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Posted: 7 hours ago

We need one villain who makes Arjun so scared he's forced to run



It's not because how this villain will hurt Riya etc. The show itself started with a ghisa pita biwi ki maut twist. The villain should hurt Arjun in a way he is stuck in his mind and soul



If someone here watched law and order svu, olivia had a criminal lewis. He bought her to her knees. And olivia growing from that is beautiful to watch



Because a powerful hero is boring. Powerful villain who hurts hero so much he's forced to do something heinous to win, and how that thing eats at hero is so interesting to see


What's Arjun's line? If he kills people easily, he has super human mind power, he's so sharp that his eyes scan like xray - is he human or superman 🤣 my favourite ironman also went through change. He has a line he won't cross. What's Arjun's line? What's one thing if he does, will orce him to kill himself? What haunts arjun?



And to what extent riya can help? She's not his saviour. What happens when Riya isn't here... Anything. Maybe she's kidnapped. Maybe she's in coma. For whatever reason she's not working next to him. What happens to Arjun? Is he that depended on Riya? What happens when Arjun's mind don't work. He's thrown in a prison where whenever he says any smart remarks, he's beaten to death'. How he comes out of it?



There were two stories I had read long back. One was Arjun almost commits suicide cause Roshni case is solved. Not even Riya or sameer able to help him. Arjun heals cause he wanted to


Another Arjun is in prison. He speaks in his sarcastic ways. No one beats him. And it's so odd cause arjun will beat anyone who speaks to him in his language. So why Arjun is given that grace in story? Cause he's the hero? Or because he's police?



So yeah. In stories girl becomes boys salvation. So if the girl wasn't there the boy would be that stupid moron. He should have that growth on his own. Arjun shouldn't enjoy the juniors gossip because Riya is sitting there. Arjun should listen cause that normalcy is one thing in his days which makes him happy.


Long ass post not related to story but there

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Posted: 6 hours ago


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Posted: 6 hours ago

Arjun has a lot of weakness.

Hero doesn't mean he has to be all powerful. The best movies of the world are because heroes are stuck and need to find their way


Dhurandhar movie - hamza was beaten to death' almost it didn't hurt his character. He was shown so powerful cause he overcame it to kill rehman.

Same with heros mind. Hamza did so much planning plotting but others did too. He had the presence of mind to choose those allies to become king of lyari



My all time favourite movie, wanted /pokhri. Hero is forced to come out of undercover agent thing cause goons killed his father and his identity is out. He had to plan plot and kill them all. Salman/Mahesh worked for years. Killed people..but it was only till prakash Raj came, used his mind to find out it can be a police officer, and found him through the father.


It can be not fitting in this story cause it's a romance story, focus on both equally even though we see Arjun more. So him going to that hell and coming back might not be as per genre. It's more of a light story so something that gruesome might not fit



I think that night if it was one person trying to kill arjun he would have won.

Rest agree




Also i wonder what value Arjun adds in riyas life. As a lover? Cause we saw in past she was always courageous, bold, very brave etc etc. she knew her value. So what she's getting from this relationship?

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Posted: 5 hours ago

If you throw someone into a dark cell without food they will break. Police officer doesn't mean they aren't human. We all have a breaking point and I wonder if we will see that in this story


Every people add value in our lives. Our parents, our lovers, even the people who betrayed us. Sikandar added something in Arjun's life. Same with others

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Posted: 4 hours ago
The point where the story is Hanging, I can't wait for the next 2-3 chapters to read. Not just about verbal confession with riya. Rather I feel now many dynamics will change too. And I can't keep patience. Someone contact Muskan's boss and ask him/her to give 1 week leave so that she can write faster 😭😐🤭
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How I wish to kidnap her jahil boss

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