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Posted: 7 months ago
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Re Kabira - MG OS

PT 1

There she was, back home. In the country she had left at 18 to pursue higher education. She crossed the seas and never looked back, until she did.

Geet Handa was independent from a young age. She was the middle child but oldest daughter. She always searched to figure out life in her own way, walk on paths she had created and construct a life she had wanted. It wasn't easy.

Geet's father had fiercely opposed sending her abroad but Geet had already known that and secured a scholarship. With a scholarship in hand, even Geet's father knew that he could not stop his daughter. He knew that he would rarely see his daughter again the moment she flapped her wings, ready to fly. To explore the world and herself but a part in him hoped that she would come back someday. Hoping that she would fly back home after seeing the world.

And here she was, her father's wish being true, well almost.

Geet was home in celebration of her sister's wedding. Single herself she still felt joy seeing her sister thread into matrimony. Geet was home for a whole month and in that month she hoped to fill the craving of home she had suddenly felt when her mother told her that her sister might be getting married in this very year.

Geet decided to walk around in the neighborhood after putting her luggage in her old room, now a guest bedroom. While walking she saw a few kids playing in the streets and bumped into someone.

Who was he? Her old classmate. She hadn't seen him since high school, well she hadn't seen anyone since then as she had immediately left after graduation. She stared into his eyes and remembered that she used crush on this classmate of hers. She dropped her gaze and said sorry and hurriedly left before he could say anything.

Geet immediately walked back home and decided to help with the wedding preparations. The wedding, although 3 weeks away, still required lots to be done.

Time passed rather quickly in all the business of the preparations.

After 3 weeks of preparations and being back home, Geet realized that the ache in her heart still hadn't gone away. She still craved home but even home didn't quite feel the same.

It was finally the day of the wedding, Geet's day started busy and ended busy. In the preparations she once again bumped into someone, oh into the very same person again too! This time she could not escape him and he had her in his arms, stopping her from falling.

He made casual conversation with her and Geet suddenly remembered why she had liked him. Her heart skipped a beat and Geet was in an instant back to the 18 year old she was when she liked this man before her.

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Posted: 7 months ago
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Re Kabira - MG OS

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In the days that followed after the wedding, Geet regularly kept contact with her crush, Maan. She saw him on her morning walk, her midday tea from her balcony and via his "good night" messages at night. Geet started dreaming of a future where she was with him and he with her. Alas, you eventually wake up from your dreams.

Geet's holiday back home had finished and she needed to return back to the home she had created abroad. She had to get back to her job, her friends, her apartment. She didn't know how to break the news to Maan, she didn't want to tell him but she had to.

So like the coward that she is, she decided to send him a message at the airport minutes before she boarded her flight, telling him that she liked him, had to go back to her job but would be open to try long distance with him if he wants. The thing was, Geet wouldn't have been able to personally say all that to Maan even if she wanted. She didn't see him on the day her flight was leaving.

That flight was one of the longest flights Geet had ever endured. When she arrived, she walked out of the airport but heard someone calling her name. She turned around and who was there? Maan, indeed.

In the time Geet had spent back in her hometown, she hadn't once asked Maan where he lived. She just assumed he had never left their boring, but cozy town. Oh was Geet wrong. Maan did also leave, almost immediately like Geet. Unlike Geet though, he didn't travel, preferring to study and work hard. In fact he had lived long in the town abroad Geet called home. How they had never met was a mystery but fate was definitely involved.

Maan called Geet, holding a board on which was written, "Geet, my gf" with a heart. Geet ran towards Maan and hugged him. Guess her question was answered, only they didn't have to do long distance at all.

Geet realized that even though she missed home at times, she always had a part of it with her, Maan. Maan & Geet dated for a few months before realizing that they wanted to get married. They married in their hometown, inviting all their friends from abroad. Their honeymoon was a short but also long trip as Geet dragged Maan to all her favorite destinations.

Maan & Geet realized that they wanted to visit their hometown more often too so they decided that they would visit every year and also retire there when they're old and wrinkly.

The End


Merida's note: Happy New Year Doston! Ending thora fast hain hhahhaha

Edited by Merida - 7 months ago
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Posted: 7 months ago
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congrats for new story

interesting

geet back to home for her sister's mariage n bump twice with same person on whom she had crush


waiting to read more

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Posted: 7 months ago
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thanks for posting this OS

Part 1

Amazing update.... finely written

so Geet is back for her sister's wedding celebrations

well she bumped into her crush

of cos she just left

glad that she again bumped into Maan

Thank God he helped her from falling

great that he made casual convo with Geet


update soon

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Posted: 7 months ago
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So geet meet with own crush

Interesting

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Posted: 7 months ago
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Congrats on your new OS

Part 1

Geet has been abroad studying but now back home

and wow she bumps into her crush twice

but I'm just hoping her crush is Maan

at now he gets a chance to speak to Geet

just maybe now she will feel the feelings of been back home

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Posted: 7 months ago
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Its nice one , dekhte hai Maaneet kaise aange milte hai
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Posted: 7 months ago
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So here's my part 2 and last part too. I hope you all like this.

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Posted: 7 months ago
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Fabulous OS

Loved the fact that Maan and Geet finally dated

and got married but always went home to their hometown

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geet was in touch with maan all the time of her holidays but sad that she was going away but to her surprise maan also lives in same town of geet

both dated n married in their home town living happy together

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