Ties That Bind, Ties That Break2 PreeRan Shaurya SS

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Ties That Bind, Ties That Break2 Part 1

This is the season2 of my SS Ties that bind,ties that break.This is not the continuation of season1,but an alternative version of season1.This is suggested by my dearest friend Salley.This plot belongs to her.I just developed it into scenes using my imagination. Most of the scenes of this chapter are taken from season1 with slight changes.This is completely a family story without any love angle.

Thank you so much Sydell for the beautiful cover page.

Maths professor Raghav Jindal was teaching Maths to his children Rajveer,Kavya and Shaurya at home.

Raghav asked some formulas to Shaurya.Shaurya kept quiet while Rajveer said the formulas fast.

Raghav:Look how brilliant Rajveer is at Mathematics. But you can't even say a formula properly.Go and wash Rajveer's clothes.That's your punishment.

Raghav threw Rajveer's clothes including the undergarments at Shaurya's face.

Raghav:Wash them now.

Preeta:Raghav,what are you doing?

Raghav:Preeta,stay away from this.

Preeta:But I am his mother Raghav.

Raghav:This is between a Maths teacher and his student,not between a father and his son.So his mother should not interfere.

Preeta looked at Shaurya washing Rajveer's clothes helplessly.



The next day Raghav asked the same formulas to Shaurya.Shaurya said the wrong answer.Raghav took the cane and started beating him.Preeta,Rajveer and Kavya were crying.

Preeta:Please stop it Raghav.

But Raghav did not listen to Preeta.


Shaurya,Rajveer were Kavya were sitting together.Shaurya was making a small musical instrument with some tools.Finally it became successful and music started playing in it.

Preeta:It is so nice Shaurya.You have immense talent.

Shaurya smiled.

Shaurya started singing with the instrument.Preeta,Rajveer and Kavya were dancing.

Raghav came there along with his friend Ravinder who was the English teacher of Shaurya.The angry Raghav took the musical instrument and put it in a garbage cover.

Raghav:This should be destroyed.I am going to throw it in the waste disposal area.

All became sad.Shaurya started crying.

Ravinder:What are you saying Raghav?You should encourage Shaurya to make such things.He is do talented.

Raghav:First let him study.Do you know how how marks he scored for Maths?

Ravinder:Shaurya,how much did you score for Maths?

Shaurya:60.

Raghav:Just 60.But Rajveer scored 99.Even an ordinary worker's son in his class got 100/100 for maths.But Shaurya brought shame to a Maths Professor like me by scoring low marks.

Ravinder:So what?Nothing is going to happen if Shaurya doesn't score 100/100 for maths.

Raghav:The world is surviving because of maths.Those who cannot score well for maths is a big zero.

Everyone became dull.



Shaurya made a small machine.Raghav took it with him to dump in the waste disposal area making Shaurya upset.



Raghav met Ravinder.

Raghav:Ravinder,I want your help.

Ravinder:What help?

Raghav:Shaurya is getting low marks for all the subjects.

Ravinder:But he is getting pass marks.

Raghav:That's not enough.I want him to be a famous Mathematician like me.For that he should be failed in his 8th grade.You are his class teacher too.You exclude his name in the list of the students who passed the 8th grade.

Ravinder was shocked.

Ravinder:How can I do that when Shaurya is not such a bad student?He passes in all the subjects.

Raghav:Only if he fails he will be determined to work harder and score high marks.



Ravinder purposefully made Shaurya fail in 8th grade.

Shaurya was shocked to see his answer papers where even the correct answers were cut off by the teachers.He approached Ravinder in his house.

Shaurya:I wrote the answers which you taught me Sir.Then why did you cut it and make me fail?

Ravinder looked down as could not face him because of guilt.

Shaurya:Now onwards I won't study anything.

Ravinder was shocked.

Shaurya walked away.

Ravinder became upset.



The angry Shaurya burnt his school books and tore Raghav's clothes.

Raghav could not control himself.

Raghav:This much arrogant you are?How dare you burn your school books which are Saraswati Devi's assets?You destroyed your father's clothes also?

Shaurya:You are not my father.You are a monster.

Raghav boiled with anger:You talked to your father with disrespect.This much guts you have?

Raghav took the cane and beat him.




Shaurya was crying in his room.Preeta went near him.

Preeta:Shaurya!

