Veerzara-fanfic - Page 6

hey jas i think u must send this story to kekta so that she can get some brain 😉

Part-15.....Pammi goes 2 see anjali.many ladies was
putting ornaments 4 her. P:in the morning itself why is
anjali getting ready? gayathri:its not morning pammi.u
got up late. every1 laughs. P:then also no need of
getting so early. G:2day is anjali's wedding day & so
many ppl cum 2 celebrate.so she has 2 be in a shabby
dress? P:i did'nt mean that.but...now itself she has 2
put on her bridal dress. G:pammi,ur eyes hav any problem
after getting up late?this is not the bridal dress. P:oh
i'm mistaken.i did'nt luk carefully. Anjali looks at
her. P:i want 2 talk 2 anjali. G:pammi,u can talk
later.now she has 2 get ready.all r cuming see the
bride. pammi gets irritated & goes out. G:what happened
2 pammi 2day?her behaviour is so strange . anjali
thinks:what happened 2 pammi?what does she want 2 tell
me? anjali was surrounded by a crowd.so pammi cud'nt
speak 2 her. The time is getting late.Kavya goes 2
yug's room.yug was in the bride groom's dress.
K:u look like a film star.very handsum in the brde
groom's dress. Y:but u'll luk better in this dress.only
u deserve 2 wear this 2day 2 go 2 the mandap 2 wed anjali.
K:yug,2day u r going 2 wed.so don't be childish.
Y:i'm not telling rubbish.u luv anjali.kavya lies:no i
don't luv anjali.i told u no that i luv Zara. Y:shall i
tell u a truth?Zara is anjali. Kavya was shocked:u new
that? Y:yesterday only i came 2 no that.i wanted 2 tell
u immediately.but u were very busy.kavya bhayya,u r not
surprised? kavya did'nt tell anything. Y:i thot
hearing this surprise u'll be very happy & change ur
mind.did u no that b4? K:yes. Y:what?u new that
anjali is zara?then also...why bhayya?why?u sacrifeced ur
luv 4 me? i told u no,i don't luv anjali. K:but anjali
luves u.she needs u. Y:no,she does'nt luv me.she luves
u. K:this is ur misunderstanding.plz don't suspect that
poor girl. Y:i'm not misunderstanding her.its the truth
that she luves u. K:yug stop it. Y:no,i
can't.i've 2 tell u.anjali luves u very much.she luved
her fav poet Veer very much. Kavya was shocked. Y:she
mistook me 2 be her Veer & luved me.but i told her that
i'm not veer,but u r her veer.but anjali does'nt tell u
her luv,bcoz she thinks that u luv sum1 else.she does'nt
no that ur luv is Zara ie anjali herself. kavya's eyes
rose up:is it true yug? Y:yes,anjali & u luv luv
each other very much.plz don't get separated from each
other. Kavya hugs yug.tears cum out from their eyes.
anjali is very beautiful in her decorated pink bridal
dress.pammi loses her control & grabs the hand of anjli
2 get her away from the crowd. A:whats this misti? P:i
told u no that i want 2 talk 2 u.i'll leave u only after
i finish telling what i want 2 tell.

oh wow jas
its really very nice part
i think next part would be great

wow jas....dis is my first time reading ur fanfic...i read dem all at 1 go...it's amazing!!...plz do continue soon.....i can't wait 2 noe wad's gonna happen next.....
luv ~Sabz! 😉

Part-16....Anjali:4 that whats there as so serious?
pammi:is ur luv serious?then its also serious. A:now
everything is over.i'm going 2 be sum1 else's & very
soon kavya will be with his beloved. P:if kavya shud be
with his beloved,u hav 2 co-operate. A:i did so 4 his
luv. P:no,u'vent. bcoz only if u agree 2 marry him,he'll
be with his beloved. A:what? P:i no that u r shocked.but
the truth is that kavya's beloved is none other than u.
A:pammi,plz...P:anjali,i'm not crack like u think.what i'm
saying is true. pammi tells her everything. Anjali was
shocked.tears flow from her eyes. A:oh god.now what will
i do? Every1 was tensed bcoz the bride groom has'nt
reached yet. P 2 A:nice.so the time'll go & the wedding
won't happen. but suddenly they hear that the bride
groom has reached.Nitya,mayank,yug get out of the
car. anjali's eyes search 4 kavya.pammi notices that
yug is not in the wedding dress. P:where is kavya
yug? yug turns back.kavya cumes out of the
car.he had worn the wedding dress.anjali becomes
happy.anjali loses her control & runs 2 kavya.Song:yeh
hum aa gaye hain yahan...{veerzara}.both look at each
other's eyes.they hug each other with happy
tears.nitya,mayank,yug & pammi smile.anjli's parents
were shocked. pammi tells them everything. kavya-anjali
get married. Y:like Yash chopra's Veer & Zara,our Veer &
Zara also united. P:yes,bcoz like the filmi Veer &
zara,they r also strong lovers. they all smile.it
rains.kavya-anjali become happy 2 see that rain.they go
out & dance slwly with soft romantic steps 2 the song:
tum paas aa rehe ho.. After sum months. anjali on the
stage. A:it was my gr8est wish 2 sing my fav poet's...my
luv's poem on stage after i'm trained 4 a stage
performance.it was my luck & destiny that he became my
loving husband.i'm so happy that i'm going 2 fulfil my
wish 2day in this moment.i'm going 2 sing my fav poem of
my .... anjali smiles.she looks at kavya was sitting
among the audience.kavya's eyes were romantic.he shows
hand action:all the best. anjali's face expression shows
that its not enuff. A:i want my hubby 2 be here near me
on this stage. kavya was excited.he goes 2 the stage &
hugs anjali.they both sing 2gether:tere liye...Audience
clap their hands,bcoz it was very romantic 2 see them
2gether on stage with their magical voice. THE END

wow jas....it's amazing!!! i luv it......da last part is soooooooooo cute!!! where they sing on stage 2geda!!! i luv ur fanfic....u rule!!!
hats off 2 u!! 👏

luv ~Sabz!~

oh jas it was so romantic i loved it
i love the ending it was s sweet. 👏 👏 👏

👏 👏 Jas, i apologise for not updating immeditely for the last three chapters but i am soo pleased how it ended. It was romantic thru and thru and you really outdid urself with such a perfect ending.😃

Oh it was so beautiful how they united and for once i liked Pammi coz in ur story she was key to bringing them together!!

It was def, a magical story, what a wedding yaar, dancing in the rain soo cute!! 😃

the ending was done sooooooooooooooo well.
u did a really good job
keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