A Tale As Old As Time [COMPLETED]- Page 10

Hello my dear readers!

To clear a few things up, I'm making this post...

As you already know, Piya grew up with Naman under Guru Maa's care because her parents got separated after her brother's death; later Mohana kidnapped Divya. Growing up, she had only one wish - to reunite with her mother. When Nazar originally aired, it was shown that whenever Piya felt terrified or was unsure of her actions, she would always reminisce about Divya and let her wisdom guide her.

The flashback I included in the last chapter, took place when Piya first began to experience her power and felt drawn toward Ansh while consciously she decided to marry Naman under certain circumstances. At that time she had a vision of Divya encouraging her to have faith and do her best.

Considering how Piya is torn between her desire to unite with Ansh and her guilt of neglecting others, it felt like an appropriate reference concerning her dilemma.

Coming to her flashback with Adi, when the show took a 6 years leap, PiyAnsh separated for the silliest of reasons and the Nalayek writer made PiyAnsh behave totally out of their characters.

Ansh felt Piya chose her power over him and their son, refusing to listen to her side of the story and left Piya stranded on the day she came to tell him she was pregnant with their second child.

Piya on the other hand, was shattered by Ansh's desertion and decided to leave the city. However, she left Adi behind and hoped that the child would eventually forget her and get on with his life considering he was barely a year and a half at that time.

Post leap, during an accident when Piya tried to save Adi, he blurted out that he knew she was his mother and urged her to save herself. And when Piya said she was not going to leave him, the poor kid stated the obvious prompting Piya to hug him and assure him of her love.

As for Dev, he was a Daivik who turned bad and joined forces with Kalashree (Another powerful Daayan). The makers never clarified how and when he decided to switch sides or what was his exact reason for taking that step.

It was only shown that he gained immense power, he could also control others' minds and he played a lot of tricks to prove that Piya being a Daivik belonged with him and not Ansh. For a moment there, even Ansh wondered if he deserved to be with her but Piya had unwavering faith in their love and fought till the end until she overpowered Dev and froze him in a cave.

That was one interesting track where we had an intelligent villain and the way Ansh supported Piya, it certainly compensated for his horrible behavior during the leap to a large extent.

That's why Ansh lost his cool when he saw him here because he's not just a regular evil entity; he's someone who tried to snatch Piya from him. That's why he thinks Dev has been revived somehow and used time traveling to exact his revenge on them...

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Dev has got Ansh all turned around and confused. He has him questioning everything that is important to him. But there are traces of truth in what he says.

Ansh will have tread a fine line here. Listen just enough but continue focusing on his ultimate goal too.

Originally posted by: coderlady

Dev has got Ansh all turned around and confused. He has him questioning everything that is important to him. But there are traces of truth in what he says.

Ansh will have tread a fine line here. Listen just enough but continue focusing on his ultimate goal too.

You got that right.

The real Dev was a master manipulator. Even though Piya saw through his pretense, she had a hard time dealing with him as he gravely injured Ansh and controlled the rest of the family members' minds.

As for Ansh's ultimate goal, I apologize in advance if it is becoming a little boring/repetitive. But then again, it's essential for the climax of the story. Because we know what and who led to this situation but the characters don't. They are navigating through their complexes while also trying to stay strong and do the right thing for their loved ones.

Besides, this parallel world has its own dynamics. So it's not like they can just appear here, take Ansh back and leave. Ansh tried that and that landed him up in the hospital bed. So they are being extra careful.

But I can give you some spoilers - in the next chapter PiyAnsh will finally meet. So yes, there will be some progression in that direction.

This is getting even more intriguing. Dev is trying to manipulate Ansh, right? I hope Piya finds some solution for them. Dev seems to be a real threat here, more than Mohana. Ngl, considering how persuasive he is, he reminds me of Danzo. 💀

Like, he's so convincing, so there's no way to counter him. And people around Ansh seem to trust him, so there's so much he's going to have to fight.

I'm waiting for the next chapter, because it's going to be interesting to see how it turns out. Agghh. I cannot wait.

