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Posted: 5 months ago
#21

OMG! This was so cute smiley9. The peaceful hug under the open sky, stars twinkling over them smiley42smiley42. I like how Rey didn't push her, instead Kriya initiated this herself with no prompting from his side... and that it was meant genuinely... not for a mere celebration of a day smiley27


And in that moment, she realized—maybe, just maybe, she had been running away for no reason at all.

Chalo... finally ye realization bhi ho gaya Kriya ko. Der aaye durust aaye smiley36


P.S. Bina tag / PM ke aa gai main... dekha hamara telepathic connection smiley2

Edited by ssttuuttii - 5 months ago
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Posted: 5 months ago
#22

Originally posted by: ssttuuttii

OMG! This was so cute smiley9. The peaceful hug under the open sky, stars twinkling over them smiley42smiley42. I like how Rey didn't push her, instead Kriya initiated this herself with no prompting from his side... and that it was meant genuinely... not for a mere celebration of a day smiley27


And in that moment, she realized—maybe, just maybe, she had been running away for no reason at all.

Chalo... finally ye realization bhi ho gaya Kriya ko. Der aaye durust aaye smiley36


P.S. Bina tag / PM ke aa gai main... dekha hamara telepathic connection smiley2

Aww, your comment made me smile so much! ☺️ Kriya ka realization toh hona hi tha—Rey ki patience aur pyaar ke saamne kitna aur bhaagti bechari? Der aaye, par finally durust aaye! 😆

Aur haan, tumhara bina tag/PM (tbh forgot about it 🤓) ke yahan aa jaana proves our telepathic connection is too strong 😉 Keep reading and commenting like this, mujhe tumhare fun reactions ka intezaar rahega! ❤️✨

Edited by SarafWasima - 5 months ago
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Posted: 5 months ago
#23

The entire week had been leading to this moment. Rose Day, Propose Day, Chocolate Day, Teddy Day, Promise Day, Hug Day—each one had only brought them closer, made them feel things they had once buried deep inside.

And yet, neither of them had said it aloud.

It wasn’t just about words anymore. It was about everything else—the way his eyes searched for her in a crowded room, the way her heartbeat picked up every time he was near, the way they always ended up standing too close to each other, even without realizing it.

And today was Kiss Day.

Kriya wasn’t expecting to see Rey so soon.

She had walked into St. Louis, hoping to get through the day without any major confrontations with him. The past few days had left her feeling too much—his words, his touch, his presence, his damn smirk. She needed space.

But the universe, it seemed, had other plans.

Because the moment she turned the corner near the rehearsal hall, she crashed right into him.

"Whoa, careful!" Rey caught her just in time, his hands gripping her waist, steadying her.

Kriya’s breath hitched. He was too close. Again.

She quickly stepped back, tucking a strand of hair behind her ear, trying to ignore the warmth that spread through her skin where he had touched her. "Aap yahan kya kar rahe ho?"

Rey smirked. "Mujhe bhi yahi poochna tha. Tumhe toh mujhse door rehna tha na?"

Her eyes snapped to his, narrowing slightly. "Main—main bas rehearsal ke liye aayi thi."

His smirk deepened. "Sure? Ya phir kisi aur wajah se bhi?"

Kriya rolled her eyes, crossing her arms. "Rey, aapko har baat ka mazak kyun banana hota hai?"

Rey took a step closer, his voice dropping just slightly. "Aur tumhe har baat se kyun bhaagna hota hai, Kriya?"

She swallowed hard. He had a point.

Later that evening, the entire Weaklings & Dazzlers team had gathered in the rehearsal hall. The vibe was light—teasing, laughter, stolen glances. But Kriya couldn’t focus.

Because Rey was watching her.

Not in his usual playful way. This was different. More intense. More certain.

And she hated that she knew exactly what day it was. Kiss Day.

She tried to distract herself, stretching at the barre, but suddenly the music changed. A slow, sensual tune filled the room, and she barely had time to react before she felt a hand on her wrist.

Rey.

He pulled her towards the center of the room, guiding her into a dance without asking. Just like old times.

