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Posted: 1 months ago
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Originally posted by: Saichintalli

Hi everyone... I am in air India flight.. and no screen is working... So I am bored and result is this....

After watching malla attempt to Maro thappad to mannu .... Yeh show wala may still make him believe malla, no idea ....if so they are doing bezzati of our loving Vikki.... That's why I felt at least we will save his izath in here... So let's dig in....

Apana seat belt pehan Kar rahiye turbulence bahut anewala hai....

a man and a woman are sitting in a spaceship looking at the stars

After embarrassing yet romantic encounter with vikranth in the bathroom, mannath heart started to race...she was thinking everything just happened while walking in a SM mansion corridor... Being so close to him is something she is trying to avoid with all her will but yeh Mr .saluja sir aaj kal har jagah ajathe hai.... Waise somewhere she is also liking this closeness ... Thinking all this ,blushing mannath entered into a hall full of people dancing crazily with loud music and in between them happily dancing malla....

Instantly reality hit mannath..and her happiness vanished in thin air ...anger and guilt creeped in ... She gave invisible tapli to herself

"Mannath , yeh Thu Kya soch rahi hai, mr.salujha sir Teri best friend ka fiance hai and tum ne apne bf ko promise bhi kiya, hosh mei AAA"

Telling this to herself she went towards malla ... Suddenly lights went dim and everyone started to laugh....and mannath is surprised to see who they are laughing at, Mr.salujha sir with hand prints glowing all over his face

Random girl: arre vikranth yeh Kya hai... Hum sab tumhare cocktail party mei dance Kar rahe ... Lekin tum secretly kiske saath romance Kar rahe ho...

Suddenly mannath realize they are her handprints on his face and her hands are also glowing.... She tries to hide them but it's too late... She heard a huge voice charging at her .....

Malla: " mannath tumhari ithni himath , mere fiance ke saath aise Karne ki.... You are so shameless and you promised me aise kuch nahi "

shouting this she brazed towards mannath to slap.... But before reaching mannath a strong hand stopped her, non other than the vikranth saluja, mannath's bkb ... His face is so red .... He held malla's hand and roared

" Don't you dare touch her and thumari himath kaise hui mannath SE aise baath Karne ki"

" Vikranth... Tum mujhse aise bath nahi Kar sakthe ho ,vo bhi iss mannath kaliye ... Mai tumhari fiance hu"

" Fiance ? Tumhe bhi patha hai ki yeh sab dra...."

Before he completes the sentence ars comes there and drags malla to her room...

He turns back to mannat to find her no where... Even while shouting at Mallika he can see how mannath is trembling as everyone in party blaming her ... That's when it hit him hard and realized how he messed up everything. He calls Sammy and ask him to end the party.

He searched outhouse and SM but no trace of mannu ... Then he went to their spot Bombay seashore.... There in the dark he saw his girl crying out loud breaking the silence around her far from Mumbai noice ....

" Miss mannath...."

Mannath with full anger not even looking at vikranth face" aap kyu aye yaha , sunane kaliye... Chala jayega yaha seh, I don't need anyone"

" Miss mannath please meri taraf dheko.."

" Kyu dhekna.... Oh ya aap ko bhi yahi lagraha hoga na, that I did all this to pasav you ... Aap ko apne pass rakne kaliye jaise malla ko neetu mam ko lagtha hai"

Now vikranth is hurt , so he turns her with full force to face him " really tumhe sach mei lagtha hai Mai tumhare barre mei aisa sochtha hu"

" Kyu nahi lagega ,aaj tak kab aap mujhpe barosa kiya without proofs, kabi nahi"

" Really miss mannath, freezer kaand mei tumhare ek baar kehane SE punnet ko mare without any proofs, chori ke time ... Meine barosa kiya tha tumpe even before you proving urself,even stood against my mom for taunting your mom.... mom ne, ars ne sab ne bola poison cake ke peche tum ho, Maine ek sec kaliye bhi tum bar doubt kiya ???? Ño never....

