Runak OS - The Promise Ring - Page 2

Originally posted by: tellyme

thank you so much dear

Still waiting for your feedback on Entangled’

Loved how you quoted Robert Frost!

‘ have promises to keep

Miles to go before I sleep

Miles to go before I sleep’

Great going dear!

Anu ji, before I write my thoughts one disclaimer. I named my OS the same as yours but changed thinking my focus point is not necessarily the ring, just a symbol that represents what I want the story to be about.

Thank goodness!!

Don't worry, name is not going to be Yearning either.

Now coming to my thoughts about the story.....

Loved how Ani slowly started realizing the gravity of separation once the train left.

Basus behaved exactly as I predicted them to be. Especially Bipasha, being an advocate for Arshi while the latter is screaming like a banshee in my ears.

I can imagine it as you have written. Not a pleasant scene you know

The conversation Ani and Jhanak had before she left....

SO MUCH BETTER.

This is the kind of progress I expected them to have, not to dance and talk double-meaning dialogues. As much as there was intense emotions involved in the scene I especially love how you have given new meaning to that ring by adding that it means something to Jhanak too just like how Ani had promised himself that it is a nishani about them. And also a more valid reason for Ani to ask Jhanak to make her wear that ring. There is a certain weight to the act and it so beautiful to witness.

And finally, THANKS THAT THERE IS NO RAHUL. Especially from Ani. Not at this moment. Please!

#LETRAHULRESTPEOPLE

Excited for part 2!!! Keep it coming!

Awesome yet Painful

Jhanak has left and leaving Ani in deep pain

but I truly loved her promise to him that she will never marry

any one

while Ani too makes the same promise

then there is Arshi she cannot see that Ani is in pain all she is effected

with is that he walked to his room without greeting or speaking to anyone

I'm hoping in future Ani and Jhanak can meet and both truly fall for each other

confess to each other

Great start! I can't wait for the next part. Thank you so much for tagging me 😊

🥳🥳🥳🥳

Emotional story Anu ,

After watching today's episode reading you I am so emotional now..

The comparison of empty train cabin and Jhanak's life 💔💔💔😢

Beautifully written , the feeling after someone leaves you without any promise of coming back .

Waiting for yearning .....

Thankyou Anu bringing in the emotions of Anirudh and Jhanak .

Originally posted by: Edkv74

Loved how you quoted Robert Frost!

‘ have promises to keep

Miles to go before I sleep

Miles to go before I sleep’

Great going dear!

Oh Forgot to tell one thing. Updated the OS link in the FF thread.

Originally posted by: Anusha16

Anu ji, before I write my thoughts one disclaimer. I named my OS the same as yours but changed thinking my focus point is not necessarily the ring, just a symbol that represents what I want the story to be about.

Thank goodness!!

Don't worry, name is not going to be Yearning either.

Now coming to my thoughts about the story.....

Loved how Ani slowly started realizing the gravity of separation once the train left.

Basus behaved exactly as I predicted them to be. Especially Bipasha, being an advocate for Arshi while the latter is screaming like a banshee in my ears.

I can imagine it as you have written. Not a pleasant scene you know

The conversation Ani and Jhanak had before she left....

SO MUCH BETTER.

This is the kind of progress I expected them to have, not to dance and talk double-meaning dialogues. As much as there was intense emotions involved in the scene I especially love how you have given new meaning to that ring by adding that it means something to Jhanak too just like how Ani had promised himself that it is a nishani about them. And also a more valid reason for Ani to ask Jhanak to make her wear that ring. There is a certain weight to the act and it so beautiful to witness.

And finally, THANKS THAT THERE IS NO RAHUL. Especially from Ani. Not at this moment. Please!

#LETRAHULRESTPEOPLE

Excited for part 2!!! Keep it coming!

And yes, thanks for liking the ring part. Ring I felt should not only have been a marriage gift but such gifts should hold some meaning and thus tried bringing it here.

Also, No worries for the title, as I said, Keep whatever you feel like.

'Yearnig' is just a concept for next part, I will have no issue changing if you keep it.

Once again thanks for your wonderful analysis.