She should have resisted, but she didn’t.

Their bodies moved in sync, his fingers lightly trailing down her arm as they twirled, his breath brushing against her skin every time he leaned close. The entire room faded away, the music, their friends—everything except him.

As the song reached its peak, he dipped her low, holding her there longer than necessary. His face was just inches from hers, his eyes dark and unreadable.

And that’s when he said it.

"Kriya, kya tum jaanti ho ki aaj kaunsa din hai?"

Her heart pounded. She could barely breathe.

"Mujhe nahi pata." It was a lie, and he knew it.

Rey smirked. "Sach mein? Toh main yaad dilata hoon. Aaj..." His thumb brushed against her jaw, making her shiver. "Kiss Day hai."

She should have pushed him away. She should have said something snarky, laughed it off like she usually did.

But she didn’t.

Because something in the way he was looking at her made her freeze—like she was the only thing he could see. Like he wasn’t going to let her run anymore.

"Rey..." She whispered his name before she could stop herself.

That was all the invitation he needed.

He leaned in, slow but sure, his lips brushing against hers in the lightest of touches. It was tentative, almost like he was giving her a chance to pull away.

But she didn’t.

Instead, her fingers curled into his t-shirt, pulling him closer, deepening the kiss before she could think twice.

And then—everything stopped.

It wasn’t just a kiss. It was a release of everything they had been holding back—the longing, the frustration, the stolen glances, the unspoken words. It was desperate and sweet, slow and consuming all at once.

Rey’s hands moved to her waist, pulling her impossibly close, while hers tangled in his hair, holding on like she never wanted to let go.

When they finally broke apart, their breaths mingled in the silence between them. Their foreheads touched, neither of them willing to move away just yet.

Kriya opened her eyes first, her gaze meeting his.

"Yeh... kya tha?" she whispered, her voice slightly shaky.

Rey grinned, his hands still resting on her waist. "Mujhe laga, tumhe yaad dilana zaroori hai ki yeh sirf Kiss Day nahi tha, balki tumhare aur mere beech jo chal raha hai... uska ek next step tha."

Her stomach flipped. She knew exactly what he meant.

And this time—she wasn’t running.

"Toh ab?" she asked, tilting her head.

Rey smirked, brushing his lips against her forehead before pulling back slightly. "Ab toh bas tum meri ho, Kriya."

And she didn’t argue. Because maybe... she had always been his.

Edited by SarafWasima - 5 months ago
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Posted: 5 months ago
#24

Okay double Woah! Definitely didn't expect the kiss here smiley36. Bold move Rey... no more letting Kriya run away. I liked the ending specially.. her "Toh ab?" and his answer to it smiley10.

Bas ab mere bhi ek sawal ka jawab de do... ye kiss ke time pe baaki sab log kaha the? smiley37 If I'm not wrong, everyone was practicing together... in the rehearsal hall... so did KriYaansh just kiss in front of all of them.. .? smiley3 Ya fir inka dance shuru hua to everyone decided to give them privacy and left smiley36 Waise to Vicky and Nil jaise log hai inke group mein... so itne sidhe se chale jaaye aise bhi nahi hai smiley37... but Swayam or Sharon might have herded everyone out... aisa assume karlete hai smiley36


Jokes aside.. waiting for the last installment of this little series smiley9.

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Posted: 5 months ago
#25

Originally posted by: ssttuuttii

Okay double Woah! Definitely didn't expect the kiss here smiley36. Bold move Rey... no more letting Kriya run away. I liked the ending specially.. her "Toh ab?" and his answer to it smiley10.

Bas ab mere bhi ek sawal ka jawab de do... ye kiss ke time pe baaki sab log kaha the? smiley37 If I'm not wrong, everyone was practicing together... in the rehearsal hall... so did KriYaansh just kiss in front of all of them.. .? smiley3 Ya fir inka dance shuru hua to everyone decided to give them privacy and left smiley36 Waise to Vicky and Nil jaise log hai inke group mein... so itne sidhe se chale jaaye aise bhi nahi hai smiley37... but Swayam or Sharon might have herded everyone out... aisa assume karlete hai smiley36


Jokes aside.. waiting for the last installment of this little series smiley9.

