Thank you for response. I will give reply maybe later or tomorrow. Im not in the right head to think rationally about the show.
Pls dont take it as disrespect I'm on X & not responding to our more logical thoughts. Im in the mood to cause trouble on X... not a personality I want to show here. Like get people heads screwed straight & make X users aware these writers are rubbish.
Originally posted by: Adiandsid
Bold: If I were the one taking over after the clip incident, I'd have made Babs show regret and apologise to Ammu, Virat, and the rest of the family, deal with ex in the bg to get rid of Ammu. If they want to drag it till Navratri - some 5-10 eps, I'd have had Vandy and Bhavani raise their objections, Ammu too having reservations about going ahead with him because of the mela, but all leading to the near confession during navratri and then kidnapping.
After kidnapping I'll have Ammu blamed again by Babs and somehow make Virat silent or speak up something against Vandy / (perhaps even Bhavani)... which pisses Ammu off... leading her to say something mean that really hurts Virat and he tells her to buzz off or her doing it. After she leaves ex will come up with the property demand. [The italics part was somehow important... more important than the Devi shooting an arrow at the Asura theme they overdid.]
If on the other hand Babs doesn't fake it after the clip incident, I'll have Virat question himself as to what he can do and decide to move away with Ammu. Babs can accuse her of 'breaking her family' by this move. Something Ammu wont like too, going by her nature. VA may decide to get married... but before that the kidnapping will happen the same way... can lead to the same outcome mentioned above - somehow get Ammu blamed. [Them wanting to get married is a better reason for Babs to give 45% to ex.]
Main thing as in the current state was Ammu had to be kept away from this 'poverty' phase of theirs. [She can be the one who 'gifts' it back to them later.] I'll also say, uske rehte huve, this shouldn't have happened - because of something they showed in the earlier eps. So effectively, they went "forget foreshadowing, forget archetypes, we do what we want" ... they can ... but the result wont be as good. Somethings are archetypes (and somethings are foreshadowed) for a reason - disrespect / disregard it and you are likely to fall flat in your writing.
Babs being his mother, there were only two ways - either show regret (fake/real) or Virat to move away. This third option they chose doesn't go well at all.
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