A Reality Check - Page 2

Ah Vira n this part made me emotional ...those are Ani and jhanak i want to see in the show , the reality check i wanted them to realise u made it happen here...i think so far this is your best chapter..bravo

it was the hardest one to write! I am glad you loved it! 😍

Originally posted by: ..NadiaZ..

Ah Vira n this part made me emotional ...those are Ani and jhanak i want to see in the show , the reality check i wanted them to realise u made it happen here...i think so far this is your best chapter..bravo

Vira, First of all, sorry for late reply it was long due, I wanted to read it "Fursat se"...

I can feel this was indeed a difficult part for you to write....I can't even express it properly how much I loved it, especially now when we know the mess in the show....

I actually adore & admire your writing girl. You actually dug deep inside them & put out all those emotions through your pen which they have kept buried within them...

I wish, I really wish the writers of the actual show would have such beautiful thought process...Thank you for giving me this Anirudh Bose, whom we can relate. The Anirudh Bose I wanted to see after the separation I got it here...

His apology actually touched my heart, where at the end he didn't even expect to accept his apology, just ask for a chance to stay in her life & heal her wounds, what a soothing way to accept his mistakes & apologise, I just loved every bit of this....

And finally she gives in to her heart, yet again, but rightfully...Their journey has started now in true manner...

You are absolutely amazing Vira...

& Lastly, is he going to Kolkata? To finally doing the much needed thing? Please just tell me

Aww you made my day … or should I say night !! I was feeling uoset with the current state of the show , we all are 😒… so thanks for the great review ! I love to read what you guys think !

I am glad you noticed the apology part .. I gave it a long thought about it and came to this conclusion … sometimes time heals the wounds and it heals slowly through sincerity and it takes time

Yes he is going to Kolkata to do the much needed thing ! I felt it’s needed ,that thing whatever that is needs a clean end once and for all 🔪

Originally posted by: Sampada_14

Vira, First of all, sorry for late reply it was long due, I wanted to read it "Fursat se"...

I can feel this was indeed a difficult part for you to write....I can't even express it properly how much I loved it, especially now when we know the mess in the show....

I actually adore & admire your writing girl. You actually dug deep inside them & put out all those emotions through your pen which they have kept buried within them...

I wish, I really wish the writers of the actual show would have such beautiful though process...Thank you for giving me this Anirudh Bose, whom we can relate. The Anirudh Bose I wanted to see after the separation I got it here...

His apology actually touched my heart, where at the end he didn't even expect to accept his apology, just ask for a chance to stay in her life & heal her wounds, what a soothing way to accept his mistakes & apologise, I just loved every bit of this....

And finally she gives in to her heart, yet again, but rightfully...Their journey has started now in true manner...

You are absolutely amazing Vira...

& Lastly, is he going to Kolkata? To finally doing the much needed thing? Please just tell me

I know... We all are stuck very badly... But don't take so much stress over Leena's crap writing...

But seriously your "this Anirudh Bose" is healing me ❤️❤️ This is what I wanted to see in him..

& Apology part, how can I not notice it?? It's the most, most beautiful way to him that much needed redemption, you just nailed it girl...

And lastly that Kolkata part, thank you... I just knew it.. Even before reading I can feel the relief & happiness of it..

Originally posted by: vira76

Aww you made my day … or should I say night !! I was feeling uoset with the current state of the show , we all are 😒… so thanks for the great review ! I love to read what you guys think !

I am glad you noticed the apology part .. I gave it a long thought about it and came to this conclusion … sometimes time heals the wounds and it heals slowly through sincerity and it takes time

Yes he is going to Kolkata to do the much needed thing ! I felt it’s needed ,that thing whatever that is needs a clean end once and for all 🔪

Yeah, i know!! Leena's writing is so inconsistent! I can't focus on her at all!

I am touched!! You guys encourage me to continue writing this

Originally posted by: Sampada_14

I know... We all are stuck very badly... But don't take so much stress over Leena's crap writing...

