RM emotional scene(scene-2 updated pg1)

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hey guys 1 day i was watching kumkum online den later wen i slept. i had a really bad dream. its very emotional. its frm kumkum in RM version. RM r married. its muski b'day bt she has brain tumour n rahul n all d interns know it bt muski dnt know dat he knows abt tumour bt she knows rest all her frnds know abt it. if u will like it i will cntinue every kumkum emotional scene in RM version.it is muski b'day. she is in locker room. she is having headache due 2 tumour n she sit on stool. she listen d noise of interns n doubt dey r cuming 2 room. n she sit on d stool keeping hand on her head. rahul cum dere n see muski has kept her hand on her head.dere r sum changes as i have written d dialogues keeping in mind dey r doctors bt in kk she was housewife.all interns r dere only.remembr dis is nt FF so dnt include in d topic Fan Fictions wich is open 2 all n all can read. it is only for dmgians

SCENE-1

R-muskkan,muskaan kya hua.

M-mujhe kya hona. kya hua koi kaam tha kya.(she is trying 2 ctrl her pain by holding her hand tightly)

R-mera voilet hii mill rha.voilet kya file bhii nhii,roomal bhii nhii or kal jo main dekh rha nye accident patient ki wo rkhii thi naa maine yahin kahiin kahan gyii.

M(muski cntrolling her pain n say)----kabhhi-2 tum ye sab cheeze khud nhii le sakte.

R-tumhare hote hue ye saari cheeze main khud kyun lun. hamesha se tum mujhe ye cheeze deti aa rhii ho or deti rhogii hamesha.(sad tune in bakground)

M-tum khud hii toh kehte ho............... ki tumhe independent ban na hai. toh iske liye kucch aadatein toh badalni pdegii naa.(rahul cut out her dialogue n say)

R-nhii badal skta.kucch aadatein aisi hoti hain muski jo apko ehsaas krati ki apke zindagii ka humsafar har kadam par aapke saath hain.ab tum batao ye saari aadatein badal kar main tumhara saath kaise chod dun.

M(she is still in pain btcntrolling)----saath toh taakat dene ke liye hota hai insaan ko kamzor banane ke liye nhii. is liye zindagii mein kucch aadatein badal leni chahiye taaki kal ko agar wo poori naa ho toh zindagii ruk si nhii jaati haan..................

R-meri zindagii tumse hain.tum ho toh zindagii kabhi f\ruk hi nhii skti.(den dere is announce dr.rahul dr.keerti ko report kariye)(rahul leaves by saying)meri saari cheeze nikaal do main abhii aaya.

its nt whole my dream scene. i m busy i will update soon as 2nd scene.i will update rest of my scene soon.

thnxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Edited by armaanbasket - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Aww. Its so sad! Im waiting for the 2nd scene. 😊
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it was rly 😭 😭 ,,..update soon! 😛
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SCENE-2(muski fone rings up wen R leaves n she take up d fone n dere was her doctor who is treating her)for doctor is V FOR VIKRAM.

M-hello!!

V-janaamdin bahut-bahut mubarak ho.wo kya kehte hai tum jiyo hazaron saal ke din wo.............

M-please vikram kam se kam tum toh aisi baatein matt karo.tum toh ho ki ye janamdin,shayad mera aakhri janamdin ho(den rahul cums dere n she keeps her fone on stool bt doznt discnnects)

R-muskaan....

V-hello,hello.

R-are meri saari cheeze kahan hain(muski move 2wrds changing room n give all is things)Thank u.meri file mill gayi.itni der se dhoond rha tha mill nhii rhii thi.

M-haan ye rhi.

R-pen.file mera fone sab mill gya.(rahul doznt leave frm dere n just stand dere wid her)

M(muski cnfused n say)---hun.jao.

R-haan itni jaldi kya hain.

M-are jaldi kaise nhii hain.waise hi itni der ho gyi tumhari duty hain jao.

R-haan(he think sumthing n say)----actually aaj mann nhii kar rha jaane ka.chalo nhii jata aaj main duty pe.dekho kaaran bhii toh hai naa.sabse pehle tumhara birthday.or doosra kaaran tum itni acchi lag rhii ho kaun befkuf tumse door jaye.chlo hum sabki duties toh hii gyi hai toh kyun naa hum saare muskaan ka birthday celebrate karein.kyun kya kehte ho tum log.

AR,AT,AN,RZ------yes.

R-dekho.

M-lekin rahul.

R-no,no arguements.tum mujhse pyaar krti ho toh tum mana nhii krogi.

