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(Part 48)

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**Sorry for late update, my laptop crashed and I had no backup


Part 49

Geet snatches her phone away and turns off the screen feeling strangely annoyed as her friend looked this way and that way at his different pics.


G - Stop looking …He is just normal handsome


G- Ohhh... So what is it then ? Hmm? Hmm? Hmmmmmmmm??????


Geet didn't want to tell her friend anything


She starts reverse tickling her friend.


This ensues a sudden tickling and pillow fighting battle.

At the end both stop after running out of energy.

F - Hey…i don't understand what's going on and or whether what you are doing is stupid or not. But honestly l am happy for you.

G - You think this is stupid?

F - It doesn't matter what I think. If this works for you then what I think doesn't count. Most important is your happiness and this is the most happy and relaxed I have seen you over the years.

G - Well.. umm thanks I guess... You know... actually even in am not sure if this is correct. But you are right.it feels like after a long-long time I am really happy and worry free.

F - Good for you!

Geet smiles and hugs her friend feeling unburden.

They both have dinner and then the friend leaves.

In a happy mood Geet goes to sleep. After more than an hour of lying down she couldn't fall asleep.

She twists and turns.

She then makes herself a hot cup of milk and reads a boring article.

But nothing is helping her fall asleep.

Subconsciously her mind keeps replaying the conversation with her friend.

More emphasis on the part where her friend told her with almost confidence that the Maan loves her.

She can't believe it at all.

All the evidences... the evidences... They…they are against her believe! But.. it can't be!

Then is it true that he likes her? Like her like her? The romantic type of liking? Not the friend type or the physical attraction type.

Does he? Really? Why would he? It can't be true right?

Geet tries to come up with past incidents which would help support her believe she couldn't.

Only thing that supported her believe was the logic that; they are different people. From different class. Different upbringing. They couldn’t... they shouldn’t... it would never work out... and they are such different people how can they understand each other's ideology, habits, goals, personality, priorities everything.

Maybe it's just physical attraction pretending to be romantic liking.

She was unable to fall asleep after tossing and turning for a long time, her brain had turned to almost mush.

Feeling groggy and dizzy she looked at the dark circles forming under her eyes.

Without thinking much further she picks up the phone and calls the root of all problems.

Maan answers the call after a few rings.

His voice was husky and deep due to just waking up.

Geet puuls the phone away from her ear and puts it on speaker instead.

M- What happened? Is everything okay? Did you butt dial me? Drunk dial? Are you alright?

G - None of the above... I... I want to ask you something.

M - What do you want to know?

G - It's not really a question.. I.. you can confirm if it's true.

M – What….what is it?

G - Actually it's not something I ... it's something my friend said…

M - What did she say?

G - You know what. Forget it ...it's nothing important…

M - My dear lovely wife. You woke me up at 3.30 am. If you don't say I will die of curiosity.

G - Stop... Stop talking like that. This is all coz you can't control your mouth and talk this way!

M- What happened? Did your friend hear me? Isn't there a simple explanation?

G - …she heard it ...

M - And?

G - And she explained that...

M - She explained?

G - Hmm..

M - What did she explain?

G - that... You..l.. l.. youloveme

M - Do I?

G - Do you?

M - Do _You_ ?

G – I...

M - Is this why you called me?

G - Hmm…

M- Couldn't sleep?

G- Hm.

She hears him sigh deeply.

Her confused brain panics a bit.

Why was he sighing?

Is he angry?

What's he angry about?

Is he sad?

What's he sad about?

Is he thinking I am an idiot?

I knew this call was mistake

M - Honey…ahem…Mrs Geetanjali.. I don't know about love. But I do like you. I like spending time with you. I like talking to you. I like looking at you. I like you. Is that enough for now?

G - You... You.... How can you... This...

M - Don't you like me too?

G - I.. I do... but... this... it's not possible between us...

M - Maybe.. maybe not... But we are happy right now with this much liking right?

G - Right.

M - So let's just continue this way. We don't have to change things because we like each other... it's the opposite. It is because of how things are... it works for us, and we have developed feelings for each other.

