MG FF - For One Night - 12/03/2025 - chapter 12 updated Pg 24 - Page 12

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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp


This scene is laden with palpable tension and heartbreak. Maan’s parting words, “You’re free to leave,” carry a haunting finality that lingers long after reading. His actions reflect a quiet turmoil, while Geet’s unspoken emotions make the moment even more gripping. A masterfully crafted moment of emotional depth and contrast! Their earlier togetherness was written beautifully, creating a sharp contrast to the emotional rift now.

Thank you Muskan ... for reading and commenting .. means a lot smiley9

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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: maangeet.gmmg

Wonderful update đź’ť so it's done and dusted from maan s side but it's getting difficult for geet to pretend that all is over and all is ok đź’– waiting for next to see wat happens.

Thanks for your feedback ... stay tuned ... will update soon smiley2

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Posted: 1 years ago

Very nice prologue. Interesting start

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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: Annupreet

Very nice prologue. Interesting start

Thank you! I've uploaded the first three chapters and I'm looking forward to your feedback and reviewsmiley9

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Posted: 1 years ago

Nice prologue different concept

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Posted: 1 years ago

How he knew her?and the family is there any past relationship with his family or vice versa

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Posted: 1 years ago

I don't know what maan wants her submission or anything else he is hiding

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Posted: 1 years ago

Maan has feelings for geet and he don't want to accept it

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Posted: 1 years ago

Geet also known what is going on between them and how maan is reacting will mann even admit of his feelings towards geet

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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: Mouser1

Nice prologue different concept

Thankss...I'm glad you liked it smiley9

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