JJ SS - A Journey Back to Us - 25/10/2024 l COMPLETED - Page 2

Originally posted by: swetiii

Really good chapter

Very well expressed dear

Thank you so much! I’m really glad you enjoyed the chapter

awaiting your reviews for the final part

Originally posted by: Vaaridhi

This is beautiful.... Jodha's natural fears and insecurities are portrayed well. Eagerly awaiting the next

Thank you so much dear Vaaridhi

I’m looking forward to your thoughts on the final part!

Beautiful story line

Jodha is strength & Jalal is her support

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

Originally posted by: Gold.Abrol

Beautiful story line

Jodha is strength & Jalal is her support

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

Thank you so much

Glad you liked it.

Wow, 😍 This felt like a warm hug❤️... with a mug of hot chocolate on a rainy day🤗

Loved this, thank you so much for writing! Read something with a light-hearted, soothing vibe after a long time.

Originally posted by: nushhkiee

Shot 2 : A Journey Back to Us

Originally posted by: Vaaridhi

Wow, 😍 This felt like a warm hug❤️... with a mug of hot chocolate on a rainy day🤗

Loved this, thank you so much for writing! Read something with a light-hearted, soothing vibe after a long time.

Thank you so much for your kind words!

I'm so glad my writing resonated with u 🥰

A warm hug and hot chocolate is the perfect vibe!😋

Originally posted by: Vaaridhi

Also, the ss title is so apt and beautiful

Thank you dear Vaaridhi 🥰😇

Well it took me quite a lot time to choose the title 😂

I've been waiting to get some quiet time to just read the story and take in the plot. Such beautiful story Nushki. Such beautiful words and so inspiring on so many levels. True that no matter what happens our past and our future never define us.Its important that we let go of the shadows of past and bathe into the serene light of the present.

You are a beautiful writer. I would have loved this more if it was an FF and if you ever think of converting it into one count me in as your cheerleader. With so many things happening over just 2 chapters it felt like it just started and then ended the next second keeping so many loops open. It felt like a trailer of a beautiful movie. Do think of converting it into a full fledged ff.

Lots of love

Manu

Originally posted by: manu_ak

I've been waiting to get some quiet time to just read the story and take in the plot. Such beautiful story Nushki. Such beautiful words and so inspiring on so many levels. True that no matter what happens our past and our future never define us.Its important that we let go of the shadows of past and bathe into the serene light of the present.

You are a beautiful writer. I would have loved this more if it was an FF and if you ever think of converting it into one count me in as your cheerleader. With so many things happening over just 2 chapters it felt like it just started and then ended the next second keeping so many loops open. It felt like a trailer of a beautiful movie. Do think of converting it into a full fledged ff.

Lots of love

Manu

Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment! 🥰

I'm really glad you enjoyed the story and found it inspiring. I truly appreciate your support and enthusiasm for an FF version. But Dii , I couldn't convert it into a full-fledged story due to time constraints and my studies.

I wanted to give it the attention it deserves, and I didn't want to leave it unfinished. Writing it as a short story felt like the best way to do justice to the ideas. And therefore I did added a warning beforehand that this is fast paced

Manali Di...your encouragement means a lot to me..khup khup aabhar 💕🫶