But seriously your "this Anirudh Bose" is healing me ❤️❤️ This is what I wanted to see in him..

& Apology part, how can I not notice it?? It's the most, most beautiful way to him that much needed redemption, you just nailed it girl...

And lastly that Kolkata part, thank you... I just knew it.. Even before reading I can feel the relief & happiness of it..

Ohhhh my God.....

How beautiful.......how cathartic....

I can understand why you say it is the most difficult part for you....You understand RuNak sooo much...the emotions that are buried in the deepest corner of their heart , you dig them out.....soo soo beautifully and magically....... That's why I admire your writing....

.The way you presented apology is soo soo beautiful...Here Apology isn't merely stringing together words, you have presented it as a nuanced, sincere expression of remorse and empathy....

Jhanak expressing her hurts and disappointment in simple and straight terms is soo soo beautiful... Exactly how we wanted her to communicate and share her heart....The power of her words,pain in her hearts was sooo sooo Beautifully penned that not just Ani but I also felt that numbness....

Aniruddh Bose breaking down....so beautifully captured by your pen that it actually purified his love for Jhanak once again ,all his mistakes getting washed away...

Beginning with acknowledgement of wrong doing, then empathy for the hurt feelings of Jhanak...and genuine regret for causing that pain established the emotional connection for me...This Aniruddh Bose Taking ownership of the mistake is soo soo heartmelting.... finally him asking for her apology, not expecting her to accept it at that moment is the most touching moment for me..as it reflected his willingness to change.... asking for a chance to heal her wounds...to soothe her again....ahh sukoon....

She gave in to her heart...but rightfully...He earned with his sincere expression of compassion and regret.. I could feel the easing of emotional burdens...

Ahhh what a journey it was.....

With beautiful RuNak moments (one of the most soft and tender moment)....with pictures...songs ..Hayee....

I love it sooo soo much....i can't even express properly.

Most awaited part...and you nailed it.....

I love this Aniruddh Bose..........

Aww Asmi thank you! Your writing made me feel better instantly! I am so glad I was successful at addressing the loopholes that Leena conveniently ignored and you guys are still able to like this after all that happened. I will try to release the new chapter as soon as possible!

Lots of love! ❤️

Originally posted by: asmitamohanty

Ohhhh my God.....

How beautiful.......how cathartic....

I can understand why you say it is the most difficult part for you....You understand RuNak sooo much...the emotions that are buried in the deepest corner of their heart , you dig them out.....soo soo beautifully and magically....... That's why I admire your writing....

.The way you presented apology is soo soo beautiful...Here Apology isn't merely stringing together words, you have presented it as a nuanced, sincere expression of remorse and empathy....

Jhanak expressing her hurts and disappointment in simple and straight terms is soo soo beautiful... Exactly how we wanted her to communicate and share her heart....The power of her words,pain in her hearts was sooo sooo Beautifully penned that not just Ani but I also felt that numbness....

Aniruddh Bose breaking down....so beautifully captured by your pen that it actually purified his love for Jhanak once again ,all his mistakes getting washed away...

Beginning with acknowledgement of wrong doing, then empathy for the hurt feelings of Jhanak...and genuine regret for causing that pain established the emotional connection for me...This Aniruddh Bose Taking ownership of the mistake is soo soo heartmelting.... finally him asking for her apology, not expecting her to accept it at that moment is the most touching moment for me..as it reflected his willingness to change.... asking for a chance to heal her wounds...to soothe her again....ahh sukoon....

She gave in to her heart...but rightfully...He earned with his sincere expression of compassion and regret.. I could feel the easing of emotional burdens...

Ahhh what a journey it was.....

With beautiful RuNak moments (one of the most soft and tender moment)....with pictures...songs ..Hayee....

I love it sooo soo much....i can't even express properly.

Most awaited part...and you nailed it.....

I love this Aniruddh Bose..........