Hahaha, your observation skills are on point! 🤭 KriYaansh ke pyaar ke aage logic bhi haath jod deta hai! 🤣

As for your very valid question—let’s just say, divine intervention happened. Either everyone got a sudden urge to take a collective water break, or Swayam and Sharon exercised their “Captain Powers” to discreetly clear the hall. 😆 But if you ask Vicky and Nil, they’ll probably claim they witnessed history in the making and will demand credit for the moment. 🤣

Bas ab next part ke liye ready raho… KriYaansh ki kahani abhi baaki hai! 😉✨

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Posted: 5 months ago
#26

Silence.

For a moment, that’s all there was.

Then—chaos.

The sound of gasps, cheers, and teasing whistles filled the rehearsal hall as Rey and Kriya finally stepped apart, realizing—they weren’t alone.

Their friends had witnessed everything.

Kriya’s eyes widened as she took in the sight of her teammates—Sharon smirking, Swayam shaking his head in amusement, Vicky and Neha exchanging excited looks, and the rest of the team staring at them like they had just seen a live Bollywood romance unfold.

She felt her cheeks heat up instantly.

"Ahem, ahem..." Vicky coughed dramatically, folding his arms. "Toh bas, itna casually tum dono ek dusre ko kiss kar rahe ho?"

"Aur woh bhi sabke saamne?" Simmi added, raising an eyebrow.

"Koi warning toh de dete!" Rinni giggled, nudging Neha, who was practically bouncing with excitement.

Kriya opened her mouth to say something—anything—but words failed her. What was she supposed to say? That it was a mistake? That it wasn’t planned? That she hadn’t meant to kiss Rey back with that much passion?

Lies.

She couldn’t say any of that because—it hadn’t been a mistake.

And Rey?

Rey was completely unbothered.

He simply shrugged, flashing his signature smirk. "Kya karoon, jab pyaar hota hai toh ho hi jaata hai... control nahi hota."

Kriya’s jaw dropped. "Rey!" she hissed, glaring at him.

He winked. "Haan? Maine koi jhooth toh nahi bola."

Sharon rolled her eyes but smirked. "Bas bas, ab zyada romantic dialogues mat maaro."

"Haan yaar," Nil added, grinning. "Ab officially announce bhi kar do ki tum dono ek couple ho!"

Kriya’s breath hitched. Couple?

Her gaze flickered to Rey, and for the first time since their kiss, uncertainty crept into her mind.

What were they now?

Before she could dwell on it, Rey casually slipped an arm around her shoulders, pulling her close in an effortless motion.

"Kriya aur main... hum dono ek dusre ke liye special hain. Aur aaj Valentine’s Day hai... toh shayad yeh ek achha din hai yeh accept karne ke liye."

Kriya’s heart skipped a beat.

"Wait, wait, wait!" Bharat cut in. "Aaj Valentine’s Day hai, toh iska matlab tum dono ka official confession bhi aaj hoga na?"

The group erupted into cheers again, and Kriya groaned, covering her face. They were never going to let this go.

By the time the teasing had died down, the team had started making plans for Valentine’s Day—couples pairing up, singles deciding to have fun in their own way. But Kriya had barely been able to focus.

Because Rey hadn’t left her side since the moment they kissed.

And now, as the evening sky darkened, she found herself sitting on the back of his bike, gripping onto him a little too tightly as he sped through the streets of Mumbai.

"Rey, hum jaa kahan rahe hain?" she finally asked, raising her voice over the wind.

He glanced back at her briefly, a smile playing on his lips. "Bas thoda aur wait kar lo."

Minutes later, he pulled up near a quiet spot by the sea. Away from the chaos of the city, away from their teasing friends—just them.

Kriya slid off the bike, wrapping her arms around herself as the cool breeze hit her. "Rey, yeh sab...?"

He walked up beside her, stuffing his hands in his pockets. "Socha tha ki agar Valentine’s Day manaana hi hai, toh special ho."

