Tangled Threads- small TMD fiction-part 6Updated on page 6 - Page 4

Originally posted by: Simiyy

Can't wait for the next update!!

Thanks,

I will updated soon

Very nice update. Loved Akeer and cutie Banies conversation. HansPrab convo though short, loved em. And I particularly loved Bebe and Manbeers convo about how Akeer reminded them of Angad. that was awesome.

Originally posted by: Athz

Very nice update. Loved Akeer and cutie Banies conversation. HansPrab convo though short, loved em. And I particularly loved Bebe and Manbeers convo about how Akeer reminded them of Angad. that was awesome.

My fav part while writing was akeer and bani bond..God ph wallo agar yaha tumhari aatma bhatak rahi hai forum pe toh hum sab par ehsaan karke akeer bani ka sceene dikha do ..

thanks for your lovely comment

What a beautiful story!❤️ Tbh, I gave up on this show since a couple of months and moved on. Keery would have been breath of fresh air in all this mess, but that was sidelined as well. Thanks for writing from Keery perspective and filling the gaps.Loving the story and how supportive Keery are of each other and Bani. I do hope that they'll never have to be at opposite ends.

Akir leaving was definitely odd and not safe. Did that happen in the show too? I was fully expecting Keery and Sahiba to come face to face. It's just a bit off that Sahiba didn't come to meet her son inside and personally thank the people who took care of her child. I'm sure you have something else planned. I do hope that the file they received with Inders death certificate, it has Sahiba's pregnancy reports. And they realize that Akir is Sahiba/Angad's son. Looking forward to the next few parts.

And thanks for the DM about the update.

Thanks for the tag on this story!

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

What a beautiful story!❤️ Tbh, I gave up on this show since a couple of months and moved on. Keery would have been breath of fresh air in all this mess, but that was sidelined as well. Thanks for writing from Keery perspective and filling the gaps.Loving the story and how supportive Keery are of each other and Bani. I do hope that they'll never have to be at opposite ends.

Akir leaving was definitely odd and not safe. Did that happen in the show too? I was fully expecting Keery and Sahiba to come face to face. It's just a bit off that Sahiba didn't come to meet her son inside and personally thank the people who took care of her child. I'm sure you have something else planned. I do hope that the file they received with Inders death certificate, it has Sahiba's pregnancy reports. And they realize that Akir is Sahiba/Angad's son. Looking forward to the next few parts.

And thanks for the DM about the update.

thank you so much for the lovely comment.

I have gave up on the show long before the leap just only lurking here for keery and tushar.

yes exploring keery story along with sahan would have been wonderful but the writers have messed up the story so much .It would surely have been wonderful if we got to know other people point of view ,their thoughts on the after math of everything but kuch nahi mila....

Yes thats why i wrote it everything from keery perspective because at moment they are very near people to sahan and their lives has changed too after sahan..

Oh how i wish garry simran ko daant lagta affer simran shouted at our cutie pie bani .But this dumbo writers have made keery mute and statue.this was the point where i decided no let me write something which should have been shown..

About this fiction.

My main purpose was to feel up the raita and make. look a story more logically...And. what was better than showing it from keery perspective..

Dont worry keery will never be opposite of each other they will stand side by side and fight for their little family and happiness in the midst of chaos.

yes akeer did really pulled up stunt ..i. show, but never got punished for his this stunt. in the show.

Yes pakka their is reason and something i have planned for sahiba meeting with keery and jasleen and bani....

about sahiba's reports-surprise surprise..surpise..tum badi achi detectivve ho..

i will updated the next part soon ..

And thank you once again for the lovely comment...

A/n:

So guys ,This is part 4 and may be well finally my fiction will be till part 5 or 6 .

Anyways ,here from this part the peak of drama will began.

Also p.s. that here I have included Angad's pov and its just according to my view about the aftermath of how angad should have been shown or done .I will also include sahiba's pov but in next part.

The flashback of angad will be in blue colour..

Sorry for any typo error and grammar mistakes.

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Part4/5

@in panesar,

Biji and twinkle were happy to see everyone back safely. However, sahiba had been silent all the while. A lot of thoughts had been going in her mind. And akeer was in bad mood .

