Manvik OS: Broken hearts - Page 3

Loved it Nita. Really loved how you portrayed both Mannat and Vikrant's emotions. This is the kind of confrontation I wish to see in the show when it happens.

The dialogues were heartbreaking and so perfect. Could feel Mannat's pain and Vikrant's helplessness while reading it.

Thank you for this great piece of writing Nita. Do write more. I would to read your work.

Originally posted by: Uma85

Wow..Great start Nita !!! Felt so sad ..Loved the title too

Thank you! I had a hard time trying to figure out what to title this piece... glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: Mona_HappyLife

Beautiful writing ❣️

Why don't we get such scenes on screen 😪😪

Thank you! It would be nice to see something like this play out on screen.

Originally posted by: Moor278

This is so beautiful Neeta.... this is the kind of rant/outburst I want Mannat to have

Too good... thank you for penning it down

Thank you! I am waiting for Mannat to have an outburst as well... one that really shows how she feels and what she is going through.

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

Loved it Nita. Really loved how you portrayed both Mannat and Vikrant's emotions. This is the kind of confrontation I wish to see in the show when it happens.

The dialogues were heartbreaking and so perfect. Could feel Mannat's pain and Vikrant's helplessness while reading it.

Thank you for this great piece of writing Nita. Do write more. I would to read your work.

Thanks, Meera! I have really enjoyed reading your work as well