-Mr. Saluja Sir Ji! - A ManVik SS *Part 2 updated* - Page 8

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Posted: 1 months ago
#71

Kash... This is hilarious... The thought of all this happened infront of neetu and punnu is making it more hilarious and interesting.....


Vikku ka tho ab izzath pura nikal gaya ...lol vo bhi punnuke samne..smiley37smiley37.


Too good....

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Posted: 1 months ago
#72

Originally posted by: kashmayurfan

Wrote a second part on popular demand smiley9 Enjoy!

KaSh


Part 2

The moment Mannat and Vikrant’s gaze shifted to Puneet barging into the room behind Neetu and seeing them in a compromising position, they lost balance, falling head first.

“OUCH” yelled Mannat, her glasses nowhere to be found.

Vikrant heard her and instantly checked if she was alright.

In all this mess, Vikrant forgot one detail.

“Here Ms. Mannat, I have your glasses” he hurriedly put them on her.

She let out a breath of relief and was about to thank him, but as soon as her vision cleared, she saw Vikrant’s towel on the ground beside her.

She screamed out in horror realizing what that meant. Vikrant jumped and looked down. He cursed before running to hide in the bathtub.

He peeked out a little from the tub, seeing her stand there, her eyes tightly closed.

“M.ss.. M..an..na..t, I..a..m s..soo..rry” he said, flustered.

“Aapp..aap..ne mujh..ee glasses wapis kyun di..ye?! Aaap mein sharam naam ki cheez bachi hai KYA Mr. Saluja Sir Ji?!”

“Aar..reey..Pu..nnu..I mean..Pun..eet agaya tha..mujhe kuch samaj..nahin..aaya, aur tumhe..lag gayi..” He fumbled.

“Acha..theek hai, theek hai! Main jaa rahi hunnn yahan se, humesha keliye!!” she yelled out, frustrated.

Vikrant's eyes widened at her words.

“NAAHINNN!” He screamed out, jumping from the bathtub to stop her.

Mannat’s gaze landed on him, completely stunned at her butt naked boss standing right in front of her.

Vikrant realized what he did and instinctively put his hands in front of his “bachi kuchi izzat”.

“SALUJA SIR JI, YE KYA BARTAV HAI?!” She screeched, turning all shades of red.

Her eyes were squeezed shut, unable to forget what she saw a few seconds ago.

“Control Mannat, control!” she told herself, trying to not blush at her thoughts.

Vikrant ran back to his previous hiding spot and said “Tum nahin jaa sakti Mannat!”

She frowned “KYUNN?!!”

“Ky..un..ki..ummm..woh..me..meraa..towel! Me..raa TOWEL KAUN DEGAAA?!” He blurted out, proud of his cover up. Vikrant smiled to himself, satisfied with his "bahana".

“HUHh..”

Did he really just say that? She thought.

“Woh aapki fiancée hi de sakti hai, aur woh main nahin hun!” she replied dryly, before exiting the bathroom and breathing a sign of relief.

She looked around and quickly scrambled out of the restaurant when she saw no one.

Vikrant chuckled at himself and blushed a little after the moment he shared with Mannat. He was about to come out of the bathtub, when he saw Puneet swinging his towel in his hand, a teasing smile on his face.

Vikrant knew he was screwed. Puneet would never let him live this down.

Puneet cleared his throat “I think you forgot something very important Vikrant..”

“Shut up, and give that back to me!”

Puneet chuckled before throwing the towel to his face.

“There is nothing left to cover up Vikrant, everyone saw your “little” mishap!”

Vikrant groaned in embarrassment, hiding his face in the towel!

THE END

Mere vikku boi ka izzat gayaaaa 🤣🤣😭😭😭

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Posted: 1 months ago
#73

Originally posted by: Saichintalli

Kash... This is hilarious... The thought of all this happened infront of neetu and punnu is making it more hilarious and interesting.....


Vikku ka tho ab izzath pura nikal gaya ...lol vo bhi punnuke samne..smiley37smiley37.


Too good....

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Thank you smiley36

Bass likh diya ji mann mein aya smiley17

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Posted: 1 months ago
#74

Originally posted by: Shemer

Mere vikku boi ka izzat gayaaaa 🤣🤣😭😭😭

Mannat ke haat mein thama di smiley37

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Posted: 1 months ago
#75

Originally posted by: kashmayurfan

Idk kya likha, but likh diya smiley37 This isn't great, but I hope you will still enjoy this small khayali pulao of mine smiley36

-KaSh-

Mr. Saluja Sir Ji!