Sahiba-akeer ,fresh hojaa aur aaj jo school mein miss kiya hai woh sab complete kar ke hi soyega.Mein ne tere class teacher se baat kardi hai unhone saare homework aur chapters jo aaj karvaayatha sab bhej diya hai , saara school work complete kiye bina sona nahi hai.

Akeer- nai , mein nahi karunga homework, aapne mujeh competition mein part nahi lene diya.Mein homework, school work kuch nahi karunga.

Sahiba- mein ne pehle hi kaha tha ki aaj sazaa milegi. toh yahi teri sazaa yahi hai ki competition mein hissa nahi lega aur apna school work complete kiye bina soye gaa nahi .

Akeer looks at diljeet for support..

Diljeet- akeer, teri mummy sahi keh rahi, aaj tune galti ki hai aur iss baar toh mein bhi naraaz hoon.. apna school ka work complete karne baithja.

Sahiba freshens up quickly, biji and twinkle had already made the dinner ,she was going through the order list. Everyone got busy in their respective work.

They hear a loud noise from akeer's room.

Sahiba, biji and diljeet ran to his room.

Akeer in anger had pushed away the glass of hot milk which twinkle had brought for him . And was speaking in rudely manner with twinkle.

It was the limit for sahiba. She decided to punish akeer today for his misbehavior, and the stunt he pulled up . She had decided to not give him severe punishment, but now it seemed , that she had to take few hard steps for akeer's betterment.

Sahiba -twinkle, dikha haath.(blowing air) zyada jal toh nahi raha hai na...Diljeet ji jaaye jaldi se thanda paani laaye...

Diljeet brings cold water and sahiba helps twinkle.

After aiding twinkle's hand , sahiba and biji picks up the notebooks ,before they could get spoiled more.

Sahiba- (firm tone) diljeet ji, aaj aap bich mein nahi aayenge , agar aap akeer ki bhalai chahte hai toh aaj usse jo mein sazaa doongi uss mein bich mein nahi ayenge.

Sahiba- akeer, twinkle bua se sorry bol . dhoodh ka glass utha .aur yeh le poocha aur farsh par poocha laga.

Akeer doesnt move .

Akeer-mein nahi karunga...

Sahiba-akeer ! mein aakhri baar keh rahi hoon.

Akeer doesnt obilige.

sahiba brings akeer to backyard .

Sahiba - teri batmiziyaan bahut badh rahi hai..Aaj toh tujhe sazaa milegi...mein nahi dena chahti ..par bina sazaa tu maanega nahi.

She grabs a plastic scale.

Sahiba-haath aage kar, akeer .

Again, Akeer doesnt oblige.

Sahiba-(to herself) mujeh maaf karna akeer, yeh teri bhalayi ke liye kar rahi hoon.

Sahiba firmly holds akeer's palm and strikes against his. palm.

Akeer starts to cry and so does sahiba .

Sahiba-(crying) (in a firm tone)kitni baar kaha hai..ki akeer zid mat kar...zid mat kar , par meri baat sunnta kaha hai.Kuch socha hai..aaj agar kuch hojata toh kal mana kiya tha na, phir kyu gaya...!? ..Apni zidd ke kaaran aaj tune kitna pareahan kiya hai sabko.

sahiba again strikes against akeer's palm.

Sahiba- (crying)kitni baar kaha hai zidd mat kar, har zidd puri ho yeh zaroori nahi hai. Kabhi kabar dusro ki fikar karni hoti hai.har baar manmaani nahi chalti..Kabhi haan toh kabhi naa sunna zaroori hota hai, Jeet aur haar dono ko dekhna padta hai,

(she throw away the scale on ground)

Sahiba- (crying) mei teri maa hoon!dushman nahi ki tera bura karungi..Agar mein kuch kehti hoon ,rokti hoon ,daanti hoon toh issliye ki tujeh apni galti ka ehsaas ho aur apni galti ko sudhare . Sahi or galat mein fark jaana sikhe .par nahi tujeh apni hi manmaani karni hai. kaise samjhaau tujeh..kaise samjhaau ki...

(to biji)

aap bataye kaise samjhau isse.. kho kar paaya hai..mein ne akeer ko , kho kar paaya hai, aur aaj kuch hojaata toh apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi kar paati mein.

