Originally posted by: Rashi23
I'm sure it's gonna increase more once bilsad meet and their story starts. Hurry up kaddu uncle, blockbuster chahaiye toh jaldi inki kahani shuru karo
I don't know why I think, Bilal is an afterthought, just consider him as a cameo here too, writer has not written or maybe director hasn't directed it properly
1 Humsha likes him, but it went from 0 to 100, they didn't take us there, She is close to him, touching his stuff, he is nice to her, what is the story there?
These scenes don't seem like connected plot also because we didn't get a scene between Humsha and Sadaf, what is their equation? She knows about her and her family but they don't share screen space
If they had given one scene with Humsha and Sadaf then Humsha's scene with Bilal, we would have found some connection between the story
2 Sadaf's father doesn't talk to her, he speaks to her mother but not her but we are to believe they are close and all 🤷♀️
We could get one scene of Sadaf's father asking her not to apply there, Sadaf wondering why? Maybe she wanted to apply there but all we got is side characters mentioning it, it is again not a part of the story between leads
They could have written a scene where Sadaf's father tells her not to apply to Bilal's hotel because he is not a good man and Sadaf thinking about it later while canceling her application
This "Sadaf didn't apply because.." is part of Bilal's story but has no effect on Sadaf, there are no scenes connecting Bilal and Sadaf
So, remove Bilal from the story completely, do you see any change in Sadaf's arc? Bilal's scene so far are between him and 4 characters and those characters are not interacting with Sadaf
My point is that what I am seeing are scenes, more like Instagram reels than a story
Someone said men should not be allowed to write romance, and I agree, especially men who have one track mind
Edited by WhimsicalMind - 9 months ago
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