FF - Whispers at Midnight..Note pg 9

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Hi everyone,

I know I have started my ff Greek Fashionista but I couldnt help writing this one now as I couldnt stop my mind from wandering into KS land!! heheh anyways this story is based on the new storyline.... where bani is attacked by Meera and comes back as Pronita. My ff is slightly different to what the KS creatives have showed.... so hope you guys like it and comments are always welcome. Also would like to add that as soon as I am done with this or GF ff i shall get Revenge is better served cold opened and continue with it and then ill proceed to finish Fashion is my passion...as I dont want to leave it in half...

anyways hope you enjoy it... here goes the introduction... if u have any stuff u would like me to add in the FF just let me know u can pm me or just put it as a comment!

Thank you.

Andy 😊

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Story

A story of revenge where Bani takes revenge against her stroger adversary Meera.

Bani was supposedly killed by Meera at the Mt. Abu House. Now Bani is back as Pronita Singhania, she has a different face and lots of money which will help her take over her life once again. Jai cant forget Bani but lives with his second wife and 2 daughters Ganga and Krishna and his and Meera's son Vicky, who adore Meera to no end! Jai yet mourns for his long lost love and his son Atharva who today would have been the Walia Empires WARIS! Is Bani AKA Pronita going to be able to get her children and Husband back? What happened to Atharva? Is he dead or Alive?

Stay tuned!

Characters will be introduced and described as they appear

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow, good storyline, really fedup with ekta and her stupid story line, pls cont.... and good that atleast you didnot forget atharva, poor guy in KS he disappeared in thin air.
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Awesome, can't wait to see more on this. Will be a refreshing change.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Very nice, can't wait to read it.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Cute..But short. Please update soon...




nikita
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sounds good. But why Vicky. he wasn't needed. As it is can't stand the idea in real KS. Anyway its our ff. I can't say much.

Waiting for update.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: suwas

Sounds good. But why Vicky. he wasn't needed. As it is can't stand the idea in real KS. Anyway its our ff. I can't say much.

Waiting for update.

Dont judge by seeing his name.... his story is also gonna be there just gimme some time and the secrets will be out! and by the way you can definetely say something about it and give your opinion as u r one of my readers so dont worry.... whatever u think that u dont like let me now and ill get the ff to give you guys what u want.... the point of writting is to make u people happy! so comment and let me know what you think about the ff , Ill be updating by tomorrow! Stay tuned! 😉

Andy

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Guys Ill will definetely update by tomorrow night at the latest!

take care,

Andy
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great story andrea
I really like it
make sure that atharve is back 😉
and plz update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guys... want to make some things clear... to make my story credible ive increased the leap to 20 years instead of 16. And Vicky's role is important coz it gives the story twist so bear with me.

Hope you guys enjoy it.

Happy Reading!

Andy

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Chapter 1

She stood gazing at the bed were the one person that she loved and that she could call her own slept peacefully. Life had changed so much in the past 20 years; she had a new face, a new house and most of all she was a very rich woman… It had taken her 20 years to build a new life for herself and now she was ready to strike and get back what she needed…that was her Husband and daughters … she was waiting for the day when she would come face to face with her worst enemy…Meera…Jai's second wife… and now the stepmother of her kids… ohhh how she missed her children… she couldn't help but wonder how the were. She couldn't wait to see them and hug them and tell them that she was their mother…and most of all tell her Mr. Walia that she was his Bani….time was closing in and in some days she would be flying back to India and see her family and fight the whole world if necessary to get them back! It was time she put her plan in action! She left the bedroom and headed out of the house to her waiting car, she had a doctors appointment…she had to visit her plastic surgeon, hopefully he would let her travel back to India…the doctor was a bit protective over Bani as her case was a very delicate one and she had to go through 36 surgeries to reconstruct her entire body and face…and Meera would pay for this….sooneer or later…but she would definitely pay!

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One week later

A man with deep brown eyes, black hair and very handsome features got down of his Mercedez Benz and entered Walia Group of Industries. He had a long stride, he was tall and had a perfect body. He was wearing a black Armani suit and a crisp white shirt, he had a beautiful and classy Tag Huer watch on his wrist. He walked towards the reception and said "I have an appt at 10.30 am with Mr. Jai Walia" Jai's receptionist looked at the boy and realized that he looked familiar, she couldn't shake the feeling that she somehow knew this boy. She looked at him again and said "Yes you must be Mr. Singhania from Singhania Enterprises" "Yes I am" "Well Mr. Walia is waiting for you, go to the elevator on your right and go up to the 30th floor that is were Mr. Walia's office is." He gave her a killer smile and left with briefcase in hand to meet The Great Jai Walia, owner of one of the leading companies in India. This project was going to be interesting.
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Vicky Walia was at the casino, he had been there since early, he wanted to bet, it had become an addiction, he loved to party and drink and Vicky was only 18 years old. He couldn't help it, he loved this betting thing… but today he was having a horrible day. He was loosing and he had no idea where he was going to get the money to pay this people back… If he asked his dad, he would have thousands of questions to answer. But who cares he wasn't going to think about it now… he was just going to enjoy himself.
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Jai Walia was shocked to see the owner and CEO of Singhania Enterprises, he was so young and so successful at his early age. "How old he must be?" he thought. He was impressed by the presentation that Mr. Singhania had given and had accepted to do this project. He needed a good software company to do this along side with his and who better than the Singhania after all they were the best in their field. Their company was US based and it had a very good reputation. He was working with the best. "How silly of me...I dont know his first name" he thought. "How could I forget to ask?" he gave a low chuckle and continued with his work.
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Mr. Singhania got out of Jai's office and left the building once he got into his car he took out his cell phone and made a call "Hi, everything is set, you can come now…the ball is already rolling" and he gave a sly smile, he cut the phone and told his driver to take him to the nearest Kali Ma temple, he had to pray to her so she could help them cross all the hurdles and get to their destination. He had to win this game not only for him but for her as well.
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Important note

The next update will be posted on thursday or Friday! Pls leave your comments... It makes me want to write.... pls it serves as boost to know what you guys think and pls give me sugesstions as to how you guys want the story to go on... I want this story to be a remake of the mess BT has done to KS! Let me know what you think and feel free to post comments wheter good or bad!

Edited by andrea_19 - 17 years ago

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