Sahiba -(picking up the scale) kal kaha tha na ki khaane ka apmaan nahi karte !toh kyu baat nahi sunni meri haan!! patah hai kitne saare log duniya mein bina bukhe pet so jaate hai, hum khusnasib hai ki hame do waqt roti milti..kisi woh bhi nahi milta.

Diljeet-sahibaji mein rokunga nahi, kyuki aaj akeer ne ki galti hai, par galti meri bhi aur isse badi hai, mere hi zyada laad pyaar ka kaaran hai aaj ki yeh sab hua.Uski har zidd puri ki hai ,mein yeh bhul gaya ki zyada pyaar bhi zeher ke barabar hota hai, iIssliye aaj aap mujeh bhi sazaa dijiye . Kyuki aaj akeer ki iss laparwaahi ka karan mein hi hoon..Mujeh bhi sazaa dijiye kyuki akeer se zyada dosh mera hai..

Diljeet forwards his hand in front of sahiba..

Sahiba picks up the scale again and hits across his palm few times.

@monga house

Keery and bani arrived at Monga house.

While keerat freshened up ,Garry put bani to sleep and prepared tea.

Before Monga's passed away, they passed on the property to sahiba & keerat .Keerat decided to regularly maintain it and keep it in a working condition for sahiba .As she believed that one day she would surely return ,so keery and bani ,used to sometime live here for repairs and maintenance purpose and sometime just to spend some time with each other and bani and other times just to be away from brars and the gloomy atmosphere of brar house.

Keerat tells about the incident she heard from sunaina .

Keerat- Garry, Kya tumhe nahi lagta yeh doctor gill naam sunna sunna nahi lag raha ????

Garry-Doctor gill??

Keerat-haan, tum jaante ho?

Garry- mein sure nahi hoon,par yeh doctor the shayad kortis hospital mein. Jaha tak mujeh yaad hai2-3 doctors the jinki surname gill thi. Ya abhi honge doctor shayad unhe mein se sahiba bhabhi

Keery looked at each other with the realization of an possibility .

After few hours,

Keery were going through the all files and reports of the past years related to sahiba 9years back at monga house.

Here in the brar house, jasleen too was going through files and documental reports of past 9 years.

She was on call with keery...

Jasleen- keerat,kuch mila??

Keerat-nahi,mom yaha sab documents,papers ,reports sab mixed up ho chuke hai..sahiba didi ki 9 saal pehle ki mil hi nahi rahi hai..sab mis placed ho chuke hai

Garry-(going through the files) mom,aisa kaise ho sakta hai?Doctor ne mujeh khud woh file handover ki thi..

Jasleen-I know ,gars...phir kaise gayab ho sakti hai ,

Garry- shayad ghar mein se kisi ne aisi jagah chuppa di ho ki angad ke haath na lage

Jasleen- I am not sure garry, itni important file ....(long pause)

Garry-Hello mom? mom?? aap sun rahe hai??mom?kya hua ???koi aaya ? mom???

Keerat-mom??kuch mila kya ?? mom??mom??

Jasleen- garry...(long pause)keerat.. report ...report .. mil gayi (pause) sahiba ki

Keery-kya???

Jasleen-reports..(long pause) sahiba ...sahiba ka miscarriage hua hi nahi..

Garry-mom,yeh purani reports mein aapko mile ?

Jasleen- nahi, aaj jo files laaye the na,uss mein thi..

Keery remembered what the admin office at kortis hospital said.

Garry-iska matalb sahiba bhabhi, aur angad bro ka baby ko kuch nahi hua.

Keerat - haan, aur yeh baat di ko bhi toh patah chali hogi na?toh phir woh wapas kyu nahi aaye?

Garry- keerat, sahi keh rahi , yeh baat bhabhi ko ek ya do mahina , baad mein toh patah chal hi gayi hogi na ki baby safe hai.

Jasleen- Yes, Shayad sahiba brar house aayi ho?

Garry- agar sahiba bhabhi aaye hote toh hame patah kyu nahi chala?

Jasleen-yeh bhi toh ho sakta hai na ki jab hum sahiba ko dhoodh rahe the , tab woh aayi ho brar ya monga house aayi ho.