Her heart softened.

They stood in silence for a few moments, watching the waves crash against the rocks.

Then, softly, Rey spoke. "Mujhe yaad hai jab tum pehli baar yahan aayi thi. Tumne kaha tha ki yeh jagah tumhe sukoon deti hai."

Kriya turned to look at him, surprised. "Aapko yaad hai?"

He chuckled. "Tumhare saath judi har chhoti baat yaad hai, Kriya."

Her breath caught in her throat. How was he so effortlessly like this? So sincere? So sure?

She didn’t realize she was shivering until Rey sighed, stepping closer and draping his jacket over her shoulders. His warmth, his scent—it surrounded her.

"Rey..."

He smiled, tucking a strand of hair behind her ear. "Happy Valentine’s Day, Kriya."

Her lips parted, but she didn’t know what to say. Because for the first time, words weren’t enough.

And maybe she didn’t need them.

Because instead of replying, she reached up, standing on her toes—and kissed him.

This time, it was slow. Gentle. Unlike their first kiss, which had been desperate and consuming—this was different.

It was an acceptance. A silent promise that whatever they were, wherever they were going—they would figure it out.

When they finally pulled apart, Rey rested his forehead against hers, his voice barely above a whisper.

"Ab toh officially tum meri ho, right?"

Kriya smiled, pressing a finger against his lips. "Bas, ab zyada filmy mat bano."

He laughed, but his arms tightened around her, refusing to let go.

And under the stars, with the sound of the waves around them, they knew—this was just the beginning.


The End.

Edited by SarafWasima - 5 months ago
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Posted: 5 months ago
#27

Woo hoo! The ending was perfect. Especially

-this was just the beginning.

The End.

Waah! Kya likha hai smiley32.


So I was right about everyone being present. And we will assume the rehearsals were taking place at midnight... bcz kiss kiya tab Kiss day tha and when they broke apart, it was Valentine's day smiley37.


But like you said, KriYaansh ke aage logic kaam nahi aata smiley36. I liked the seaside little moment and the peaceful ending after all that bhagna dodna and spy thriller action scenes in the earlier installments smiley36smiley27.


Thank you for wrapping this up so nicely... and gifting us this story. It's a gem and I had loads of fun reading it, anticipating what's going to happen next, and still being pleasantly surprised at many points smiley9.

A little sad to see this one end.. but abhi at least dusra wala padhna baaki hai smiley36. See you there smiley4.


Love,

Stuti

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Posted: 5 months ago
#28

Originally posted by: ssttuuttii

Woo hoo! The ending was perfect. Especially

-this was just the beginning.

The End.

Waah! Kya likha hai smiley32.


So I was right about everyone being present. And we will assume the rehearsals were taking place at midnight... bcz kiss kiya tab Kiss day tha and when they broke apart, it was Valentine's day smiley37.


But like you said, KriYaansh ke aage logic kaam nahi aata smiley36. I liked the seaside little moment and the peaceful ending after all that bhagna dodna and spy thriller action scenes in the earlier installments smiley36smiley27.


Thank you for wrapping this up so nicely... and gifting us this story. It's a gem and I had loads of fun reading it, anticipating what's going to happen next, and still being pleasantly surprised at many points smiley9.

A little sad to see this one end.. but abhi at least dusra wala padhna baaki hai smiley36. See you there smiley4.


Love,

Stuti

Aww, Stuti! Your comment is such a delightful mix of logic, emotion, and pure KriYaansh magic—just like them, logic went on a long vacation here 🤭. Midnight rehearsals, time-jumps, and spy-thriller chaos—sab kuch tha, bas NASA se confirmation lena reh gaya tha 🤣.

I’m so glad you enjoyed the ride, from all the action to the peaceful seaside moment (because even KriYaansh need a breather after all that bhagna-dodna 🤭). Your excitement, theories, and love for the story made it even more special for me!

And haan, one story khatam, but dusra wala abhi line mein hai—so see you there with the same energy and amazing observations! 😆

Much love,

Saraf 🩷

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