Shaurya:Maa!

Shaurya hugged her and cried.

Shaurya:I don't want to study anymore Maa,I will not step inside the school again.

Preeta:Just to show anger towards your father and Ravinder Sir you decided to stop studying?

Shaurya:My so called Monster dad and my own teacher betrayed me.My monster dad wants me to score full marks on Maths.Right?But I will stop my studies itself to hurt him like he hurt me always.

Preeta:You are becoming rebellous beta.But if you stop studying to take revenge on your dad,it will only destroy your future.If you are uneducated not just your father,but the whole society will make fun of you which I can't tolerate as a mother.

Shaurya:But I want to defeat my dad.I can do that only by stopping my studies against his wish.

Preeta:You can hurt your dad like that.But you cannot win nor you can defeat him.If you really want to win,you should prove to your dad that you can also be successful in your life.For that you should complete your education Shaurya.

Shaurya:But I can never be good at Maths Maa.

Preeta:Who told you that you can't be good at Maths?You are already getting 60%.If you work a little more harder you can score better.Actually your father does'nt clear your doubts or teach you peacefully.Instead of doing that,whenever you ask him doubts he loses his temper and beats you.So you started hating Maths.That's why you are unable to study it well.If you get a good teacher,you will be able to score well in Maths.

Shaurya:Are you sure Maa?

Preeta:Yes Shaurya.Don't you trust me?

Shaurya:Yes Maa.I believe you.You have given me confidence.

Preeta smiled.

Preeta:I will take you to a good Maths teacher.But let it be a secret.Your father should not know about your tuition class.

Shaurya:Okay Maa.



Preeta took Shaurya to a Maths teacher.

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Posted: 1 months ago
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Raghav I Hate Him Again

His Beating Shaurya

Good Preeta Took Him To A Maths Teacher

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Part 1

Great update... well written

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Ties That Bind, Ties That Break2 Part 2

Preeta took Shaurya to a Maths teacher.

Preeta:Shaurya...Miss Preesha is your tuition teacher.She was my schoolmate.

Shaurya:Good evening Preesha Miss.

Preesha:Good evening Shaurya.After school hours you come here daily.I will teach you Maths.

Shaurya:But will you beat me?

Preesha became dull.

Preesha:Poor child is scared.

Preeta:Because he was always beaten by his father who used to teach him Maths before.

Preesha:No wonder that he lost interest in Maths.

Preesha caressed Saransh's head and said:I will never beat you my child.So you don't need to worry.

Shaurya was relieved.

Shaurya:But will I be able to study Maths well?

Preesha smiled:Of course yes.Slowly slowly you will improve.

Shaurya and Preeta smiled.




Shaurya started his secret tuition.

Without knowing that seeing Shaurya at home,Raghav said:This useless fellow has sworn that he will never study.Even I have decided not to teach this arrogant boy.So for the next Maths exam he will get zero.

Shaurya was irritated.He murmured:Monster!

Preeta got irritated.

Preeta:Good that you stopped teaching him Raghav.You were too cruel to him.He is studying on his own.So he is having peace of mind.

Raghav smiled in a sarcastic way:That's the biggest joke.He does'nt have the capacity to learn Maths.Even if he tries he can't study as he burnt all his books.

Preeta stared at him angrily.



Preeta:He burnt the previous year's books Raghav.I bought his new academic year's books.

Raghav:Whatever!

Preeta whispered to Shaurya:Never mind him Shaurya.You just focus on your mission.

Shaurya nodded.





For the next Maths exam,Shaurya got 68%.

Preeta:Wow Shaurya!You have a very good improvement.

Shaurya:But I did'nt get 100 percent.

Preeta:Full marks are not needed Shaurya.Nobody knows the whole Mathematics.You try your best.With that itself you can succeed in life.Because hard works always gives us success.This is a stepping stone.You will improve day by day.

Shaurya smiled.



For the next Maths exam,Shaurya scored 70 percent marks.


Preesha congratulated Shaurya:Congrats Shaurya.I feel proud as a teacher seeing your vast improvement in Maths.

Shaurya:It's all because of you Ma'am.You were really patient with me while teaching.If it was my dad,he would have beaten me now complaining that I did'nt score good marks.

Preesha felt sad for him.


Shaurya:Thank you for encouraging me to do better Ma'am.You made the class interesting.So I got hooked to Maths.