Garry- possible ,par mom sahiba bhabhi agar brar house aaye hote toh ghar mein iss baat ka mention hota na, ya phir koi bhi jhagde mein ek baar toh yeh baat uthai jaati na.

Keerat-correct ,ya phir veerji ne hi mana kiya ho.Ghar mein sahiba didi,ka naam tak hum le sakte ,toh yeh bhi ho sakta ki didi shayad aaye ho unke baby ke baare mein baat karne par kisi na sunni na ho

Jasleen- sahi kaha keerat, ek kaam karte hai, mein kal subha aati hoon waha aur phir baat karte hai.

After the intial happiness and thought of reuniting with sahiba and the child ,came the moral dilemma ,whether they should inform about it to other family members ? Though, bebe clarified about not holding grudges against sahiba.

They were not sure about others, it was clear, that they avoided to talk about sahiba or as matter of fact no one even thought about her whereabouts.

Finally, they decided to not tell a word about it and search for sahiba and the child and let sahiba decide it. And as for them, they decided to stand up and support sahiba .

@brar house,

Manveer talks to angad and suggest him to move on in life. To let go the past and move on. Angad says that he would think about it.

Angad then goes to some play ground near his house and takes out few alcohol bottles.

After gulping down 2-3 glasses of alcohol

Angad- aaj ...aaj mein yeh dard mein sirf aur sirf tumahari wajah se hoon sahiba.Tum kis mitti ki banni ho,itni selfish, kaise ho sakti ho.Kisi ko itna bada dard deke , mera pure parivaar ko dard ,mere bacche ko maarke kaise chain se raat ko so sakti ho.Apna naya ghar basa sakti ho?

He in anger breaks the glass .

Angad remembers few past memories ..of sahiba both happy and sad ones and that fateful day .

Angad- acha hua jo mujeh tumhara jhutta pyar ka muhkhota, dikh gaya uss din...

Flashback 9years back....

Angad's POV

At the bus accident site,

After sahiba's call..

Angad cursed himself for letting sahiba close to his family and heart. Had he known that she would harm his family and his child in such a manner ,he would have not let her come close to his heart.

After 3 months,.

He was searching for sahiba, after his initial anger calmed down he realised his mistake. Yes , he was still angry on sahiba and didnt forgive her and blamed her for loss of child ,but ousting her from house , in such condition was wrong.

He had secretly searched for places ,and contacted her friends , but he couldn't find her .

@ in cabin

Gatekeeper- Sir, sahiba ji aaye hai kisike saath aaye hai aur woh bahut hi zaroori baat karna chahti hai .

Angad was first happy to hear that sahiba had came to meet him.

Angad-kya sahiba aayi hai??Usse yaha ander bhejo bahar kyu khada rakha hai.aur Woh kiss kaam se aaye hai??

Gatekeeper-woh aapse urgently baat karna chahti thi ,bacche ke baare mein.Woh keh rahi hai ki bacche se related hai, ek bahut badi galtfemi hui ussi ke baare mein baat karne aaye.

Angad 's happiness turned to anger , What does she want to talk about now ? after killing his child and his father due to her carelessness.?What clarity does she wanted to give now?and what misunderstanding??

Angad saw in camera that sahiba had come with some other guy .She was talking and laughing with him.

Angad- (Angrily)Sahiba , tum hass rahi ho?mujeh dukh deke kaise khush ho sakti ho tum..?Mera baccha marr gaya tumhari galti ki wajah se aur tum khush ho?Tumhare jaisi insaan aaj tak nahi dekha. Tumhari wajah se mere family ne bahut suffer kiya, par ab aur nahi.(to gatekeeper) Sahiba ko aur uske jo bhi ho usse yaha se nikaal do and unka iss premises mein aana ban kardo.

Gatekeeper forwards the instructions.

Gatekeeper-sir, woh keh rahi ki baat bahut hi important hai..woh aap se kisi bhi kimat par milna chahti hai.

Angad-aur mein bilkul bhi .Sunno keh do sahiba se ki mein usski shakal bhi nahi dekhna chahta.Woh angad aur brar parivaar ke liye mar chuki hai hamesha hamesha ke liye..

After few minutes....