Originally posted by: HeirofSharingan

This is getting even more intriguing. Dev is trying to manipulate Ansh, right? I hope Piya finds some solution for them. Dev seems to be a real threat here, more than Mohana. Ngl, considering how persuasive he is, he reminds me of Danzo. 💀

Like, he's so convincing, so there's no way to counter him. And people around Ansh seem to trust him, so there's so much he's going to have to fight.

I'm waiting for the next chapter, because it's going to be interesting to see how it turns out. Agghh. I cannot wait.

Wow!

At this point, I'm not sure how to react. The complex universe that NARUTO is if I've been able to remind you of a character like Danzo, that's literally the ultimate reward for a novice like me.

Then again, I hated that b****rd to his core but loved Dev so I'm feeling a bit conflicted right now.

You are absolutely right, Mohana came nowhere near Dev if we consider his calculative moves and powers. Unfortunately, she was one of the central characters, and the makers were practically obsessed with her so they always came up with some dumb explanation to prove her superiority over the Daivik-Daavansh duo who BTW defeated all the remaining and more powerful antagonists together.

But that's a different topic and I can write page after page on this so let's not get into that.

It's not like Ansh's cousins believe Dev, except for Neha of course. Nevertheless, they are being reasonable and cautious. I mean, you can't barge into someone's apartment, beat him to a pulp, and walk away; there's gotta be some repercussions, and Karan is trying to avoid that. On the other hand, Rishi doesn't believe Dev at all but Ansh's complex is known to all. Hence he couldn't say anything to Dev.

Right now Ansh is this close to losing it. It's amazing in the sense that this Dev is a creation of his subconscious as well. Yes, he's not real. Ansh is consciously trying to get to Piya while his subconscious mind is controlling the dynamics of this world where Piya is better off without him. That's why this version of Dev is aware of how he behaved originally; his relationship with Vedashree and his guilt is almost the same as how it is in the real world. It's designed so meticulously to ensure his subconscious wins over his conscious and ultimately he gives up on Piya. It's dangerously twisted.

That is why it's more on Piya because she has to reinstate his faith in their love again. And we already know how the spell has started to affect her health so the next chapters are gonna be even more difficult for them.

I just hope I can do complete justice to their situation in the successive chapters because it's becoming awfully difficult even for me...

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A lot happened in this chapter and I'm glad about the developments. The heartwarming moments and the uncertainties and hopes... It all was present in this chapter. It could go either way from here on.

I loved Saavi's conversation with her father. And also her determination. I believe we're towards the last phase of this story because it'll get worse (I believe) before it can begin to get better.

The last scene with Ansh and Piya, I think, is before Piya is taken back to the present and now when she'll wake up, she'll have forgotten about him because this world's Piya doesn't know Ansh. Right?

It's intriguing. Amazing chapter. Very colourful too. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Originally posted by: HeirofSharingan

A lot happened in this chapter and I'm glad about the developments. The heartwarming moments and the uncertainties and hopes... It all was present in this chapter. It could go either way from here on.

I loved Saavi's conversation with her father. And also her determination. I believe we're towards the last phase of this story because it'll get worse (I believe) before it can begin to get better.

The last scene with Ansh and Piya, I think, is before Piya is taken back to the present and now when she'll wake up, she'll have forgotten about him because this world's Piya doesn't know Ansh. Right?

It's intriguing. Amazing chapter. Very colourful too. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Thanks dear! ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

You are right about everything, starting from the story entering to its final phase to the shock Ansh is about to receive. 🤗 🤗 🤗

I too had a great time exploring Saavi-Naman and Saavi-Nishant dynamics. As much as I love the show and PiyAnsh, one of my unfulfilled wishes is we hardly saw Piya and Saavi interacting and they always focused on her skills as a Reevavanshi. Logically speaking, Piya can't be the only one scarred from her parents' separation. In a way, Saavi had it worse since Nishant behaved so strictly and rudely most of the time. Hence writing from her point of view has been a blast.

Also I wanted to explore her relationship with Naman because the writer's rushed through it and gave them a happy ending.

Coming to PiyAnsh, they will have to face their deepest, darkest emotions before everything gets sorted. 😪 😪 😪

So I really hope you'll enjoy the upcoming chapters... 🤗 🤗 🤗

Saavi is in a tough spot, with her trying to do the right thing for her sister and not putting her life at risk. So they will bring Pia back for now and have her go back after some time?