Preesha smiled.




Raghav was walking away ignoring Shaurya.

Suddenly Preeta walked towards Raghav and held his hand.He looked at her.

Preeta asked Raghav:Raghav,don't you want to know how much Shaurya scored for his Maths exam?




Raghav smiled sarcastically:I don't need to ask you to know his marks Preeta.I am sure that he got zero.

Preeta became dull.

Raghav hugged Rajveer and Kavya seeing their high marks for Maths.

Preeta thought:Sadly Raghav does'nt even see the progress in Shaurya's graph.





Shaurya started becoming more confident in doing Maths.

Once he saw a little girl crying in his school.She was Tara who was his junior in school.

Shaurya asked her:Why are you crying Tara?

Tara:Maths is so tough.I am unable to solve the Maths problems.

Shaurya wiped her tears.

Shaurya:Don't worry Tara.I will help you to do Maths.


Shaurya helped her to do Maths and she became happy.

From then onwards every lunch break Shaurya started taking tuition for Tara.After that other kids also started coming to Shaurya to seek help to do Maths.So he started taking Maths tuition for others too.

Later on Shaurya started taking Maths tuition after his own tuition classes with Preesha.Without Raghav's knowledge Preeta arranged her dadi's house for Raghav's tuition.




Time passed....


Shaurya is in 12 STD now.He showed huge improvement in maths.Now he gets above 90% for Maths.

Shaurya to Preesha:It's because of you that I reached this level which I never expected to reach.I don't have words to thank you...


Preesha smiled.



Shaurya:And my Maa who gave me the mental strength and confidence to study.

Preeta smiled at him.

Preeta was very happy.

She thanked Preesha:I can't thank you enough Preesha.Because of you,Shaurya started loving Maths and became brilliant.

Preesha:Shaurya was always brilliant in Maths.It's just that the atmosphere was not right for him before.




Shaurya wrote his 12th STD exam.He got 95 percent for Maths.

Ravinder who was very happy with the result informed this to Raghav.

Ravinder:You underestimated Shaurya.But now look at his result.

Raghav looked at Shaurya's mark list.


Raghav could not believe his eyes seeing Shaurya's marks.




Preeta took Shaurya to Raghav's room and shared the happy news with him.

Raghav:I think there is evaluation or calculation error. Otherwise your brainless son cannot score marks for Maths.

Preeta and Shaurya were shocked by Raghav's reaction.Shaurya really became dull.


Preeta:What are you saying Raghav?Can't you appreciate his hard work?
Raghav:Preeta,I know Shaurya very well.He can never work hard.





Shaurya walked out in frustration.Preeta followed him.

Shaurya:He is really a monster.My hard work has no value now?

Preeta:Don't think like that Shaurya.One day he will understand everything.

Shaurya:A Monster will never change.

Preeta became upset.



Shaurya met with an unexpected accident.


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Salley

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Thank u very much for the lovely comments




Ties That Bind, Ties That Break2 Part 2

Preeta took Shaurya to a Maths teacher.

Preeta:Shaurya...Miss Preesha is your tuition teacher.She was my schoolmate.

Shaurya:Good evening Preesha Miss.

Preesha:Good evening Shaurya.After school hours you come here daily.I will teach you Maths.

Shaurya:But will you beat me?

Preesha became dull.

Preesha:Poor child is scared.

Preeta:Because he was always beaten by his father who used to teach him Maths before.

Preesha:No wonder that he lost interest in Maths.

Preesha caressed Saransh's head and said:I will never beat you my child.So you don't need to worry.

Shaurya was relieved.

Shaurya:But will I be able to study Maths well?

Preesha smiled:Of course yes.Slowly slowly you will improve.

Shaurya and Preeta smiled.




Shaurya started his secret tuition.

Without knowing that seeing Shaurya at home,Raghav said:This useless fellow has sworn that he will never study.Even I have decided not to teach this arrogant boy.So for the next Maths exam he will get zero.

Shaurya was irritated.He murmured:Monster!

Preeta got irritated.

Preeta:Good that you stopped teaching him Raghav.You were too cruel to him.He is studying on his own.So he is having peace of mind.

Raghav smiled in a sarcastic way:That's the biggest joke.He does'nt have the capacity to learn Maths.Even if he tries he can't study as he burnt all his books.