Gatekeeper-sir, woh ab garry sir se milna chahti hai. Garry sir se milne ki request kar rahi hai.

Angad -usse milne mat do..kehdo ki garry bahar gaya hai.

Again gatekeeper conveys a message that sahiba was requesting admins to meet him or garry urgently as it was very much needed .

Angad than orders to let them out by force if they don't go.

Angad saw on camera that sahiba and other guy leaves his premises .He came out of his cabin and walks at the security gate.

Angad- meri baat dhyan se sunn lo aaj ke baad agar kisi ne bhi sahiba ko yeh premises mein ghusane diya toh uska last day hoga job pe.(to himself) mein tumhe mujeh se toh kya meri family pe tumhara saya padne nahi doonga.

Angad knew that garry and jasleen would search for sahiba and try to bring back sahiba in brar house. So he gave strict instructions to the gatekeepers and head servants at brar house as well as in office staff to not let sahiba enter the brar premises or let her contact anyone especially garry or jasleen.

After 10 months...

Angad was going through some files, He was irritated , and was not in mood to go for meeting, or to come to office but garry had to go to his someone's wedding suddenly ,stating it was important. He was getting ready for a meeting ,when a security guard stops him.

Security guard-Sir, aapse milne koi sahibaji aaye hai mein ne unhe waiting room mein bithaya hai.

Angad-Kya ?? kiss ne usse yaha aane diya ?Mein ne bola tha uska brar office aur ghar mein aana allowed nahi hai..Phir kiss ne aane diya...

Security- Sir, sir mein ne..

Head security -Sorry sir, issne aaj hi join kiya hai issliye usse yeh patah nahi tha.

Security-I am sorry sir ,woh bacche ke saath aayi hai aur unke saath ek aur person bhi hai.Bahar bahut dhoop thi issliye mein ne waiting room mein unhe bithaya ..

He was shocked to hear the words.Sahiba had come with a child . How?? was it??

Angad goes to the security room and checks the cctv camera of waiting room.

Sahiba and the same guy with whom she had come few months back they were both pacifying a small baby and some of the other people commented .

That they looked cute as a couple.

Angad noticed the reactions of sahiba and diljeet they just smiled but they didnt object the comment.

So she moved on, !Aur ab mere ghaav pe aur zakham dene aayi hai yeh dikha ke ki woh kitni khush hai ..!!!Ki usse phir se khushiyan mili hai...

He in anger breaks the computer screen and leaves for his cabin. He takes out the final annulment of marriage papers which he had signed and only sahiba's signature were needed.

Again he leaves his cabin and goes to waiting room where sahiba and the guy were waiting..

Angad - Mein ne kaha tha na ,mujeh tumhari shakal nahi dekhni hai.Phir kyu aayi ho ab yaha kya dikhane ,kya sunnane aayi ho..Yahi ki tum move on kar chuki ho kisi aur ke saath, yahi ki tum bahut khush ho!!!!Tumhare jaise insaan aajtak nahi dekha mein ne aajtak.Acha hua hamara rishta tutt gaya,mein sirf hamare bacche ke liye yeh rishte ko chance dena chahta tha, par ab hamara bacche ke saath saath hamara rishta bhi mar chuka hai..Yeh mein aakhri baar keh raha hoon meri family se door raho mein unhe tumhari wajah se suffer karte nahi dekh sakta .

the other guy was about go speak but sahiba stops him.

Sahiba-nahi ,diljeet ji kehne dijiye isse jo kehna aaj isse pura bolne dijiye. kehne ko toh bahut kuch aayi thi par ab lagta hai ki mein apni hi energy waste karungi.Kyuki Mr.Brar ,iske layak hi nahi hai. aur Acha hi hua mein move on kar gayi, warna patah nahi kaise insaan ke saath mujeh apni saari zindgi guzarti.

Aur haan Angad singh Brar chinta mat karo mein tumhare family ke aas paas bhi nahi aungi, kyuki uss ghar mein kuch log hai jinki mujeh parvaah hai, aur un logo ko meri parvaah hai ,par mein unhe suffer nahi hone doongi meri wajah se nahi tumhara gussa unhe jhelne doongi mere kaaran.

