MG FF - For One Night - 12/03/2025 - chapter 12 updated Pg 24 - Page 6

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Apologies for late comments

Chapter 1

Amazing update... wonderfully written

well Geet went to meet Maan

her thoughts were reasonable

feeling for Geet

she is indeed helpless

so only Maan can help her

of cos Maan's presence intimidates Geet

can understand her uneasiness

so he want he wants is far more complicated

at least he was direct with Geet that he wants her body and wants to control

her reaction was justified

what did he mean that he does not have any options?

great that he cautioned her

as expected she agreed to do what he wants

oh that's how they met

seems like he already knew who she was

the situation is clearly against Geet

she had to go and meet him

not surprised he knows everything about her

update soon

No worries at all about the late comments ... I’m just happy to hear from you whenever you have time!

Your reply is great! You really captured the key moments and emotions from the chapter. Geet’s inner conflict and helplessness really come through, and I like how you’ve pointed out Maan's intimidating presence - he’s not exactly the comforting type, right?

And yes, he definitely seems like he knew more about her than Geet realized. That’s always a bit unsettling, right? When you’re caught in someone else’s game and you didn’t even know the rules. 😬

Thank you dear Chetna

Originally posted by: nushhkiee

Haha, I totally feel you on the work overload! It’s like that moment when you’re juggling a million things, and suddenly, IF decides to go on strike. “Oh, you wanted me to actually function today? How cute, let me just take a nap instead!” Classic. 🤦‍♀️

That's alright, I'll post my stories here for you all then

Hello Anushka

thank you so much...

if you had a blog it would have been nice as well seeing that IF is a bit slow these days! I am not sure if its only me experiencing this......

have a wonderful day

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hello Anushka

thank you so much...

if you had a blog it would have been nice as well seeing that IF is a bit slow these days! I am not sure if its only me experiencing this......

have a wonderful day

There's no issue with IF on my end ... everything is working perfectly.

Nice update..

Geet went to maan and agrees with his conditions for her family..

Geet didn't know how Maan knows her name..

Waiting for next update..

.

Originally posted by: swapna.p

Nice update..

Geet went to maan and agrees with his conditions for her family..

Geet didn't know how Maan knows her name..

Waiting for next update..

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Posting in few min...thank youuu

Chapter 2 -

The soft hum of the evening air couldn’t calm the storm raging inside Geet. As she walked through the vast, cold halls of Khurana Mansion, her steps echoed like reminders of her own vulnerability. She had no business being here - no place in this world of wealth, control, and unspoken power. But the gravity of Maan Singh Khurana’s presence, his gaze, it had a pull she couldn’t escape. And now, she was a part of his game, whether she liked it or not.

Maan had made it clear. She wasn’t here because he found her desirable - he didn’t need her for affection. No, he needed her for something far more complicated: Power. Control. Dominance.

As she paused in front of the door to his private study, her thoughts swirled in a mixture of fear and something she wasn’t ready to name. What kind of man offered a deal like this? Money for a night, with the cost of her dignity hanging in the balance? She was about to walk into his world, a world that she was not prepared for, but one she had no choice but to enter.

A part of her wanted to turn around, walk out, and never look back. But her family's debts - her father’s failing business, her brother’s hospital bills - had already pushed her to the edge. And what choice did she have? She couldn’t allow them to fall apart because of her pride.

She raised her hand and knocked softly on the door. The sound felt too loud in the silence of the mansion.

“Enter.”

The voice that responded was familiar, too familiar. Cold. Calculating. The same voice that had haunted her thoughts ever since their first encounter. Her breath caught in her throat as she pushed the door open, stepping into the opulent study.

Maan stood by the window, his back to her, his hands folded behind him in his signature stance - calm, composed, a man who controlled everything around him. He didn’t need to turn around to know she was there. He had been waiting for her.

"Geet," Maan’s voice was low, almost indulgent, as if he were savoring the moment. "I see you’ve made your decision."

“I ... I’m here to fulfill my part of the agreement,” she said, her voice trembling slightly.

Maan turned then, his gaze unwavering, that cold, calculating look settling on her. "Good. But before we proceed, I think we need to talk about how we got here."

Her pulse quickened. She had anticipated this moment - anticipated the deal, the money, the one night that was supposed to change everything. But she hadn’t expected him to bring up their first meeting, the unexpected moment when everything had shifted.