Yeh sab Maine sunane kaliye nahi bolraha hu.... Yeh dhikane ki try Kar Raha hu, there are situations I trusted you blindly..... Coming to Mom and your fight.... Tum bolo Mai aise kaise ek ko choose Kar saktha huuu... I trust you both and I can't believe any one of you tried to kill me so I never regret of not choosing anyone of you that day... But yes I did one mistake that day , jab sare log tumhari parvarish ke bare mei bol rahe the, I should have stopped them.... Vo Maine nahi kiya ... Vuska regret Abhi bhi hai....and after today that will never happen ...so from here on I don't accept not trustworthy track" vikranth poured his heart out with tears in his eyes...

But this time she also got tears looking at him but she didn't want to back off this time ,so she asked little softly " tho chunri ka Kya karu"

Listening to this vikranth laughs with pain .... "Yes I believed that you spoiled the chunri but that is not because I doubt you but because I trusted my love .. mujhe laga jaise Mai tumse Pyaar kartha huu vaise hi tum karthi ho... Jaise Mai tumhe kisi ke saath nahi dhek saktha vaise tum bhi mujhe kisike saath nahi dheksakthi.."

Mannath is little shocked fir yeh Shaadi and functions .

Vikranth tells the whole story, after telling everything looking at her confused face " don't worry I will not ask you to believe me , I know how difficult it is trust one in your loved ones... I created this mess, I will clear this and will come back to you."

Both leave from there....

Next morning saluja mansion...mannath walked into SM analyzing everything that happened last night ... To her surprise the hall is full of reporters setting up their cameras and getting ready .... After 5 min whole family of saluja's except vikranth and raisinghs entered with confusion written all over the face... It's clear to mannath none of them know what's happening there . ...

Then entered the vikranth saluja 🔥 🔥 🔥 carrying attitude of confidence and on stage ....

" Hi everyone, aap sab ko patha hai I have so many restaurants all over the world but the one closest to my heart is mezabani.... Babaji ki vajhe SE mezbanni is doing pretty well but I keep on thinking aur Kuch tho chahiye... Then came this idea... Mallika please" ( BTS, Sammy told Mallika , that vikranth asked her to open some brand when he calls her on stage+ she is also little scared after the mess she created yesterday).

As soon as malla comes and press the remote, curtain open and here comes MEZBANNI SHADI MUBARAK 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏.

Everyone one surprised and stunned 😯 😯

Vikranth again " mezabani meaning Mehaman Navaji and humare desh mei sab SE jadha Mehaman Navaji shadi mein hothi hai.... That's why we are introducing this..."

Everyone clap but vikranth stops them " iss sab claps ka hak dar yeh idea dhena wali hai Mallika, "

Mannath, Mallika,roni ,gagan are surprised

Punnu " yeh vikranth har roj Kuch na kuch khaand kartha hai ....kaand king hogaya.... Maine socha Mai saluja kandhan ka kaand king but yeh tho aghe nikal gaya"

Ars is over the cloud

Neetu is little jealous

Vikranth again " not only idea even the marketing strategy was suggested by her"

Now everyone including malla is listening all ears open...

Vikranth " first I suggested let's throw a party but what happens people will come listen and forget , they don't get to taste every aspect what we are trying to offer, so malla by best friend suggested let's throw a big marriage party ... I said how is that possible ,in our house no one is ready to get married, they she suggested fake marriage of me and hers and who are good than two best friends to fake a marriage party"

Everyone was shocked , ars tried to say something but gagan stopped her and roni scolded neetu when she said vikranth.... Malla is shocked and not even able to process...

"First I was so afraid of taking up this idea... Because what if this idea backfires, mezabani ka reputation stake pe ajayega and humara Sara status investment stake pe ajayega.... But malla encouraged me by giving confidence, thank you malla, you are true best friend" vikranth told this looking at ars as if giving warnings.... Ars took the hint and stopped malla who by now gone shout

Reporter" is that mean you and malla never want to get married?"

Vikranth" no, we just faked the rasam to get our mezbanni shadi Mubarak some publicity , we didn't even do any rasam, not even the chunri rasam.... But we tried to show all that included in each shadi ...first class decor ,food and everything....aap ko sare pics miljatega from by PA sammy "

Report: btw why don't you want to marry malla

Vikranth" bcoz she is my best friends and also I am committed to someone else..."

Sudden buzz started and mannath flustered

Reports: koun hai sir...

Vikranth: " bolunga jarur bathavunga, when she accepts my proposal....😉 App sab bhi humara fake shadi ka food taste kariye ga"

Ronnie is feeling so proud of his son...