Aur ek baat yaad rakhna Mr.Angad singh brar ,apne baare ek baat sunlo ,shayad kabhi yeh yaad aajaye tumhe future , tum na ek Kaan ke kache insaan ho aur tumhari yeh aadat tum le dobegi, kahi ka nahi chodegi ,pachtage tum.

Angad angrily throws the divorce papers on the ground and walks away.

Flashback ends....

@in. panesar,

After punishing akeer, she went to her workshop. She breaks down every pot and earthen item she made .Taking out her frustration in the process she also hurts her hands. It was first time she raised hand on akeer. Earlier, though she used to punish him for his mistakes .but never raised hand. Today, she almost lost him had if bani & bani 's parents. were not their. But today she had to punish him for his mistake for his own betterment.

After an hour or two she goes too akeer's room and sees him sleeping.

Sahiba sees his hand and gets guilty . She takes an antiseptic cream and applies on his hand.

Sahiba-(wipes her tears) I am sorry akeer..I am sorry,par mujeh karna tha teri bhalai ke liye.Tujeh I am sorry .

She plants a light kiss on his forehead and leaves his room.

To divert her mind from unnecessary thoughts and memories she began to clean her workshop and start working on her orders.

Diljeet watched sahiba .He knew today's day events has taken a toll on her. He noticed that sahiba had been too silent ,and he knew why she was silent, as she was connected to ludhiana and going back to ludhiana had surely brought back memories . In the 9 years of marriage, they had become best friends than being partners.

Diljeet comes to her workshop and starts helping her. He quietly puts a ointment next to her.

Diljeet-sahibaji,woh yeh cream laaya tha laga lijiye warna ghaav badh jaayega aur kaam karne mein dikat aayegi..

Sahiba-aapka haath kaisa hai?Aapne dawai lagai ?

Diljeet- nahi..mein laga doonga baad mein

Sahiba looks at diljeet with stern eyes..

Diljeet- acha acha thik hai sahibaji , par ek shart hai aapko bhi dawai lagani hogi warna mein nahi lagaunga..

Sahiba- diljeet ji aap manmaani kar rahe hai..

Diljeet- waise mein manmaani nahi karta tha par koi pakke wale dost ki sangat asar hogaya hai

Sahiba smiles a little

Diljeet- sahibaji ek gal karu..

Sahibha-(wiping her tears) haan kahiye...

Diljeet- Sahibaji ,agar aapko sahi lage toh kya aap batayengi ki aisa kya hua tha ki aap kisi ko bina bole chali aayi aur kyu ??yaha tak apne apne maike se door rahi hai

Sahiba tells in detail about her past ,about how she got married to angad and all the events that followed it.

Diljeet-sahiba ji bura mat maanyega ,par aaj tak mein ne yeh kahavat sirf sunni thi ki 'ek dayan bhi 7 ghar chodke ke kisika ghar todti hai,'par yaha toh aapki badi behen ne hi aapka ghar tod diya.

Sahiba- Mein ne sapne bhi nahi socha thi ki seerat di mujeh se itni nafrat karti hai,par mujeh sabse zyada dukh iss baat ka hai ki angad ne kabhi mujeh samjha hi nahi. Hamari soch kabhi ek nahi hui. Woh shayad ek acha beta, bhai hosakta hai par mere nazro. mein woh ek acha pati nahi tha.

Diljeet- mein jo kehna chahta hoon , woh kehna aasan hoga par karna muskil nahi , par sochiye aaj akeer hame bina batayae chala gaya toh hamari kaisi halat hogayi thi.Hame laga hamari duniya hi khatam hogayi hai, toh aapke mummy ,papa aur behen ko kaisa laga hoga.Kaha kaha nahi dhoodha aapko. Itne saalo se ek umeed liye baithe honge ki unki beti wapas aayegi. aaj na rab ka ishara hai sahibaji,

Sahiba cuts in..

Sahiba-nahi..Koi nahi samjhega ..mein kyu kabhi kisi se milne nahi aayi .yeh possible nahi hai..Itne saalo se mein door rahi toh sirf akir ke liye..Mujeh patah hai woh log mujeh aaj bhi khushi khushi wapas apne paas rakhenge..par saath hi saath akir ka sach bhi bahar aayega aur (with anger) angad ko bhi patah chal jaayega

Diljeet- Sab samjhenge... sahibaji mein sach jaanta hoon , mein yeh nahi keh raha hoon ki aap angad se ya koibhi brar family se miliye, mein bas yehi kehna chahta hoon ki shayad waqt aa gaya hai ki aap akeer ki doriyo se wapas apne maike ki dor bandhiye. yeh aapka faisla hoga. mein force nahi karunga.Par ek baar zaroor sochiye.