Preeta stared at him angrily.



Preeta:He burnt the previous year's books Raghav.I bought his new academic year's books.

Raghav:Whatever!

Preeta whispered to Shaurya:Never mind him Shaurya.You just focus on your mission.

Shaurya nodded.





For the next Maths exam,Shaurya got 68%.

Preeta:Wow Shaurya!You have a very good improvement.

Shaurya:But I did'nt get 100 percent.

Preeta:Full marks are not needed Shaurya.Nobody knows the whole Mathematics.You try your best.With that itself you can succeed in life.Because hard works always gives us success.This is a stepping stone.You will improve day by day.

Shaurya smiled.



For the next Maths exam,Shaurya scored 70 percent marks.


Preesha congratulated Shaurya:Congrats Shaurya.I feel proud as a teacher seeing your vast improvement in Maths.

Shaurya:It's all because of you Ma'am.You were really patient with me while teaching.If it was my dad,he would have beaten me now complaining that I did'nt score good marks.

Preesha felt sad for him.


Shaurya:Thank you for encouraging me to do better Ma'am.You made the class interesting.So I got hooked to Maths.

Preesha smiled.




Raghav was walking away ignoring Shaurya.

Suddenly Preeta walked towards Raghav and held his hand.He looked at her.

Preeta asked Raghav:Raghav,don't you want to know how much Shaurya scored for his Maths exam?




Raghav smiled sarcastically:I don't need to ask you to know his marks Preeta.I am sure that he got zero.

Preeta became dull.

Raghav hugged Rajveer and Kavya seeing their high marks for Maths.

Preeta thought:Sadly Raghav does'nt even see the progress in Shaurya's graph.





Shaurya started becoming more confident in doing Maths.

Once he saw a little girl crying in his school.She was Tara who was his junior in school.

Shaurya asked her:Why are you crying Tara?

Tara:Maths is so tough.I am unable to solve the Maths problems.

Shaurya wiped her tears.

Shaurya:Don't worry Tara.I will help you to do Maths.




Shaurya helped her to do Maths and she became happy.

From then onwards every lunch break Shaurya started taking tuition for Tara.After that other kids also started coming to Shaurya to seek help to do Maths.So he started taking Maths tuition for others too.

Later on Shaurya started taking Maths tuition after his own tuition classes with Preesha.Without Raghav's knowledge Preeta arranged her dadi's house for Raghav's tuition.




Time passed....


Shaurya is in 12 STD now.He showed huge improvement in maths.Now he gets above 90% for Maths.

Shaurya to Preesha:It's because of you that I reached this level which I never expected to reach.I don't have words to thank you...


Preesha smiled.



Shaurya:And my Maa who gave me the mental strength and confidence to study.

Preeta smiled at him.

Preeta was very happy.

She thanked Preesha:I can't thank you enough Preesha.Because of you,Shaurya started loving Maths and became brilliant.

Preesha:Shaurya was always brilliant in Maths.It's just that the atmosphere was not right for him before.




Shaurya wrote his 12th STD exam.He got 95 percent for Maths.

Ravinder who was very happy with the result informed this to Raghav.

Ravinder:You underestimated Shaurya.But now look at his result.

Raghav looked at Shaurya's mark list.


Raghav could not believe his eyes seeing Shaurya's marks.




Preeta took Shaurya to Raghav's room and shared the happy news with him.

Raghav:I think there is evaluation or calculation error. Otherwise your brainless son cannot score marks for Maths.

Preeta and Shaurya were shocked by Raghav's reaction.Shaurya really became dull.


Preeta:What are you saying Raghav?Can't you appreciate his hard work?
Raghav:Preeta,I know Shaurya very well.He can never work hard.





Shaurya walked out in frustration.Preeta followed him.

Shaurya:He is really a monster.My hard work has no value now?

Preeta:Don't think like that Shaurya.One day he will understand everything.

Shaurya:A Monster will never change.

Preeta became upset.


Shaurya met with an unexpected accident.

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Poor Shaurya His Working Hard In Maths But His Dad Won't Be Happy For His Hard Work

Now He Has An Accident Too

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Part 2

Excellent update.... superbly written


update soon

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Ties That Bind, Ties That Break2 Part 3

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Shaurya met with an unexpected accident.