“What do you mean?” Geet asked, forcing her voice to remain steady, though her heart was thudding against her ribs.

He crossed the room slowly, the space between them closing with each step. "You’re probably wondering how I knew who you were that day at the cafe. It wasn’t just an accident that I happened to be there, Geet." His lips quirked in the slightest of smirks, a smirk that made her skin crawl and heat at the same time. "I’ve known about you for a while."

Geet’s breath caught in her throat. “What... what do you mean?”

Maan paused just in front of her, his dark eyes never leaving hers. "You see, Geet, you’re not the first one to come to me for help. Your family - your father - owes me a great deal of money. A very large sum."

She froze, her blood running cold. “What? No... no, that’s not possible! My father never ...”

Maan held up a hand, silencing her. “He didn’t tell you, did he? How he’s been running around trying to scrape together a loan from me for months now? How he promised to repay with interest but couldn’t? Your father’s dealings weren’t exactly... transparent. And when the debts grew too large, he tried to run from them. From me. I don’t take kindly to that, Geet."

Her mind raced, trying to piece it all together. The desperation in her father’s eyes, the late nights spent in meetings she’d never been allowed to hear about, the strained phone calls, the odd hours when he’d leave the house and come back looking even more exhausted and defeated than before. He had been hiding this from her - and now, it was too late to fix.

Maan’s gaze softened, almost imperceptibly, but his next words stung like ice. "Your family is mine now. You are mine now. Because you made the choice to step into this world. You signed the contract, Geet. And I always honor my agreements."

Her breath caught again as his words sunk in. "You knew about the debts all along, didn’t you?" she asked, her voice shaking with a mix of anger and betrayal. "That’s why you offered the deal. It wasn’t just for one night, was it? You’ve been watching my family all along, waiting for me to get desperate enough to come to you."

Maan tilted his head slightly, his expression unreadable. "I don’t play games, Geet. I only offer solutions to problems. And you were always going to come to me. People like your father -people who can't pay what they owe - they don’t have a choice."

Geet clenched her fists, fighting the rising anger in her chest. "So, this was all a game to you? You knew I would come begging for help, and you set me up from the start."

Maan’s lips curled into a cold, calculating smile. "You weren’t begging, Geet. You were making a choice. You knew exactly what you were walking into when you came to me for help. I don’t deal with weakness, and I certainly don’t offer charity. You wanted to save your family. And in exchange, you get what I want."

Geet’s mind spun as she processed the weight of his words. The room seemed to close in around her. Her father’s debt, her family’s struggles, the desperation that had led her here - all of it had been part of Maan’s plan. She wasn’t just a victim of circumstance; she had been a pawn in a game she hadn’t even realized was being played.

Maan took another step closer, his gaze never leaving hers. "Now, Geet," he continued, his voice dropping to a dangerously low whisper, "you’re going to fulfill your part of the agreement. But remember - one night with me is just the beginning. You may think you’re in control, but that’s the mistake everyone makes when they come to me."

Her heart raced, and she could feel the weight of the decision she had made, the cost of it pressing down on her. This wasn’t just about money anymore. This was about power - his power - and how much of herself she was willing to lose to save those she loved.

Chapter 2 is here ... please like and comment if you find it worth reading

Also I have updated part 2 of my SS - The Perfect Pair .. have a look

@Candyjar, I have mentioned page no. on the title too ... Happy reading

Love,

Anushka

What a beautifully intense update! You’ve captured Geet’s inner turmoil so vividly that I could almost feel the storm within her. The description of the vast, cold halls perfectly mirrors her feelings of isolation and the weight she carries due to her father’s debt. The way you’ve built up Maan’s character is incredible—his gaze, his commanding voice, and his steady, deliberate movements make him both intriguing and formidable. The tension between Geet and Maan is palpable, and the slow, careful pacing adds to the suspense. This update truly leaves me on the edge, eager for what happens next. Well done! Waiting

Wow wow geet was shocked to know maan knew about each and everything and geet s dad wanna give him money waiting for next update 💝

Maan knew her family from starting. He trapped her very well. Geet is right now high on emotions after knowing the truth. I just feel that Maan is in love with her or he is planning something big.