Diljeet leaves from their giving some time and space to sahiba.

@few days later....

Sahiba informs her decision to visit her parents place. Though she was still a bit reluctant .Diljeet convinces her it was the correct decision.

Sahiba- biji, please akeer ko abhi mat kuch batana ki hum kaha gaye hai aur kyu gaye hai.

Sahiba and diljeet leaves for ludhiana .

@ In ludhiana,

Keerat ,Jasleen and bani were going back to brar house.

Jasleen-keerat , exams aa rahe hai na aur simran ke board ke exams kab se hai ?

Keerat-Bani ke exams ke baad hi hai..Mujeh toh aur tension ho rahi iss baat ki. ,aapko patah hai na Simran pura ghar sar pe utha legi. Awaaz karo toh bhi gussa hojaati hai. Bani ko khelne tak nahi degi simran.

Jasleen- ek idea hai, keerat dekho hame sahiba ke baare mein dhoodhna bhi hai aur woh bhi angad ko patah chale bina ,hum simran ke boards ka faayada uthayenge..

Keerat-matalb??

Jasleen-matalb yeh ki simran ki board ki exams hai toh usse koi disturbance na ho uske liye hum yeh keh denge ki tum aur garry bani ke saath monga house rahoge taaki meri pyaari si gudiya bina kisi rok tok ke khel sake aur hum sahiba ke baare ko dhoodh sake.

Keerat-idea toh bahut hi acha hai. Waise, mom ,mein soch rahi thi kyu na iss baar hum ghar mein guru prakash parv par kirtan rakhe. Jiss tarah se hame finally ek achi news mili hai, ek umeed phir se mili hai toh, yeh rabji ka ishara hai ki hum sahi raaste pe jaa rahe hai.

Jasleen-idea acha hai par brar house mein impossible hai.Tum jaanti ho na angad , yeh sab usse sahiba ko yaad dilaayega issliye monga house mein hi rakhenge.

Here diljeet and sahiba reached near her house lane.

Sahiba was reluctant .So many thoughts were roaming in her mind like 'Was she doing the right thing ?To meet her sister and parents after all this years? How would they react? Will they even recognize her? Will they accept her and akeer?

Sahiba-kya mein sahi kar rahi hoon diljeet ji?

Diljeet-agar aap mere nazariye se dekhengi toh aap bilkul sahi kar rahi hai sahibaji.Aap bilkul bhi tension mat kijiye .Woh aapke apne hai, aur apno se na ,zyada der tak koi naraaz nahi rehta .

Seeing sahiba hesitate a bit..

Diljeet-sahiba ji..ek kaam karte hai mein pehle na check karke aata hoon ki aapke mummy papa aapki chotti behen kaise hai..Phir aap aana..

Sahiba-thik hai,par aapko kuch puch liya toh??

Diljeet- hmmm ek min... ek min ek kaam karta hoon . mein aata hoon( he buys some ice cream)mein yeh ice cream unko dene ke bahane haal chaal bhi puch loonga .Uske baad aap aana..

diljeet leaves...

With each passing min she got restless.

Diljeet- ab in mein se konsa ghar hoga ..? Name plate bhi nahi lagi ki patah chale...

He looks here and there but there were no passerby .whom he could ask.

Fortunately, he found a person who was coming out of a nearby house..

Diljeet- Oye..kake, yeh keerat kaur monga ji ka ghar konsa hai?

P1- woh yeh aapke piche hi hai..unka ghar .

Diljeet-oh acha acha, yeh... par yaha toh tala laga hai yeh food delivery karni thi.

P- ji shayad bahar gaye honge sab ke saath,

Diljeet-(acting) ajeeb baat hai order deke ghar bandh karke chale jaate hai.. ab yeh delivery kisse doon...thank you thank you..

