids,wilder love life Part 2

Shooting location...

Parmeet:This movie is about a tiger loving a human being.

Parmeet showed the heroine Ananta and told Erul:The tiger has to kiss Ananta.Please tell your tiger to kiss her.

Ananta was scared:No Sir.I can't do this kissing scene.

Parmeet:Ananta...don't worry.This is not a liplock.It is only a cheek kiss.

Ananta:The tiger will bite my cheek instead of kissing my cheek.

Erul:Enough!My bacha is not a criminal like you think.I have taught him manners.He will not attack anyone like that.He knows that he is brought here to act and he will act.So you don't have to be scared.I cam assure you that.

Baljeet:Yes Ananta.His animals are well trained.That's why we took Erul's animals to act in our film.

Ananta:Sure?

Parmeet:Yes.


Erul called his tiger.The tiger walked towards him.

He told his tiger:Ravish beta....don't be shy.It is only acting.You please give a kiss on Ananta's cheek.


If you act well you will become the superstar of the film industry.

The tiger opened his mouth and said 'yes'.

The tiger obeyed Erul by kissing Ananta's cheek and Ananta got a different feeling during the kiss.

The camera man took it's video perfectly.

Ananta thought:Why this tiger's kiss felt like a human kiss to me?

Erul:My bacha was blushing while shooting the kissing scene.

The camera man:How do you know that the tiger was blushing?

Erul:He is my child.I can understand every emotion of his from his face.

The camera man and Ananta who heard that felt like laughing.



Ahana visited the shooting location.Erul was surprised:Dr.Ahana...how come you are here?

Ahana held Ananta closer and said:Ananta is my sister.I came to visit her.

Erul:What a surprise!


They smiled.

Ahana asked Ananta:How is the experience with the animals?

I was worried how you will adjust with the animals.

Ananta:Surprisingly all the animals are well mannered.So the shoot is going well.

So don't worry Ahana di.

Ahana:I already knew that as Erul's children are cute.

Erul and Ahana smiled at each other.



The makers of the movie served icecream to the whole unit.

Erul:I will not have icecream before my bache have it.So give this icecream to my bache first.

Baljeet:Erul,which bache?

Erul:2 of my children are acting in this film.My other bache are also in this location to watch the shoot of their brothers.

Parmeet murmured:What is this psycho saying?We have to feed icecream to his wild creatures like tiger,crocodile,owl,rabbit,deer,monkey?

Ahana:Who feeds icecream to crocodiles and tigers?Are you crazy Erul?

Erul:My bache love icecream.

Ahana got irritated.

Erul took the icecream and fed it to his animals.

All were stunned to see them enjoying the icecream.

Parmeet:Guess Erul's bache are also psychos like him.Poor father and children.

Baljeet:Erul's bache are innocent like cute kids.

Parmeet:Abnormal too.

Baljeet:Good that they are abnormal.Otherwise they will eat us up instead of icecream.

Parmeet:You are right.

Ahana and Ananta were surprised.

Ahana:Erul's animals are really having icecream.That's why Erul wanted to feed them icecream.Amazing!

Ananta:Erul's children are really wonders of this world di.

Ahana:Yes.


Days passed...

Ahana kept visiting the shooting location and started spending time with Erul.They became very close.Erul stopped addressing Ahana as a doctor and started calling her 'Ahanaji'.

Erul and Ahana having food together became their usual routine whenever Ahana visited the sets.

Thank you so much Salley for the beautiful Erul Ahana edit.

When Erul talked about his children Ahana giggled.

Erul was lost in her laughter.

Erul:You look so pretty when you smile.

Ahana blushed.

Erul:I really liked you Ahanaji.

Ahana became shy.



Ananta became very friendly with the tiger.

Ananta:I never thought that I will like a wild animal like a tiger so much.I really liked you Ravish.I wish you were a human being.

Suddenly the tiger turned into a handsome man.

Ananta was shocked.

Ananta:What is this?

Ravish:Actually I am a shape shifting tiger.Only Erul papa knows it.

Ananta was surprised.

Ravish:After doing a romantic movie with you,I really started loving you Ananta.I really mean it.

They shared an emotional eye lock..

Ravish:But I know that you can't accept me easily as I am not a human being.

Ananta became upset.

Ananta:Ravish..I don't know what to say now.

Ravish became upset.He turned into his tiger form and walked away.



Ananta was massaging Ahana's head.

Ahana:When you massage my head,I feel so relaxed.After all my head is filled with my patients' problems.

Ananta smiled.

Ananta:Di,I want to tell you something.

Ahana:Say Ananta.

Ananta told about Ravish to Ahana.Ahana was shocked.

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