Hum dil de chuke sanam-fanfic 4 KA

I really want Kavya-anjali 2 b in the gr8est luv story
'Devdas' as the gr8est pair
Devdas & Pavathi.Bcoz kavya is like Devdas.This fanfic
is my version of DEvdaS.
PART-1.....Kavya is
returning 2 his native place
after 14yrs.after getting
used 2 the lifestyle in USA,he
did'nt feel like going
backbut its bcoz of his
parents' force,he's going
back.since a few months kavya
is in bombay.he was packing
everything 2 return.his only
friend slok cumes:why r u
in hurry 2 go back? kavya
does'nt say anything. he helps
him 2 pack.slok gets a letter
from a book. S:whose
letter is this? kavya takes
it & looks:this is anjali's
letter . S:who is anjali?ur
kitten? K gets irritated:its
a girl. S:o i see.u did'nt
tell that u've a gf in ur
place.so this is the reason
behind ur sudden return 2 ur
land. K:what rubbish!how many
glamorous girls r here
near me.i did'nt feel anykind
of attraction 2wards
them.then how can i feel that
2 this simple village
girl?i'vent seen anjali since a
long period.she was my
childhood friend.1st & all we
used 2 send letters.later
it was stopped. S:but i
realy feel that ur
relationship with raj is not
sumthing that shud be
broken.i think the destiny is
2 bring u both
2gether.that may be the reason
u r 2 b back. K:u r
mad.by the way a bad smell is
coming from u.u've drunk?
S:ya. K:don't u feel shame 2
tell it openly? s:i don't
feel shame 2 tell the truth
like u.u feel shame 2 admit
that u liv anjali. K:u r
ctalking rubbish after
drinking. slok smiles. kavya
cud'nt sleep thinking
about slok's words. he takes &
reads the old letter
sent by anjali:kavya,did'nt u
tease me when i said that a
flower is cuming the the
plant?tho its late,a yellow
flower has cum.when u cum
here,i'll giv 2 u. kavya
thinks:yellow...luv's color.
kavya was carried away by
nostalgia...the days spent
with anjali.

nice
jood job 👏
do continue
ok

👏 Oh wow a beautiful concept, i was fooled by the title thinking it would be based around that film but instead it turned out to be even better!! I love SRK's films and you seem to too. 😃

Yellow flower awwh, so sweet, sunflower i hope, they are symbols of happiness! Shlok drunk 😆 is he the new Chunnilal 😉, but then again he will stay in America or are you planning on Yug taking Jackie Sheroff's role? Ok i'm getting ahead of myself now!

Only prob with devdas was SRK died and turned out to be a weak lover coz he would not fight for his love when he had the chance and let his father control him. Plz say, your gonna find a loop hole in tht scenario and flip it to be how we all wished it would have been. Although, i dnt think, Devdas would have been as legendary as it is without such a plotline.

Ok, back to topic, here i am discussing the film 😆
I like ur begining, it set off the story nicely and got me thinking all sorts of things! Plz update soon! 😃

Part-2....Kavya remembers how naughty he was & how
sweet anjali was.anjali was brilliant in maths,but kavya
was just the opposite.he remembers their painful
departure when he went away from their place.janjali stood
near him when was going.they both cried a lot.due 2
laziness akavya stopped writing letters,but anjali
continued. kavya thinks that mayb bcoz he was not
replying later she also stopped sending letters. K
thinks:why am i thinking this much about anjali?she was
only a friend.i remember the little anjali clearly.how
does she look like now? he becomes restles.Immediatly he
goes,paints anjali with a guess. K:wil anjali look like
the same? Kavya feels like seeing anjali like
anything.slok's words r still in his mind. anjali was very
much trilled 2 no that kavya is cuming back. she goes 2
the temple:God,kavya is cuming back after many
yrs.thanku so much god 4 bringing him back. she takes
vrith 4 kavya.then dances with lamps:silsila....kavya
comes back,gets grand welcome. kavya goes 2 anjali's
house.Anjali's parents did'nt recognise him. K:don't u
recognise me?i'm kavya. they were surprised. anjali's
mom:kavya!wow! dad:i can't believe ur change. they
chat. M:kavya,don't u want 2 see anjali? he wants 2 see
her very badly.but he does'nt say that. M:she was always
enquiring whether u r back. K becomes happy 2 hear
it. M:anjali...cum here.see who has cum. anjali cumes.she
was really happy 2 see K.he cud'nt believe his
eyes.bcoz A was exactly the same person in his
painting. he thinks:without seeing anjali's present
look,i painted.it was right.its a gud omen.but anjali
looks more beautiful than in my painting. M:anjali,did u
recognise him? A:yes,kavya. kavya-anjali look at each
other. he cud'nt sleep thinking about anjali.he was
impressed by her beauty.he sings dreaming about her:woh
chand jaisi ladki {Devdas}.