Shaurya who was admitted in the hospital was connected to the ventilator.

Preeta,Rajveer and Kavya burst into tears.

The egoistic Raghav too lost his control and shed tears.

As they were busy crying,they failed to notice Raghav's tears of pain.


The doctor informed Preeta and others:Shaurya is out of danger now.

They were relieved.

Dr:But unfortunately he has forgotten his childhood.

They were shocked.


Shaurya got discharged from the hospital and was taken home.

Rajveer and Kavya talked about their cute childhood moments to make Shaurya remember his childhood.But Shaurya felt disturbed as he could'nt recall anything.

Shaurya:Why I can't remember anything?

They all became sad.

Preeta thought:In a way it's good that Shaurya can't remember his childhood.Because remembering how much Raghav tortured him in childhood is traumatic.

Shaurya could not understand why Raghav was indifferent to him.

Shaurya asked Preeta:Maa,why is dad avoiding me alone?Did anything happen in childhood which made him angry with me?Did I do any mistake to him?

Preeta became dull.

She thought:How can I tell the truth to Shaurya?

Preeta:Nothing like that Shaurya.You are over thinking.Just focus on your studies.

Preeta went near Raghav.

Preeta:Even when your son is not in a good health you can't talk to him?

Raghav was silent.

Preeta:Shaurya doesn't even remember why you are indifferent with him.But for you, only your ego matters.I know that you are sad inside.But you pretend to be not caring because of your stupid ego.

Raghav's heart was pricked by her words.


Shaurya joined the college for BSC Maths.



Raghav made a surprise visit to Preeta's Dadi's home.Dadi became dull seeing him as Shaurya was taking tuition for the students there.

Dadi thought:How did Raghav land up here now?What if he sees Shaurya here?

Raghav:Naughty dadi...what are you thinking?

She gave him a fake smile:Nothing.

Raghav:Don't try to fool me naughty dadi.

She was embarrassed.

Raghav entered the house.

Raghav:Dadi...I brought fruits for you.They are fresh.It's good for your health.

Dadi took the fruits from him and thanked him.

Dadi:Thank you.

Suddenly Raghav heard some voices.He heard Shaurya saying formulas.

Raghav:Shaurya?

Dadi:No... actually ....

Raghav followed the sound.He was surprised to see Shaurya taking Maths class for students.

Raghav was watching them without their knowledge.He was more and more surprised.

Raghav thought:How is it possible?Shaurya was so bad at maths.But how brilliantly and perfectly he is teaching them Maths!His knowledge in Maths is beyond his age.Only an excellent Mathematician can teach Maths like this.

Dadi came there and called out his name softly:Raghav!

Raghav just stared at dadi and went home.



Raghav confronted Preeta regarding it.

Preeta was shocked.

Raghav:Tell me Preeta.What's happening here?

Preeta: There is a lot which you don't know Raghav.

Raghav:Tell me everything.I want to know everything.

Preeta told him whatever happened in Shaurya's life after Shaurya decided to stop his studies.

Raghav was shocked.

Raghav:Why did you hide this from me Preeta?

Preeta:How can I not hide it Raghav?

You stopped talking to Shaurya after he fought with you for failing him in 8th STD.You wouldn't have even allowed me to take him to Preesha for tuition.You would have said that no tuition teacher can teach him Maths.He became bad at Maths because of over strictness Raghav.If you had been patient with a slow learner like Shaurya he would have improved gradually.Not everyone can be fast learners like you,Rajveer and Kavya.I sent him for secret tuition.Otherwise you would have ruined it also.When he scored good marks for 12th STD you insulted him by saying that it's the valuation mistake.That time you didn't believe in his calibre which broke his heart.So I also told him not to tell you anything about his life.Only you are responsible for this Raghav.

Guilt covered Raghav's mind.All his past cruel actions towards Shaurya came into his mind.He remembered how cruel was he to Shaurya in childhood.Tears got filled in his eyes.

Raghav thought:Preeta is right.I should have given a chance to Shaurya to study.But instead of that I tagged him as a useless fellow.But now the same person is doing complex sums in Maths.

Raghav remembered how Preeta and he spent time with the little Shaurya happily.

Raghav's eyes became wet.

Raghav:I was so loving towards Shaurya when he was little.But my teaching made me brutal towards my own son.Like Shaurya calls me,I am a monster.

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