G - So you mean... we...

M - We do nothing

G - Oh.

M - Isn't it easy?

G - It is. Buy. I feel like I should do something.

M - Why? We don't have to follow conventions. We are old married couple. We don't have the pressure to express our liking at every turn. We already know it.

G - My friend says you have high EQ ... that's why you married me first and then say all these things so I can't run away.

M - Hmm... in retrospect it does seem like a clever move on my part. But to be honest I didn't like you this much at that time. But partly yeah... I felt you are going to run away.

He laughs at his own joke.

M - But you friend is very interesting. We should have a get together sometime.

G - You are changing the topic!!

M - Okay. What else you want to know?

G - I... We are different people. In the long run we won't fit and get along…

M - Okay. Let's go along till we want to then.

G -.. why are you so relaxed and calm?!! How can you say all this so casually? Why aren't you more alarmed? Have you had so many ex's that this is common for you? Am i freaking out this much because this is my first time feeling all this?

M - I think one of us needs to be calm so maybe that's why? And this is my first time marrying someone and confessing my liking. To be honest like you, i never gave this much thought until you asked me a yes or no question right now.

G - .. i am... This is ..

M - Let me tell you something. Then you answer a question for me?

G - Okay…

M - You have met my parents. I am sure you saw them being lovey-dovey everywhere, all the time.

G – Hmm

M - I grew up seeing that. To me they represent the epitome of what couples in love should look like. But I don't think I want to fall in that kind of love. Tell me, do you want to fall in love where you lose your sense of self and your everything is for the other person? Is it right kind of love? Isn't that defeating the reason why the two people liked and fell for each other in the first place? This my chicken and egg problem.

G - ... Umm I don't want you to get angry but I feel what they have is not love.. but more like obsession...

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 1 years ago
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Thanks for update. Waiting for their romance.

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Wonderful 😘 😘 😘 update fab fab

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Part 49


Fabulous Update


I loved the entire phone conversation ,though Geet herself

did not know how to start

but great that eventually Maan tells her both like each other

and can stay that way

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Posted: 1 years ago

Loved it dear Neelu ☺️

Awesome update 😃

Well I really appreciate that Geet has taken her friends words seriously & started thinking in a right direction now ... Thou she isn't sure but still she is confident that Maan likes her ☺️

Finally after much contemplation she decides to call him & be clear with everything now & I am happy that Maan gave her an honest answer & now hopefully they will start sharing their heart

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM

Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 1 years ago

Appreciate the update

Congrats to the winners


Part 49

Fine update… Fantabulously written

of cos Geet's friend is happy for her

her friend's comment was reasonable

great that for Geet this feels right, that she happy and worry free

Geet's thoughts were justified

well she is unable to fall asleep

she thinks that its just physical attraction and not love

as expected she calls Maan

her question was anticipated

not surprised that Maan was honest with Geet about his feelings

Geet was clearly amazed

at least she admitted that she liked him

but she says its not possible between them

so Maan said that they should just continue as is

however Geet feels that like they should do something about it

Maan had a point

alas Geet thinks as they are different they won't get along in the long run

opposites attract

pleased how Maan responded

he does like Geet and wants to go with the flow

good that Maan opened up to Geet

ha ha she thinks that his parents are not in love but obsessed with each other


update soon

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Part 50

M - You have met my parents. I am sure you saw them being lovey-dovey everywhere, all the time.

G – Hmm

M - I grew up seeing that. To me they represent the epitome of what couples in love should look like. But I don't think I want to fall in that kind of love. Tell me, do you want to fall in love where you lose your sense of self and your everything is for the other person? Is it right kind of love? Isn't that defeating the reason why the two people liked and fell for each other in the first place? This my chicken and egg problem.

G - ... Umm I don't want you to get angry but I feel what they have is not love... but more like obsession...

Maan laughs heartily at her reply.

M - Go on. I am quite happy with your fresh insight.

G - ... if what they have is love... Yeah.. even I don't want to fall in love then.

M - So you agree somewhat?

