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Team TejNeil

Posted: 3 months ago

Originally posted by: Shirsha

I've written Neil's diary entry. smiley36 It's not as good as Pavitra's shayari but I wanted to write something too.

9th May, 2026

Dear Diary,

Let's delve into the realm of love today. I know, I know, I write my thoughts about love everyday. I have been writing about love since one year. But today I'll write something slightly different. I'll shed light on the uplifting nature of love. When I was a teenager I read a book written by a renowned author. In that book, it was written love could change a person's personality immensely. Even though I liked the writing style, the story and the complexities of relationships depicted in the book, I didn't believe in those particular words. I always thought only a person's own will and efforts could change him. Years passed, I forgot about the quotes and the book. Then one day a girl came into my life. When I saw her for the first time I couldn't take my eyes away from her big, captivating eyes. There was so much depth in those eyes that they reminded me of my favourite romantic poem. Yes, her eyes seemed like a poem to me. They're as expressive as my favourite poem. When I like a particular poem it doesn't go out of my mind. I think about the poem a lot and appreciate its beauty. Similarly, her eyes didn't go out of my mind. I couldn't understand what was happening to me. That's how I fell in love with my Aparajita. She's the one who rekindled my interest in music. Her mellifluous voice inspired me to sing again. Her dedication towards music reminded me of my old days. Gradually, I started changing because of her. She made me understand the importance of speaking up when required. Her boldness is one of her most admirable traits. I started prioritising my own emotions over the feelings of others and I never did that before. My love for Aparajita helped me become a better version myself. Now I understand what the author wanted to convey. Aparajita left me one year ago but my love for her grew stronger. Her absence made me realise her value even more. Aparajita is my strength, my inspiration and my best friend. Nobody can take her place and I'll love her till my last breath.

Beautiful, Shirsha! Neil's feelings have been so wonderfully described in this diary entry. Death may end Tejaswini's life, but never her place in his heart. We could have had a great love story but I think, this wasted potential has actually turned it into a forever-memorable one. Anyone that comes into Neil's life after Teju does not exist for me and for a lot of us. Not even death can steal the verses Neil has written in Tejaswini's name and memory.

It's #TejNeil forever. smiley27

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Posted: 3 months ago

Originally posted by: ThaneOfElsinore

Beautiful, Shirsha! Neil's feelings have been so wonderfully described in this diary entry. Death may end Tejaswini's life, but never her place in his heart. We could have had a great love story but I think, this wasted potential has actually turned it into a forever-memorable one. Anyone that comes into Neil's life after Teju does not exist for me and for a lot of us. Not even death can steal the verses Neil has written in Tejaswini's name and memory.

It's #TejNeil forever. smiley27

Thank you so much, Pavitra! Yes, Neil's lady love is Tejaswini only and nobody can take her place.

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Posted: 3 months ago

Ash bro, tumhe kaisa laga diary entry? Tejaswini ke eyes ke bare mein bohot kuch likkha maine. smiley36

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Posted: 3 months ago

Originally posted by: Shirsha

Ash bro, tumhe kaisa laga diary entry? Tejaswini ke eyes ke bare mein bohot kuch likkha maine. smiley36

Maine comment nhi kiya kya...

It was sweet and simple liked it....Teju ki eyes ufff .....smiley27

See see....

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Posted: 3 months ago

Originally posted by: ThaneOfElsinore

Qubool karna toh ek bahaana tha, dil ke gehre zakham chhupane ka,

Judaai ka dastoor tumne diya, par mohabbat ka haq kise chhuraane ka?

Neelkanth se milan toh likha tha taqdeer mein,

Par Aparajita ka pyaar unhe dikha nahi jo chhupa tha uske takreer mein?

Maut se darr nahi, lekin tere bagair marna ek sawal hai,

Ek baar gale lag ja, yahi toh meri aakhri misaal hai...

Maaf kardo galti ho gayi samajhne mein...Par Judaai na likhi thi kaaydo mein....jisse tumne apna liya...haq toh nhi chhina par khud ko mujhse chura liya....

Tumhara pyaar mere rag rag ka vaakya hai....

Bas samajh se pare ek andhruni khamoshi mujhe rok gayi....aur itne mein tum sab chhor gayi....

Ye shabd hi kaafi hai galatfahmiyo ko hataane mein....Kya sach hai main hoon tumhare dil ke dastane mein....

Bekhauf toh tumhari shaqshiyat hi hai ~maalum hai mujhe, par dar jaaya karo meri jaan basti hai tum mein ....

Ek aakhiri misaal hai par dhadkan ki kami dil ki pyaas na bujha rhi....itne karib ho ki saansein tumhara naam gunguna rhi....

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Posted: 3 months ago

I absolutely love listening to Ghazals! Urdu is an extremely beautiful language. I'm familiar with some Urdu words. After reading some shayari here, I also tried to write a shayari. I never wrote shayari before. When I was a kid, I used to write Bengali poems. But that's something very different. I don't know about Urdu grammar at all, so please don't be upset if any of you sees grammatical mistakes in my shayari.

Here's my first attempt at shayari. It's written from Neil's perspective.

Teri yaadein hi sahara hai ab mera

Tu hi fitoor, tu hi ibaadat hai ab mera

Teri aankhon ka noor meri rooh ka marham hai

Tere lafzon ka jadoo meri zindagi ka ilham hai

Tujhe main nahi dekh sakta, badnaseebi hai

Tu phir bhi meri chahat, meri aashna hai

Meri humdard, meri humsafar, tu hi meri taaqat hai

Tera ishq meri taqdeer, tera ishq meri manzil hai

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Posted: 3 months ago

Originally posted by: Shirsha

I absolutely love listening to Ghazals! Urdu is an extremely beautiful language. I'm familiar with some Urdu words. After reading some shayari here, I also tried to write a shayari. I never wrote shayari before. When I was a kid, I used to write Bengali poems. But that's something very different. I don't know about Urdu grammar at all, so please don't be upset if any of you sees grammatical mistakes in my shayari.

