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Originally posted by: Shirsha

I've written Neil's diary entry. It's not as good as Pavitra's shayari but I wanted to write something too.

9th May, 2026

Dear Diary,

Let's delve into the realm of love today. I know, I know, I write my thoughts about love everyday. I have been writing about love since one year. But today I'll write something slightly different. I'll shed light on the uplifting nature of love. When I was a teenager I read a book written by a renowned author. In that book, it was written love could change a person's personality immensely. Even though I liked the writing style, the story and the complexities of relationships depicted in the book, I didn't believe in those particular words. I always thought only a person's own will and efforts could change him. Years passed, I forgot about the quotes and the book. Then one day a girl came into my life. When I saw her for the first time I couldn't take my eyes away from her big, captivating eyes. There was so much depth in those eyes that they reminded me of my favourite romantic poem. Yes, her eyes seemed like a poem to me. They're as expressive as my favourite poem. When I like a particular poem it doesn't go out of my mind. I think about the poem a lot and appreciate its beauty. Similarly, her eyes didn't go out of my mind. I couldn't understand what was happening to me. That's how I fell in love with my Aparajita. She's the one who rekindled my interest in music. Her mellifluous voice inspired me to sing again. Her dedication towards music reminded me of my old days. Gradually, I started changing because of her. She made me understand the importance of speaking up when required. Her boldness is one of her most admirable traits. I started prioritising my own emotions over the feelings of others and I never did that before. My love for Aparajita helped me become a better version myself. Now I understand what the author wanted to convey. Aparajita left me one year ago but my love for her grew stronger. Her absence made me realise her value even more. Aparajita is my strength, my inspiration and my best friend. Nobody can take her place and I'll love her till my last breath.

You capture Neil feeling so perfectly, as if he was speaking himself

@ red: they had so much potential to be magic on screen, if written better. and makers had patience till after IPL.

Originally posted by: ThaneOfElsinore

Arz kiya hai,

Chhodkar jaana hi toh hai usool,

Woh haar kar ya jeet kar, iss par ab kya karein hum qubool,

Woh awaaz, woh aakhon ka raaz, ab yahi hai mujhe maqbool,

Aparajita ka naam rahega amar, shayad iss kahaani ka yahi tha dastoor...

Continued....

Yun chale jaane ko usool na kahiye,

Haar jit ke silsile ko dard ka kafila banakar qubool na karwaiye;

Awaaz aur aankhon ka raaz toh bahana tha maqbool toh Neelkanth ko Aparajita se milana tha...

Ek guzarish hai sachchai se pare ....kya dastoor- e- judaai ka naam de iss qadar ruth jaaogi...maut ko juda kar kya mujhe ek baar bhi sine se nhi lagaogi....

Originally posted by: shwetha85

Wow Shirsha! this is amazing and written very beautifully. I really really wish if Neil never falls in love with Savi and never falls out of love with his Aparajita!! We all have felt the intense and deep love that Neil has for Teju and I wish her place and her right over his love is not taken by anyone else. I understand the makers will do whatever comes to their mind, but for us the fans of TejNeil, Neil will only belong with Teju even though she isnt around anymore. I really loved the way you put together the process of falling in love from Neil's perspective. I wish is Param and Vaibhavi get a chance to read what you and Pavitra put together to realize what fans feel!!!

#TejNeil forever

Thank you so much, Shwetha! I'm glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: pyar-ishk

You capture Neil feeling so perfectly, as if he was speaking himself

@ red: they had so much potential to be magic on screen, if written better. and makers had patience till after IPL.

Thank you so much! Yes, makers didn't have patience, and Vaibhavi suffered because of that.

Originally posted by: Sam_kmh

How beautifully u have written neil' s feeling for his Aprajita

Thanks a lot!

All three of you wrote beautiful shayari!

for u shirsha ..really u r a wonderful story writer. But this story makes meso sad the end.poor neil ..good luck

Originally posted by: kinu17

for u shirsha ..really u r a wonderful story writer. But this story makes meso sad the end.poor neil ..good luck

Thanks a lot, Kinu!

Originally posted by: Ashane25

Continued....

Yun chale jaane ko usool na kahiye,

Haar jit ke silsile ko dard ka kafila banakar qubool na karwaiye;

Awaaz aur aankhon ka raaz toh bahana tha maqbool toh Neelkanth ko Aparajita se milana tha...

Ek guzarish hai sachchai se pare ....kya dastoor- e- judaai ka naam de iss qadar ruth jaaogi...maut ko juda kar kya mujhe ek baar bhi sine se nhi lagaogi....

Qubool karna toh ek bahaana tha, dil ke gehre zakham chhupane ka,

Judaai ka dastoor tumne diya, par mohabbat ka haq kise chhuraane ka?

Neelkanth se milan toh likha tha taqdeer mein,

Par Aparajita ka pyaar unhe dikha nahi jo chhupa tha uske takreer mein?

Maut se darr nahi, lekin tere bagair marna ek sawal hai,

Ek baar gale lag ja, yahi toh meri aakhri misaal hai...