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Narrative Ninjas

Posted: 7 months ago
#11

Madhu, beautifully written evoking the emotions of those left behind, the hapless kin of the brave warriors. Torn between love, duty, faith, anxiety, dread, anguish - theirs is a fate few spare a thought for. Heart- rending.

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Dream Weavers

Posted: 7 months ago
#12

Originally posted by: Viswasruti

Salutations to all our soldiers

(A soliloquy by a soldier's wife)

This is a tribute to our brave soldiers and their families.👏

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I pushed aside my distress to hear your heroics in the battlefield

And I focused on the route you were gone, my dear

Recalling your warrior stride to take up the heroic action.

Spread my gaze on the path to see you come back.

Come once, riding on my wishes to share your smile.

Come, to rest your head for comfort on my waiting heart.

Blood, Fight, and the surrounding snow mountains...

Death, no one nearby, invincible hope as your friend.

Beyond heaven and hell, to safeguard your mother's pride

Left behind your kith and kin, you marched forward

In this awful darkness... extending my prayers to provide you safety.

Riding over clouds and wading through harsh seas.

Missiles on your shoulders, moving as a valiant soldier.

But, what a fool I am for thinking you as my own.

Calling you back to rest for a while before continuing your stride.

Yes, I am worried about you and your whereabouts.

Yes, my heart is longing to see you... once, once again

Must be sleeping on a hard rock, using the rifle as a pillow.

Counting the stars to make a medallion to adorn your nation!

My only wish at present is come back my dear soldier

To see the glow in your wife's eyes, to caress your child's head

Come back, my dear soldier, to salute the tricolour flag!

With pride, once again, to say Jai Hind.

wow. Really a beautiful and heart touching words. smiley32

Hopefully, this can somehow reach them.

Situations and your poem made me emotional.

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Romcom Reigners

Posted: 7 months ago
#13

Great Job Applause GIF by Originals by originals

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Posted: 7 months ago
#14

Wow Wonderfully Written

Madhu

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Posted: 7 months ago
#15

Two words, beautiful and emotional.smiley32

Very well written Madhu.smiley31

Salute to all the soldiers who put their lives on the line to protect the nation.smiley27

Cheers..

Edited by Savera84 - 7 months ago
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Posted: 7 months ago
#16

Originally posted by: Viswasruti

Salutations to all our soldiers

(A soliloquy by a soldier's wife)

This is a tribute to our brave soldiers and their families.👏

--------------

I pushed aside my distress to hear your heroics in the battlefield

And I focused on the route you were gone, my dear

Recalling your warrior stride to take up the heroic action.

Spread my gaze on the path to see you come back.

Come once, riding on my wishes to share your smile.

Come, to rest your head for comfort on my waiting heart.

Blood, Fight, and the surrounding snow mountains...

Death, no one nearby, invincible hope as your friend.

Beyond heaven and hell, to safeguard your mother's pride

Left behind your kith and kin, you marched forward

In this awful darkness... extending my prayers to provide you safety.

Riding over clouds and wading through harsh seas.

Missiles on your shoulders, moving as a valiant soldier.

But, what a fool I am for thinking you as my own.

Calling you back to rest for a while before continuing your stride.

Yes, I am worried about you and your whereabouts.

Yes, my heart is longing to see you... once, once again

Must be sleeping on a hard rock, using the rifle as a pillow.

Counting the stars to make a medallion to adorn your nation!

My only wish at present is come back my dear soldier

To see the glow in your wife's eyes, to caress your child's head

Come back, my dear soldier, to salute the tricolour flag!

With pride, once again, to say Jai Hind.

Well written di ♥️

U r so talented ♥️♥️

Elegant n touching 😍

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Posted: 7 months ago
#17

Stay blessed, dear 🙏🙏

Edited by vyapti - 7 months ago
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Posted: 7 months ago
#18

Really nice soliloquy Madhu di and Nushkie

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Dream Weavers

Posted: 7 months ago
#19

The war came to a halt, and a cease-fire was declared. Peace reigns on both sides.

However, this soldier will never return to his mother.

With full state honours, she received his body, a glory that emanated from her tears.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FeI-9GDlbd0

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Posted: 7 months ago
#20

Proud of our Armed forces, we all should draw inspiration from their valour and love for our motherlandsmiley27

Beautiful words Madhu didismiley27

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