Mannat was pacing around the storeroom in Mezbaani, extremely annoyed at her Mr. Saluja Sir Ji.

“Samajte kya hain aapne aap ko?! Jab dekho order dete rehte hein, boss hone ke naam par!”

She rolled her eyes, preparing herself to complete the next task she was given. “Shannt Mannat, shannt. Load na le, babaji hai na!” She thought to herself, but instantly remembered her baba ji da banda instead. She recomposed herself, remembering the occasion. Her best friend and Saluja Sir Ji were about to get married. Before her emotions could get ahold of her, she took a deep breath and focused on her job.

“Ye kahan bhej diya hai Vikrant sir ne mereko…Kahan main chef ban ne ayi thi, kahan mein ye sab kar rahi hun”

She started rummaging around the storeroom, looking for the specific item she was asked to get for the event. Suddenly, she remembered about her plan to expose Aishwarya Rai Singh. Mannat had a wicked idea. Why not look for clues at Mezbaani, while she’s at it.

***

Vikrant knew that Mannat was in Mezbaani, since he had asked her to collect this piece Malla wanted in the engagement. He smiled thinking about how he had annoyed her earlier. Her cute little button nose scrunched up as soon as he gave her the next task. “Gusse mein aur bhi haseen lagti hai Ms. Mannat” he thought to himself. He kept smiling like a fool, until he remembered why he was in here in the first place. He wanted to confront Mannat once again before the ceremony so decided to get ready at the restaurant. This way, he could have enough time with Mannat with no interruptions.

Vikrant started getting ready, eager to intercept an angry, but cute Ms. Mannat in the storeroom.

***

Mannat snuck out of the storeroom, hoping no one was around at this time. She looked around, afraid of bumping into a very grumpy head chef. Thankfully, there were no traces of “The Puneet Saluja” around. She swiftly made it to the kitchen, ready to investigate.

***

Vikrant was feeling fresh after a shower and did a once over in the huge mirror in front of him. “Not bad Mr. Saluja” he smirked, admiring his towel clad body.

“Ab bass tayar ho kar Ms. Mannat ke pass jahunga” he thought, all excited.

***

Mannat looked at the freezer, remembering all the messed up things Aishwarya had done to her. The anger inside of her unfurled, she had to take a break.

Mannat took deep breaths, heading to the bathroom.

***

Just as Vikrant was heading to grab his sherwani, the door opened, a beautiful face appearing in the doorframe. It was none other than his Ms. Mannat. “Oh shoot!” he thought, his eyes widening.

Mannat looked up, still reeling from the moment in the kitchen, but as soon as her eyes met a set of very naked pecs, she yelled out in shock. Her eyeballs almost popped out of her sockets. She did not know if she was traumatized or mesmerized because her gaze landed on none other than her boss, Mr. Saluja Sir Ji. “Holy crap!” She thought, unable to look away.

Vikrant fumbled, holding the towel tighter to his abdomen.

M..m..ss..Ma..ma..nna.t..t?! Aap yahan kya kar rahi ho!” he stuttered, embarrassed.

Mannat came to her senses and closed her eyes “Ye sawal mujhe aapse pooch na chahiye! Aaa..pp yahan kya kar rahe ho…aur woh bhi..aise” she said, gesturing at his state with her hands.

“Ma..i..nn tumhara..bos..ss hun…theek hai…tum mere se koi..sa..wal nahin kar sakti”

She widened her mouth in disbelief. Her eyes opened, as she approached him, ready to blast his ears off.

“ACCHA JIII…aapne khud mereko bheja storeroom mein, aur main sawal nahin karsakti!” She pointed her finger, inches away from him.

Vikrant’s eyes widened again, as she stood way too close to his half-naked form.

“Ms..Ma..nn..at thoda distance mein rahiye..”

Mannat remembered his state and looked down, flustered. She screamed again, making him jump. Vikrant slipped, taking Mannat with him. She closed her eyes, her heart thudding.

Thankfully, he was able to hold her, before they landed on the floor. There she was, her hands on her frames, making sure she could not see anything. She was shaking in his arms. For a second, he forgot that his izzat was hanging by a thread or should he say towel.

“Ms. Mannat, you’re fine… open your eyes” he said softly. She couldn’t help getting lost in his beautiful orbs. Her hands unknowingly made it to his abdomen.