M-theek hai.

R-i love u.

M(muski doz his hair little nice n say)--rahul tumhe nhii lgta ki ye romance kucch zayda ho rha hai.tumhe nhii lgta ki ise thoda=thoda saa kam kr dena chahiye.

R-no,no not at all.infact ho nhii skta kabhii nhii ho skta,umar bhar nhii ho skta.jab tum 98 ki ho jaogi or main 99(V on fone n all d interns dere were smiling by listening dis) ka ho jaunga pyaar mohabbat aise hi chalti rhegi(dere all interns r happy bt muski bcums emotional as she is going 2 die n will nt be of 98) or jaanti ho keht ki zayda pyaar krne se umar............(he stops dere as he knows she is gonna die n he cmplete his line in breaks) ............... umar bad............ jaati hain.jitna zayda pyaar utni lambi zindagii.(muski look up 2 rahul.all interns also bcum emotional) kyun tumhe koi aitraaz hain kya.

M-haan........ aitraaz toh hoga hi.tum hii ne mujhse vaada kiya tha naa ki hmara saath sirf is janam ka nhii janam-janam ka hoga.(den she pretends dat she is happy bt rahl knows dat why she is saying dis)is liye agar is ek janam ki zindagii itni lambi ho gyi toh fir kahin tumhara maan naa badal jaye tum apna vaada naa tod do.is liye itni lambii zindagii nhii honi chahiye.

R-tumne bhii muhse vaada kiya tha ki hume isi janam mein janam-2 ki zindagii jeeni hai.vaada kiya hai tumne tod nhii skti(muski turn him 2wrds d doorpushes him frm d bak 2 go for duty as she is in tears n rahul also cum in tears n say)

M-is se pehle ki dr.keerti aaye or tumhe uthaa kar le jaye tum jao ok.(rahul turns bak n say)

R-are maine toh tumhe batana hii bhool gya.aaj ki party ke liye maine apne saare doston ko invite kar liya hain.tum bhii kisi ko invite krna chahti ho toh kar do.meri muskaan ka b'day koi baaki nhii rehna chahiye(muski again turns him 2 door n push her our of d room)

M-bye.

R-i'll see u in d evening.(he starts moving n muski go 2 her mobile bt again rahul show her face 2 her n say)

R-muskaan(he just moves 2 cum in d room bt muski says)

M-jao.(rahul make sad face n moves little bit)

M-suno.

R😃-----------nhii jaun.

M-baal theek kar lo.

(Rahul in anger shake his hand on d hair n make dem really-2 bad.all d interns were emotional.ridz eyes were fill wid tears.muski take up d cell)

M-hello,sory vikram wo rahul ko jaan tha naa.

V-kitna pyaar krte ho tum dono ek dusre se.or agar tum dono mein se koi ek naa rha toh koi dusra zindagii kaise kaatega.dekho muski rahul is waqt is bacche se zayda tumhari zarurat hain.tum hi mujhse kaha krti thii naa ki tumhare bina agar uska sapna poora bhii hua toh kya haazil hoga muskaan.dekho muskaan is liye main keh rha hun ye operation krwa lo.is bache ko abort......

M-bus vikram bus.😡😡 tum baar-2 wahi baat kyun krte ho jo main sunn na nhii chahti.maine tumse kaha naa main faisla kar chuki hun.or ab mera faisla koi nhii badal skta khud rahul bhii nhii.or ek baat or sunn lo acchi terah se samajh lo jitni baar tum mere bacche ko maarne ki bat krte ho naa uni baar tum meri maut ko nazdeek le aate ho.is liye plz mujhse is baare men baat krna band kar do

V-i m sorry muskaan.kaise dost hun naa janamdin pe tumhe khushi ke jagah aansun de rha hun.i m really very sorry.accha ye toh btao janamdin par apne dost ko invite karogi ke nhii.

M-Dr.Vikram nhii aa sakta.lekin haan mera dst vikram zaroor aa skta hain.bolo aaoge naa mere dost bann kar.main apne dost vikram ko apne b'day party pe nvite kar rhii hun😊

V-ok..

M-i'll wait for u.😊😊

(wen muski kept d fone den we cum 2 know dat sum1 standing outside had hear evrything n d person was Dr.Keerti n she was in tears n now undrstand why muski was nt able 2 work properly.at dat time ridz in tears for muski-rahul she runs 2wrds d staircase n armaan also follow her n support her n try 2 make her quite)

thnxxxxxxxxxx

will cntinue soon.

Edited by armaanbasket - 17 years ago

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