👏 Awwh he paints her portrait that is a nice new twist! He is falling for her hard, like Gatu Kaka says in Ba Bahoo aur Baby, if you can't sleep at night then your in love! 😆

Plz continue, i'm sure more cute moments are to come as they have only just met after so many yrs!

oh yaar its really good i like the portrait part so mr kavya is fallin for her good 😛 OMg dont tell me u'll going to end this story like devdas cause i dont want ejaz dead so plz dont kill him murder him or anythin 😆 😆 ok
well your story is intresting up till now plz cont. 😊

Part-3....kavya-anjali meet in the temple.they walk
2gether silently.losing patience Kavya decides 2 talk
1st:how did u recognise me? anjali smiles:why did'nt u
cum here all these yrs? K:i did'nt feel like cuming
here.did'nt want 2 see any1. anjali wants 2 ask like
this:u did'nt want 2 see me? A:now also u r not
interested in this place? K:slightly interest started
cuming. anjali smiles. A:why did;nt u send letters? K:i
did'nt feel like sending. A becomes sad.she
thinks:how cool kavya is.not at all bothered about
anything. K:why did'nt u stop sending letters? A:i thot
u 4got me.so i did'nt want 2 desturb u. K cud'nt
speak. A:u 4got me? K was speechless. A:u did'nt
think about me even 4 once? K:where is time 4 that?
A becomes sad,bcoz she expected a positive answer
from him. A:but i can't count how many times i used 2
think about u each day. it touched kavya's heart.
K:ok,how is ur studies? A:what studies?it got stopped
early. K was shocked,bcoz anjali was the brightest
student in the school who was the pet of the teachers.
K:why?u lost interest in ur studies?shocking.. A:no,i
was 1st.but its really expensive 2 continue studies.we r
not so rich like u no. anjali's eyes filled up with
tears. K smokes. A:u r smoking b4 god?its a poison.
Kavya throws away the cigerrette. anjali smiles.

oh thanks its fine up till now cant wait for next part. 😊

😆 Tut tut K, smoking before God, now tht's like a gd boy, throwing away the ciggy! I hope he extinguished it first or someone's sari will be on fire! 😆

Ok on a serious note, i like how you adapted tht romantic scene frm Devdas 😊 as in my opinion it didn't make K seem too arrogant or strict like how SRK seems to appear in parts of tht movie.

Although he is still hiding his true feelings so maybe he will start to show his liking for Anji more in the next chapter! 😉

Poor Anji didn't get to finish her studies, oh i'm sure K can tutor her late into the late hrs of the morning!! 😆

Part-4...Anjali:kavya,we'll play cards like we used 2
when we were kids. K laughs:ok. they play.
song:Bairi piya...K-A play .anjali runs 2 her
friend bindhya:there is a happy news. B:what? A:kavya
came 2 my house 2 see me.i can't still believe this.
B:kavya might've cum 2 ur house.but its only a dream
that its 2 see u. anjali's face becomes dull. B:whats in
ur mind?u r shy 2 say? A:no,i'm prowd 2 say that i luv
kavya.ppl maynot swallow it.but i'll tell this truth.
Bindhya was shocked 2 see her frankness. B:u've the guts
2 tell that u luv kavya? A:when we r in luv we'll hav
the courage 2 say that.if u'd guts u will not hav agreed
2 marry a man whom u r not in luv. Bindhya was
speechless. A:i'll soon tell kavya that i luv him.why
shud i hide my luv 2wards the person whom i'm in luv
with? B:what if kavya does'nt accept u? A:i'm sure that
he'll ccept me. B:how can u b sure about it? he
might've seen mANY BEAUTIES BETTER than u IN
aMERICA,BOMBAY...A:maybe.but he cannot see any char in
them.only i'm beautiful in his eyes.thats the magic of
luv. Anjali imagins romamce with kavya.Song:morey
piya.... anjali's mom cumes 2 see kavya's mom nitya. A's
mom:shud we delay it? nitya mom:what r u taliking about?
A's mom:about conducting the wedding of kavya-anjali.
Nitya stares at her.