G- Yeah...

M - Then let's not worry about love. Okay?

G - Hmm. Okay.

M - What else did your friend enlighten you about?

G - She didn’t... I am not... I am like an ostrich maybe. I don't want to deal with complicated things or feelings.

M - Then don't. Don't complicate it. We don't need to change anything.

G - You don't expect more... Have more expectations from me... now that...

M - Welllllll can I expect more baked goods?

G - .....

M - That's the only benefit I am getting right now. I only expect a bit more of the same thing.

G-Idiot!

M – Wait! Hold on! Did I just miss a make 3 wishes to the genie kind of situation?


Can you ask me again? I have 3wishes!!

Geet chuckles and smiles

G - Not asking again. You missed it.

M - Damn it!

Maan hears her laugh happily.

It slowly calms down his wildly beating heart.

M - Alright. I won't be as stingy as you. What are your upgraded expectations? You get ask 3 things.

G - Really?!

M - Yup!

G - Then for starters. I want to stop baking and sending you cookies. It's bad for your health and it takes up too much of my time.

M – Girl! You are simply being unreasonable now. Not allowed. Not granting this wish. Change it.

G – Hahahahaaaa

M - Are you playing with my precious feelings?

G - Hehe... guess?

M - Tch Tch Tch... You have completely learned all bad things from me. (Sigh) My favorite disciple, master is proud of you!

G - No No... I haven't learned your level of saying nonsense. Neither do I want to!

M- That is my special talent. And I only bestow it upon chosen few. Have you seen me with my family and in professional space?

G- Yeah….you are a completely different person. Maybe you are a better actor than me.

M- Ah!! See I told you I should have done that bed scene with you.

He says cheekily.

G- Hey Bhagwan! You still remember that.

He chuckles.

M- I never forget, dear.

She shakes her head while laughing.

M- By the way, since your friend knows about us now; are you sure she won’t divulge it to anyone. You still want to keep it a secret, right.

G-Hmm. I guess I can trust her. Well…she was the one who persuaded me to …. look for different avenues….

M-Ohhhhhh!!!

G- She has seen me struggle…hundreds of auditions…shoots…

M- So she was also struggling like you?

G- No, she is elder than me and senior artist. She takes up the role of Bhabhi, aunt etc in daily soaps, ads etc. She would have roles in the shoots where I would just go as extra or just wait for even a small part. Sometimes I would even go for shoots for the food…you know the food in the shoot is free right and I didn’t have money to afford food. So, she advised me that to survive in the industry I would need an influential help.

M- Did she have any “Influential” help?

G- Yeah….she is super secondary wife of a small Dubai sheikh.

M- Oh. I see.

G- She was also persuading me to come to Dubai with her and stay with her. I was really scared. I said no to her.

M- You did the right thing.

G- Well…I don’t know…what I did was also not the right thing.

She sighs.

M- Hey! Hey! Hey! Am I not the better deal??

He says self gloatingly.

M- Miss India marti mujhpe

A dialogue from her daily soap slips off his mouth that he had seen a million times but hides it from her.

G- Arre! Ye toh mere serial ka dialogue hai!

M- Oh. Acha. Maybe I heard it in my office…you know these young freshers.

G- Yeah. Tum toh aise bol rahe ho jaise you are a senior citizen.

Maan laughs and banters with Geet light heartedly until the sun comes up and she stopped talking.

He finally hears her soft breaths after she had fallen asleep.

He whispers her name once to be sure. Hearing no more reply, he disconnected the call.

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Posted: 1 years ago

Loved it dear Neelu ☺️

Awesome update 😃

I am loving this bantering between Maan and Geet & I really appreciate that both are now freely discussing what they want 😁

Maan is really taking out inner heart of Geet that is insecure & the way he calmed her was really beautiful ❤️

🤔 Hmmm let's see how they define love for themselves as they have a different temperament & arrangement I hope things come out naturally

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM

Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 1 years ago

Part 50


Fabulous Update


I totally loved how Maan and Geet converse

with each other

fooling around yet giving important information to one another

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