Diljeet waits for few minutes....

sahiba-yeh diljeetji aaye kyu nahi. unhe ghar nahi mila..??ya phir mamma papa ko mana rahe honge?Ya phir keerat ne pit diya hoga..haan yeh ho sakta hai , diljeet ji ki acting itni bakwaas hai toh pakka keerat ne chor ya koi road side romeao samjh ke pit diya hoga,tab toh gaye yeh akeer tere papa ,yeh , sar par mukke pade honge..aur muhh suja ke, aayenge.

Soon diljeet arrives..But sahiba couldnt see anyone behind him.

sahiba-yeh diljeetji akele kyu aa rahe hai??Aur aise khush hote aa rahe hai .aur naachte hue..?Pakka keerat ne buri tarah se kuttai ki hoga .

diljeet- sahibaji aapka aur mera aaj bada badluck aur goodluck hai

Sahiba-kya??aise baat kyu kar rahe hai badluck goodluck hai!! Pakka keerat ne hoga tabhi aapka mansik santulan bigad gaya hai .

Diljeet -areee areee mujeh kisi ne nahi pitaa. aapke ghar pe na tala tha.. toh mil nahi paaya na aapke mummy , papaji aur chotti behen se.. toh hua na badluck

Sahiba- aap sahi ghar toh gaye the na...ya phir kisi aur ke ..ya phir keerat ne aapki kuttai ki ho jiski wajah aap dar gaye hai.

Diljeet-ji nahi

sahiba was now really annoyed..

Sahiba-mujeh kuch samjh nahi aa raha hai..aap please aise paheliya mat bhujaaye

Diljeet-areee sahiba ji hum yeh ice cream enjoy karte hai, aapke family ka intezaar karte hue , woh bas thodi der mein aa rahe hai.

Both sahiba and diljeet relish the ice cream, sahiba told about her good old days ,about her childhood ,days spent with keerat .She also talked about few brar family members who were good too her .

They waited for few hours,

However, when they received a call from biji informing them about twinkle's fracture. They had to leave for panser.

Before leaving, she looked back at her house with the hope of new beginnings .

Almost one and half month pass.....

After bani's exam, as per plan ,keery and bani lived at monga house and jasleen at brar house. They had a very little progress in their search . Keery were able to able get some whereabouts of sahiba when they purchased a mitti ki gudiya for bani. Keerat ,had immediately identified the work by an particular signature pattern of sahiba's name about which sahiba once told her . So Keery decided to find sahiba through her work, they searched almost allover the city to get the name of artist or manufacturer. They couldn't get the name of artist ,but they did get name of probable places from where the they bought dolls on wholesale basis. They were surprised that one of the places was Panesar. Garry contacts diljeet for his help. Diljeet informs him that he would surely love to help him and since they would be coming to ludhiana in few days and then he would help him. Garry agrees.

On Guru Prakash Parv day/Akeer's birthday

Keerat was getting things ready for the Guru Praksh Parv kirtan. Keerat was completing the decoration.

Bani was helping her mother. She was holding small flower basket.

Keerat-phew...finally bani , decoration khatam hogaya , patah nahi didi yeh sab kaise karti hai.

Bani-mummy , dekhona kelu aagaya,chalo usko biscuit khilaate hai...

Keerat- haan .haan .chalo...Papa ke fav jim jam biscuit khilaate hai.

Keerat prayed for her sister and her nephew or niece .And also prayed for Garry, bani and jasleen's well being.

Here on other hand Sahiba tells akeer that today on his birthday , they were going meet and celebrate his birthday with special people and as well as in gurdwara to pray as it was guru prakash parav too .

Sahiba-(to herself)hey babaji,aaj sab sahi karna, aaj mummy ,papa aur keerat se milwana .Mein jaanti hoon aaj sab mujeh se bahut naaraz honge, aur sahi bhi hai itne saalo se door rahi hoon bina bataye. Mein bas aa rahi hoon mummy,papa ,keerat. Milna aapse .aapki daant khaani hai. Aaj na bahut ladna ,daant na ,naraaz hona ..par bas milna aaj .

They all board the bus to ludhiana.

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Phew thats end of Part 4

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Originally posted by: Krish58

I have updated the part..

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Tysm for updating,I really want kerry to meet sahiba