Originally posted by: WhimsicalMind
Aamna understood the scene and when she pointed it out to Hassan, he said it is good on paper but execution was poor which I agree because there are ways too many seconds between dialogs, the reason why mass movies work in theater is because audience doesn't have the time to think, but here you have enough time to think about each dialog which is a drawback
Agree about archaic portrayal too, Bilal is so wattpad coded, he needed a wattpad writer not this man who writes for himself and not for characters
I think one the reason for the direction lacking is because they have shot sequences randomly.
Like first they shot all wahaj solo scenes and scenes with hira. Then they shot all maya scenes with family. Then they all came together to shoot mahaj, and scenes with others. Later on hira usama and maya shot their scenes which we are seeing now.
Haseeb hasn't directed it in order so that's why the flow seems to be lacking and disjointed. And he didn't understand to how pull the entire show together. He shot everything as standalone sequences.
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