Her touch broke the trance, Vikrant instantly jumped. He gulped, turning redder than before.

She removed her hand as soon as she realized and stared right back at him, her cheeks burning. She was sooo close to his "very naked chest".

Her eyes widened once again, ready to jump out of his arm, but before she could scramble away, the door opened again.

“Puttar jiii” they heard, before a shrill scream resonated and Neetu Saluja lost consciousness.

Just when they both thought it could not get worse, Puneet walked in, right behind Vikrant’s mother, and saw Mannat in Vikrant’s arms with the towel barely hanging from Vikrant’s hips.

Puneet closed his eyes in disbelief and held his head, having enough of the madness surrounding his family!

THE END.


Sorry if I forgot to tag anyone! smiley18

Hilarious it is smiley37smiley37, and very nicely put writeup.

I get to read both the parts together yeyeye!

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Posted: 1 months ago
#76

Originally posted by: kashmayurfan

Wrote a second part on popular demand smiley9 Enjoy!

KaSh


Part 2

The moment Mannat and Vikrant’s gaze shifted to Puneet barging into the room behind Neetu and seeing them in a compromising position, they lost balance, falling head first.

“OUCH” yelled Mannat, her glasses nowhere to be found.

Vikrant heard her and instantly checked if she was alright.

In all this mess, Vikrant forgot one detail.

“Here Ms. Mannat, I have your glasses” he hurriedly put them on her.

She let out a breath of relief and was about to thank him, but as soon as her vision cleared, she saw Vikrant’s towel on the ground beside her.

She screamed out in horror realizing what that meant. Vikrant jumped and looked down. He cursed before running to hide in the bathtub.

He peeked out a little from the tub, seeing her stand there, her eyes tightly closed.

“M.ss.. M..an..na..t, I..a..m s..soo..rry” he said, flustered.

“Aapp..aap..ne mujh..ee glasses wapis kyun di..ye?! Aaap mein sharam naam ki cheez bachi hai KYA Mr. Saluja Sir Ji?!”

“Aar..reey..Pu..nnu..I mean..Pun..eet agaya tha..mujhe kuch samaj..nahin..aaya, aur tumhe..lag gayi..” He fumbled.

“Acha..theek hai, theek hai! Main jaa rahi hunnn yahan se, humesha keliye!!” she yelled out, frustrated.

Vikrant's eyes widened at her words.

“NAAHINNN!” He screamed out, jumping from the bathtub to stop her.

Mannat’s gaze landed on him, completely stunned at her butt naked boss standing right in front of her.

Vikrant realized what he did and instinctively put his hands in front of his “bachi kuchi izzat”.

“SALUJA SIR JI, YE KYA BARTAV HAI?!” She screeched, turning all shades of red.

Her eyes were squeezed shut, unable to forget what she saw a few seconds ago.

“Control Mannat, control!” she told herself, trying to not blush at her thoughts.

Vikrant ran back to his previous hiding spot and said “Tum nahin jaa sakti Mannat!”

She frowned “KYUNN?!!”

“Ky..un..ki..ummm..woh..me..meraa..towel! Me..raa TOWEL KAUN DEGAAA?!” He blurted out, proud of his cover up. Vikrant smiled to himself, satisfied with his "bahana".

“HUHh..”

Did he really just say that? She thought.

“Woh aapki fiancée hi de sakti hai, aur woh main nahin hun!” she replied dryly, before exiting the bathroom and breathing a sign of relief.

She looked around and quickly scrambled out of the restaurant when she saw no one.

Vikrant chuckled at himself and blushed a little after the moment he shared with Mannat. He was about to come out of the bathtub, when he saw Puneet swinging his towel in his hand, a teasing smile on his face.

Vikrant knew he was screwed. Puneet would never let him live this down.

Puneet cleared his throat “I think you forgot something very important Vikrant..”

“Shut up, and give that back to me!”

Puneet chuckled before throwing the towel to his face.

“There is nothing left to cover up Vikrant, everyone saw your “little” mishap!”

Vikrant groaned in embarrassment, hiding his face in the towel!

THE END

smiley37smiley37

This emoji describes my haal well after reading this update.

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Posted: 1 months ago
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Originally posted by: Pakhisingh

Hilarious it is smiley37smiley37, and very nicely put writeup.

I get to read both the parts together yeyeye!

Haha, glad you enjoyed it smiley27

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