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Oh i forgot about this story...will read this part soon

reserved

Chapter 2

well Maan was leaving

Maan was really impatient and nonchalant

Maan was indeed formal and professional with Geet

Geet's thoughts were reasonable

she clearly had expectations

at least Geet was composed when she responded to Maan

Geet was clearly shattered

things are the same

however it has shifted

not surprised that Geet recalls the past

things for simple then

glad that she refused to cry

feeling for Geet

Maan was brutally honest

Geet was naturally upset and hurt

after all she was weaving dreams

as expected her parents assume that she is nervous

they are unaware of the reality

wonder how Geet will manage

hope to see a confident Geet

of cos Geet assured her dad

her prayer was understandable

her mom's concern was justified

Geet is leaving her world for a new world

she did love Maan

update soon

Thanks for updating

will read and comment in the morning

Chapter 2

Realistic and Amazing Chapter

Geet realizes her childhood dreams has been crushed

by non-other but Maan

yet she is willing to go to him and see where it leads her

I'm just hoping in time he at least becomes her friend

Originally posted by: heavenlybliss

Oh i forgot about this story...will read this part soon

reserved

Will be waiting for your feedback on the same.

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Chapter 2

well Maan was leaving

Maan was really impatient and nonchalant

Maan was indeed formal and professional with Geet

Geet's thoughts were reasonable

she clearly had expectations

at least Geet was composed when she responded to Maan

Geet was clearly shattered

things are the same

however it has shifted

not surprised that Geet recalls the past

things for simple then

glad that she refused to cry

feeling for Geet

Maan was brutally honest

Geet was naturally upset and hurt

after all she was weaving dreams

as expected her parents assume that she is nervous

they are unaware of the reality

wonder how Geet will manage

hope to see a confident Geet

of cos Geet assured her dad

her prayer was understandable

her mom's concern was justified

Geet is leaving her world for a new world

she did love Maan

update soon

I am glad you liked the storyline.

Do stay tuned how the story develops further…

It will take time to develop… as it is a gradual process.

Originally posted by: taahir004

Thanks for updating

will read and comment in the morning

Originally posted by: taahir004

Chapter 2

Realistic and Amazing Chapter

Geet realizes her childhood dreams has been crushed

by non-other but Maan

yet she is willing to go to him and see where it leads her

I'm just hoping in time he at least becomes her friend

Stay tuned for more updates… as it is a gradual process…it will develop gradually…