Chapter 1
Dynamic update... greatly written
Gosh Maan's uncle was shot dead
Maan's thoughts were reasonable
so putting two and two together he thinks that the killer that inside the family
great that he knows what ought to be done in order to catch the killer
Geet's thoughts were understandable
she was clearly concerned with Maan's distant behavior
of cos the tension in the room was suffocating
as expected everyone were nervous and on the edge
glad that Maan did not beat around the bush
he was indeed direct with his suspicions
as expected he is determined to find the killer
Gosh Geet is also as suspect
wonder why he suspects Geet?
update soon
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