Sammy diverted all reports to outside and neetu started her rant .... Vikranth tum aise nahi Kar sakthe ho.... I know in sab ke peche vus ladki ka haath hai... Vikranth is like " bus mom.... Yes I love mannath, wo meri mohabat hai... Lekin usne Abhi tak accept bhi nahi kiya, to make her accept her feelings Maine aur malla ne milkar yeh drama kiya but yesterday night I understood how bad move is that.... That's why I am stopping this drama right now ...

Looking at mannath" reason jho bhi ho , Abhi vusko Mera upar trust nahi hai... So I will wait till vuska trust regain ho and mujhe accept Kare"

...…....……......................................

After few years , in the garden of beautiful bungalow... Father and son are doing their regular morning routine of watering and nurturing of organic vegetable plants ....

A beautiful girl is doing yoga in the lawn..with her little brother and sister laughing and trying to imitate her..

"Breakfast aajov sab " our beautiful mannath entered the scene with some authentic Indian yet healthy breakfast....

" Arre yaar yeh Rahul bhi na, Kya Kya Kar tha hai" girl uttering looking at her phone sitting on the small breakfast table setup in the lawn itself ( after her yoga)...

" Kya huva manvi " mannath questioned her 22 year old daughter.

" Dheko na mom, yeh Rahul... Abhi tak Maine uska proposal accept bhi nahi kiya aur yeh Banda insta Facebook mei committed status laga Kar ghoom Raha hai... Uprse aaj sham ko party ka plan bi Kar Raha hai apni frnds ke saath"

Mannath looking at her husband controlling her laugh " bus ithna he... Manvi trust me he is far better... Kuch log tho Pyaar accept karvane kaliye fake engagement fake shadi bhi plan karlethe hai"

Suddenly the son and father duo who are watering plants look at each other and father laughs at his son teasingly....

" Oh really , aise log bhi hothe hai, I can't believe it mom" chuckled manvi

" Ha beta ji hothe hi, aur kahi aur nahi aapke samne hai, vo aap ki papa hai" Ronnie added

Manvi spitted water and started laughing" seriously Papa, u did it"

" Ha baba Maine he kiya tha.... Pyaar mei ise choti moti stupidity hojathi hai, waise in my defense aapki mummy ki attention ithne sare issues SE hatakar meri taraf grab Karne kaliye kiya tha.... But aapki mummy Abhi tak mujhe taunt karthi hai.." vikranth spoke throwing towel on mannath lovingly

Mannath ,manvik, Ronnie together " choti nahi moti mistake hai"

And everyone started laughing together.... And happiness continues with choti moti galtiya....

Yeh hai meri kayali palov kaise laga... Bolo bolo

Its too good 😍🥰...amazing 👏

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Posted: 1 months ago
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Wah! The climax to the engagement here is fab! smiley32 I want show ka Vikku to steal this idea now! Mukta mam’ if you’re listening smiley13

Too cute! Loved the confrontation and last scene with their future kids! Manvi is a cute name yaar! Socha hi nahin smiley9

Thank you for writing this amazing OS!

Have a safe flight smiley27

Edited by kashmayurfan - 1 months ago
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Posted: 1 months ago
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Originally posted by: Saichintalli

a plate of rice with meat and vegetables on itplease leave your lovely comments on my first os

hello ..where r u going by sir I dia ? And u have internet in the flight and woh bhi in air india? Its a miracle ✨️ anyway it's beautiful long story u have written. Very nice 👌
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Posted: 1 months ago
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Sai, this is amazing!smiley32 Really enjoyed it. smiley27smiley27

What a plot! smiley32 We need this brainy Vikrant in the show. Kudos to the exit plan. Took me by surprise. Loved Vikrant’s confession. smiley42 The climax with ManVik's children and Ronnie was very sweet.

Do give us more stories... smiley31smiley27

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Posted: 1 months ago
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so sorry for the late reply, have been away.

Wow your exit plan for Vikku was just so clever, completely believable how he masterminds it in front of the media, learnt from ARS who has used this way to try to stop him objecting. Lucky for him it works brilliantly.

Your future family scene is the perfect ending, just how ManVik will be, teasing lovey-dovey forever ❤️‍🔥❤️…….. no redemption for Neetu dadi?!🤣

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