Here's my first attempt at shayari. It's written from Neil's perspective.

Teri yaadein hi sahara hai ab mera

Tu hi fitoor, tu hi ibaadat hai ab mera

Teri aankhon ka noor meri rooh ka marham hai

Tere lafzon ka jadoo meri zindagi ka ilham hai

Tujhe main nahi dekh sakta, badnaseebi hai

Tu phir bhi meri chahat, meri aashna hai

Meri humdard, meri humsafar, tu hi meri taaqat hai

Tera ishq meri taqdeer, tera ishq meri manzil hai

Aree well done di mujhe kuch nhi aata aap sab literature wale ho main toh STEM ka bachcha.....so kaheka sorry poetic way was good and on point.... short and simple as I always say....

I wrote a monologue as well share karunga agar ijaajat ho....

Edited by Ashane25 - 3 months ago
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Posted: 3 months ago

Originally posted by: Shirsha

I absolutely love listening to Ghazals! Urdu is an extremely beautiful language. I'm familiar with some Urdu words. After reading some shayari here, I also tried to write a shayari. I never wrote shayari before. When I was a kid, I used to write Bengali poems. But that's something very different. I don't know about Urdu grammar at all, so please don't be upset if any of you sees grammatical mistakes in my shayari.

Here's my first attempt at shayari. It's written from Neil's perspective.

Teri yaadein hi sahara hai ab mera

Tu hi fitoor, tu hi ibaadat hai ab mera

Teri aankhon ka noor meri rooh ka marham hai

Tere lafzon ka jadoo meri zindagi ka ilham hai

Tujhe main nahi dekh sakta, badnaseebi hai

Tu phir bhi meri chahat, meri aashna hai

Meri humdard, meri humsafar, tu hi meri taaqat hai

Tera ishq meri taqdeer, tera ishq meri manzil hai

Shirsha you are so talented ahh smiley42smiley27

This is beautiful 😍

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Posted: 3 months ago

Originally posted by: Ashane25

Maaf kardo galti ho gayi samajhne mein...Par Judaai na likhi thi kaaydo mein....jisse tumne apna liya...haq toh nhi chhina par khud ko mujhse chura liya....

Tumhara pyaar mere rag rag ka vaakya hai....

Bas samajh se pare ek andhruni khamoshi mujhe rok gayi....aur itne mein tum sab chhor gayi....

Ye shabd hi kaafi hai galatfahmiyo ko hataane mein....Kya sach hai main hoon tumhare dil ke dastane mein....

Bekhauf toh tumhari shaqshiyat hi hai ~maalum hai mujhe, par dar jaaya karo meri jaan basti hai tum mein ....

Ek aakhiri misaal hai par dhadkan ki kami dil ki pyaas na bujha rhi....itne karib ho ki saansein tumhara naam gunguna rhi....

Tumne kaha maaf kardo, magar maafi ki kab zaroorat thi?

Main toh khud us lamhe mein qaid hoon, jahan khud se door kiya tumne, aur main ho gayi thi...

Judaai likhi na sahi, par ishq mein toh har raah mod leti hai,

Kabhi khamoshi rok leti, kabhi khud se bhi rooth jaati hai...

Jab tumhare alfaaz ke khat ko yaadon ke lifaafon mein rakh diya hai maine,

Toh dil ke dastaanon ke kya hi hain maayine?

Kuch rishtey sirf lamhon ke qareeb hain rehte,

Lekin zindagi ke safar mein door chale hain jaate...

Saansein toh aarizi hai,

Kya usmein mera naam gunj raha hai?

Mere liye toh tum ek adhoora she’r ho —

Jo har dafa mukammal hone se pehle, kisi khamoshi mein kho jaata hai...

Edited by ThaneOfElsinore - 3 months ago
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Posted: 3 months ago

Originally posted by: Shirsha

I absolutely love listening to Ghazals! Urdu is an extremely beautiful language. I'm familiar with some Urdu words. After reading some shayari here, I also tried to write a shayari. I never wrote shayari before. When I was a kid, I used to write Bengali poems. But that's something very different. I don't know about Urdu grammar at all, so please don't be upset if any of you sees grammatical mistakes in my shayari.

Here's my first attempt at shayari. It's written from Neil's perspective.

Teri yaadein hi sahara hai ab mera

Tu hi fitoor, tu hi ibaadat hai ab mera

Teri aankhon ka noor meri rooh ka marham hai

Tere lafzon ka jadoo meri zindagi ka ilham hai

Tujhe main nahi dekh sakta, badnaseebi hai

Tu phir bhi meri chahat, meri aashna hai

Meri humdard, meri humsafar, tu hi meri taaqat hai

Tera ishq meri taqdeer, tera ishq meri manzil hai

Woah, Shirsha! Neil's perspective is so passionate in this poem without unnecessary embellishments. Too good! 😍

Especially if this is your first time, this is excellent, as it's simple and quite classical. I remember the first time I wrote a shayari when I was probably 12-13. It was so... Lame. smiley37 Yours has a finesse, and I'm sure this would encourage you to write even more and share them with us! smiley27

If you like, you can also read Mirza Ghalib, Faiz, Ahmed Faraz, Jaun Elia, Rumi, Gibran and Gulzar for more exposure to Urdu ghazals and nazm. You can also look out for Hindi poets. These will refine and expand your Urdu vocabulary and diction. You'll also get a hold of the rhythm of the recital. smiley1

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